Disclaimer: This is a work of fanfiction based on the Harry Potter Universe. All recognisable characters, plots, and settings are the exclusive property of Joanne Kathleen Rowling.

I make no claims to ownership, nor am I making any profit.

Author's Notes: I'll be taking a lot of liberty with some canon knowledge of events. Specific facts have been liberally changed to facilitate the plot of the story better.

This story has been an attempt to salvage one of the worst stories ever written. The original work belongs to Tara Gilesbie and serves as the base for this remastered edition.

My Immortal Remastered

By

Ares Alexander Peverell

AJAvenger01

Chapter 3

Original A/N: STOP FLAMMING DA STORY PREPZ OK! odderwize fangs 2 da goffik ppl 4 da good reveiws! FANGS AGEN RAVEN! oh yeah, BTW I don't own dis or da lyrics 4 Good Chralotte.

On the night of the concert, I put on my black high heels and lace boots. Underneath them were ripped red fishnets. Then I put on a black leather minidress with all this corset stuff on the back and front. I put a matching fishnet on my arms, straightened my hair and made it look all spiky.

I had been unable to achieve an Outstanding in my Potions OWL and thus my dream of becoming a Healer had been shattered. Feeling depressed, I looked sadly at my hand and thoughts of slitting my wrists clouded my mind.

I cleared my mind of such depressing thoughts and went outside only to find Draco already waiting there for me in a thestral carriage which had a disillusionment charm cast on it He was dressed in standard wizard robes and even the various little details of his body which I had never given much attention to threw me off balance.

(Original A/N: A lot fo kewl boiz wer it ok!).

"Hi, Draco!" I greeted him.

"Hello Ebony," he softly spoke.

We boarded the thestral carriage which was enchanted to look like a black Mercedes Benz when the disillusionment charm would wear off. On our way, the atmosphere was getting dull so I played one of Good Charlotte's most popular songs while taking a sip of the butterbeer which Draco had brought.

We soon reached the concert hall. We went to the mosh pit at the front of the stage and danced with unparalleled enthusiasm as we listened to Good Charlotte's beautiful,melodic and dulcet voice.

You come in cold, you're covered in blood

They're all so happy you've arrived

The doctor cuts your cord, hands you to your mom

She sets you free into this life." sang Joel

(Original A/N: I don't own da lyrics 2 dat song).

"Joel is so fucking hot," I told Draco while gushing like a fangirl and pointed at him as he sang, and everyone in the club was enthralled by his deep, mellifluous voice.

Draco looked extremely jealous as he clenched his teeth. He looked sullen and gloomy and his cheeks were flushed. His hands formed into fists and he had a pinched expression on his face.

"What's wrong?" I asked as we moshed to the music. Then I soon understood the root of the problem.

"Hey, it's ok I don't like him more than YOU!" I reassured him.

"Really?" he asked sensitively and he put his arm around me in a protective manner.

"Really!" I told him with a smile on my face.

"Besides I don't even know Joel and he's going out with Hilary fucking Duff. I fucking hate that little bitch." I said disgustedly, thinking of the ugly blonde.

The night went on really well, and we had a great time. After the concert, we drank some Firewhisky, asked Benji and Joel for their autographs and managed to get some free GC t-shirts. Draco and I crawled back into the car in a drunken state. We didn't go back into Hogwarts, rather, Draco drove the carriage into the Forbidden Forest!

Ares- I understand the look and style the color Black offers. But this is a plain fetish for the colour. Although, the interaction between Draco and Ebony was somewhat sweet. We tried to change this chapter extensively and I apologize if it didn't match the tone of the original work

AJ- We have attempted to change a lot of things in this chapter. I sincerely apologize if this feels like A different fanfic altogether and if the hilarious aura of the original My Immortal is absent.