Hey folks! I apologize for another AN, I wanted to explain why I haven't posted the 3rd chapter yet. Some personal stuff have drained me both mentally and physically, and it sorta made my mood for writing die a little. But! I'm working on regaining my motivation by both rewatching the story scenes of Arknights, also trying to complete chapter 8, and also playing various games. I'll admit that I've been playing RE Village, so that's been taking some of my time. Anyway, I am still writing on and off so I don't forget what I'm doing.
Anyway, I also want to address some things, as you know my writing style is more like a wall of text like an essay like a reviewer pointed out. The reason for my writing being like this is because its easy for me to write that way, I do take my time to space things so its not one big lump of text. I also take my time to edit with help from my beta, so things flow better. I take some inspiration from the books I've read that are detailed and slow paced, with a build up and nice action scenes or suspense and etc. Example: Rainbow Six, or Jurassic park and JP: Lost world books. I know you guys like what I'm writing because of the amount of viewers, followers and alerts, so I know I'm doing something right, which makes me very happy that you all like this.
Though let me just say this, if you don't have anything good to say please hold your tongue and think if its a good to say it or not, you might end up killing the persons motivation. Like I said in my chapters be constructive with your criticism, please point out what needs fixing, and I'll do my absolute best to fix it. Also to the same certain reviewer, saying that I'm trying and (failed) at writing fanfics is not cool. Granted my history in writing fanfics before this current account is true. But trust me my writing now is helluva lot better than it was back then. Also to the same reviewer, if I need to edit my previous chapters, please point out what needs to be edited or I'll just ignore it. Yes I admit the first chapter is kind of cliché in my opinion, but hey its a reincarnation fic and its the first chapter, its going to be expected. The 2nd chapter fight scene was eh could've done better, and I'll be honest about action scenes, I suck at writing them. Action scenes have never been my forte, but that's why I'm writing, it'll help me improve on writing them, and I'm more of a horror and suspense, or action scenes being over with a quick bullet to the head, or shots to the chest and head. Yeah I'm realistic that way.
Also despite English being my native tongue, and my reading comprehension being high school level, I do have trouble with the language especially in writing, and I am working on going to college to get better at it, along with writing this fic. And hopefully work on other things I need working on besides my writing and English lol. And if you see some spelling errors its either because of my keyboard keys are being dumb, or I've skipped over some words by mistake, and didn't spot them. Even with a beta sometimes things are missed due to how big the chapters are, and we are only human.
On another note, the 3rd chapter has reached the build up part, its still a slow burn, but as I said, its just my style, and I do try and take care to show the characters interactions with people, or at least do my best. Speaking of characters, I'm looking for people to suggest some more names for the people in the new yeti squadron. We have Roe who is her second in command. A lot of the people in the squadron are around their ages, with a mix number of boys and girls. So any names that fit the Rwby verse is welcome, also you can come up with codenames as well! They might just show up in this current chapter or the 4th one and more down the line.