The book goes back to Lillian.
"The Biter! This will be good!"
As she read it, she made a "I regret praising this" face.
"Ok, firstly, the twist was too late. The story feels so dragged."
"Alright, I can improve the pacing."
"Also, ARE YOU MOCKING ME? My classmates call me Lilli at school and if you ever publicise this, I'm suffering all over again."
"Oh right! Lilli is a short form of Lillian! I'm so sorry, please forgive me!"
"You're making me hard to forgive, but I'll read through all of this to decide whether or not I should forgive you."