Yeah...I should include some type of gore or lemon in this chapter...I might in this chapter who knows.
Also in case it wasn't obvious, I'm moderating guest comments so if you want to go all out, and be mean to each other, stop acting like a pussy, make an account and pm them and stop hiding behind guest.
Dez Guardius: Best part about Fanfiction is what most people don't use is that you can change any character personality...depending on the story and situation.
Tristen: Glad you like the story.
Guest1: Well I did want her to be paired with Lincoln at first, but decided not to because it became meta...also I notice the lack of good Ronnicoln fics. (Yes I do like the pairing) Also, you should watch more of The Loud House for their relationship. Other than season 1 where Ronnie Anne was introduced.
He23t: OMG he spoiled the chapter...that's it, this chapter is canceled….you my good sir done fucked it up.
Pirohiko-Baltazar: You miss the note there. Also, don't get all super trigger on what some pussy had to say. You made a mistake, and it's fine. Just ignore them and move on.
HoboKermit: Who else cause I hinted at it from the beginning?
TheLostRetard: Sure…
364wii: maybe...as for Rita and Lincoln being an item...Are you high?
Ed from Cicero: I find it amusing that you like the reviews more than the story itself.
Flameas: So let see...For Leni and Lori no Spoiler. For Lynn...why did you think she was arrested in the first place?
DrewHuncho: To be honest...I don't know why either?
Chapter 5
The meeting with Dad
It was 6 am on a bright Monday morning and most of the residents of Royal Woods were getting up to start their day.
Lincoln was in his bed, with his hazel blue eyes gazing at the ceiling to his room. The toy airplanes that hang on the ceiling lightly dangle around. Last night was interesting. After dinner, most of the girls call it a night due to them having school in the morning. Meanwhile, the white-haired man was up, looking up the information his friend Firewall had sent him. He was studying every single article on his target. Her friends, family, her social media, and benefactors. Once he was finished he headed to sleep. He was going to start by visiting his good-for-nothing father, and if possible get his younger sister back.
He went to bed and went to sleep. Due to his training, if anyone opened the door, they would be met with a bullet to the head, and this had happened before. Sadly Lincoln hasn't set up his room, nor didn't pull out his Glock 26 and aim it to the intruder's head. The person who entered was Lisa who was wearing a sleeveless white t-shirt and green panties and just climbed in bed with him and snuggled him. Next was Lana who entered a couple of minutes after Lisa, she was wearing a grey tank top with blue panties. She just climbed over the two and lay on his side, doing the same thing as Lisa was doing, and finally, Lily who just wore her light purple pajamas who climbed up on his and snuggled her older brother.
And throughout the night, they lay there, much to Lincoln's dismay.
He didn't get much sleep since two of his sisters were snuggling him, their chest press against his arms, and Lily quietly resting on his chest. When it came to Caroline it was fine since she wasn't related to him, in fact, most of the time when they do sleep together she would often press her chest against his arm or back.
But there were his sisters.
His blood-related sisters.
Yes, they're beautiful. Or in Lily's case cute.
Yes he didn't see them in ten years, and yes he was happy to see them and they were happy to see him.
Nor did he have any idea that both Lana and Lisa were rubbing her thighs together. Their breaths warm, the two softly painted their brother's name, causing him to blush. Were they having a wet dream about him? Their body heat rose. And Lincoln could feel both nipples poking through the fabric of their clothes. The panting increases with a hand going down between their legs.
If Lily wasn't on top of him surely the two of them would move their hands down his boxer and play with that hard length of his. To feel that hard tool those two have been fantasizing about since they reached their teens. And maybe they could slip his hand down there now wet panties, wanting to feel his touch. But since Lily was here, they couldn't do it. Instead, they just rub their moist pussies since they believe that their big strong brother was asleep.
And getting a whiff of his manly scent.
Their mumbles got louder as well as their moving and breathing more frequently
Despite their younger sister snores the two shivers letting out a whimper in pleasure indicated they had achieved their orgasm.
Once the high the two were expressing died down they both kissed their big brother on the cheek and fell asleep.
Lincoln's face at this point was beet red, having to sleep with three of his sisters, two of them just masturbated with them calling out his name.
'They really must have missed me.' The man thought to himself. Sadly his log was growing, threatening to pitch a tent. Something he didn't want especially with his baby sister on top of him.
'Come on think...think...think...Um, a naked Claudia...Nah...Taylor..' This seems to make his member grow more. 'Ok um, bad idea...Daina in a french maid outfit in a draw me like your french girl pose.' This seems to deflate not only the mood but soften his dick, imaging the headmistress and general in a maid outfit. Tho he could hear her yelling at him, asking in that authoritative tone of hers that she wasn't good enough to be in his imagination and proceed to smoke him for a week.
Now with that out of the way, he had something big on his mind, and that was to confront his father and maybe his father's girlfriend Olivia. He was also going to try to bring Lola back home with him, whether Lynn Sr. and Olivia liked it or not. After what Luan told him of how she threatened the police on them, what she's done to their mother, and what happened to their late grandfather, Lincoln wasn't going to let Olivia do as she pleased.
It was a good thing that boot camp helped him with the skills he needed for such operations. All he needed now is to sleep and if possible try not to pop a boner from the soft pillows clinging to his arms.
He has no idea how his father will react to his son's long-time return home, but right now Lincoln didn't care about it since he was only going to talk to him. Nothing more nothing less.
Lucy came in and saw the predicament her older brother was in, she can also see that her younger sisters Lana, Lisa, and Lily were all in bed with Lily on top of him. And the three snoring peacefully. Lincoln was used to this since he snored as well.
"Good Morning Lincoln." Lucy spoke softly and with a smile seeing that her sisters had sneaked into their brother's room...again. Tho to be honest Lucy was a bit jealous that she wasn't the first one to join him.
"Morning Luce." Lincoln replied as he smiled back.
"What are the three of you doing with Lincoln in his bed?" Lucy asked.
Lana, Lisa, and Lily all woke up to see Lucy in the room, wearing a black robe, with her arms crossed.
"We were sleeping." Lisa replied
"In the same bed as him?" Lucy asked, tilting her head to the side.
"You used to do the same thing, miss gloomy." Lana grinned, making the goth woman blush.
"And you need a bigger bed Linky." Lily spoke, letting out a soft yawn.
"I'll see what I can do...also where are Luan and Luna?" Lincoln asked, still thinking about what his older sister told him of last night.
"They're downstairs eating breakfast with mom...you may have to wait upstairs a bit. Luna won't leave until 9."
"She has a point and considering our music-inclined sister's most recent episode it would be best if you stay upstairs until she leaves for work."
"As for the three of you girls, you have to get ready for school. Especially you Lana, since you have to be at school by 7:45 am." This was ment with groans and the dissatisfaction of them leaving now since Lincoln was back.
"But we want to stay here with Linky." Lily whined.
"I know you do, Lily but it's Monday and I wouldn't want you to miss out on a good education. Beside I'll still be here when you get back." Lincoln said, patting the head of his baby sister.
"You promise." Lana, Lisa, and Lily asked which Lincoln nodded, even extending his pinky finger towards the 11-year-old girl who just hooked her pinky with his.
Then Lily, Lisa, and Lana all left the room to get ready for school, leaving Lincoln and Lucy alone.
"Before you ask...my classes start at noon." Lucy explained. 'Meaning I have five hours to spend time with my beloved brother.'
"Well once Mom and Luna are done having breakfast, you, me, and Luan can have breakfast together, and maybe we can catch up." Lincoln responded only to hear Lucy sighed.
Dang it..but at least it with Luan.'
"Don't tell the others, but around noon I'm heading over to visit dad's restaurant." Hearing what her older brother was gonna do made Lucy worried.
"Lincoln, please be careful."
"I'm not afraid of what dad or his girlfriend can do, they're the ones who have to worry about what I'm gonna do to them. Especially after all the hell, they put you guys through."
"But you heard what Luan said last night, what if they?"
"Those cops won't even get the chance...trust me." Lincoln said winking at his gothic sister who just blushed.
"Please be careful, Lincoln!" Lucy cried, as she hugged her brother tightly. "We...we...really don't wanna lose you again."
Lincoln just waved his hand. "Don't worry Luse...I'll be fine."
"If anything happens to you, please call us as soon as possible."
"I will!" Before he could let go, Lucy presses her soft lips on Lincoln's cheek like before, making the white hair man blush.
Lynn Loud Senior was enjoying life.
He had it all. Several businesses, money, and a hot girlfriend.
And what did he lose?
An ex-wife who was holding him back.
The respect of all of his daughters. And in some cases love.
And a son who couldn't live up to his expectation.
But that was ok.
Because he traded for something better.
Despite that, the only daughter from his previous marriage living with him is Lola now that most of the girls moved out and living their only lives he could now do what he wanted.
Like, have sex with his hot girlfriend whenever in the house the three shared. It is not like Lola cared anymore. There were times when she walked in on them and acted like there weren't in the room. She just comes in, gets what she wanted then leaves before resuming in what he was doing. In the past, he or his ex-wife rarely did this after Lily was born. They would wait until the kids left the rare house, or if they had a day off during the school days which was again rare.
Now with his new younger girlfriend, sex was a content, Morning, Noon, and Night, and sometimes in the restaurant where they work when they weren't busy or on break. The two would often sneak off and fuck each other brains out.
After the divorce, Lynn was devastated. Yes, he was a moron for siding with his daughters but he had a justification for it. Lincoln was a disappointment in his eyes. Yes, he reads comic books, plays games, and interferes with his sister's lives, not to mention starts fights and other stuff. Not to mention planning. He would always have a plan which backfires.
Lynn thought by having a son he could do the things he always wanted to do. Cooking, fishing, catching a baseball, things fathers and sons do. Well, the girls were a priority as well as the jobs he worked in. But Lincoln wasn't interested in any of those. He was never interested in the things Lynn wanted to do.
However, his daughters weren't anything but. Lynn Jr was into sports, and Lynn senior liked some, namely football, and baseball. Luan liked to cook, and he would jam with Luna whenever she wanted her dad to join. Lynn senior actually was the one who got Lori into golfing, with Albert giving her his clubs.
Things had changed after his only son left for boot camp. Luna for some reason stopped playing, and even going as far as to avoid her bandmates, Luan stopped talking to him, and even avoiding him the same with his second youngest Lisa. Leni continued to make clothes but it lacked its normal flare, then there was Lana who slept in various places, but mostly in her brother's room to avoid her twin sister Lola, since she was mad at her for Lincoln being sent to boot camp. Then, Lucy kept knocking on Lincoln's door, asking for help only to realize that he was gone. The only daughters who acted normal were Lori, Lynn Jr., and Lola.
Lynn Sr. didn't bother to talk to them, since he still believed that they were all going through phases and would get over it. Even though he was wrong.
And the constant arguments with his ex-wife who will bring up the failure of a son in each one. And he confessed that he was a failure. That he favors his daughters more than him
At this point, he had broken the hearts of many of his daughters and especially his ex-wife. Lynn left and stood over at his best friend's house, then the next day Lynn senior returned, mostly to collect his things, including the gems he was planning to sell later that day. Along with the money he was making from his restaurant, Lynn Sr. was able to make enough money to at least support himself and possibly find himself a house. However he lost 50% of his things, including money which was thanks to Lisa, he now had 4.2 million dollars, more than enough to live, get a house, and open several restaurants.
Despite the divorce he still managed to take half of his kids. Lori, Leni, Luna, Lynn Jr, and Lola. With his ex keeping Lily, Lisa, Lana, Lucy, and Luan. He moved to a gated community. This house had 3 bathrooms and six bedrooms Enough for his remaining daughters and himself. Not to mention there was a community pool, and park. After moving, things became tense, mostly with Leni and Luna. Though they continued their passions, they didn't have the same motivation as before. Lynn Senior of course didn't care since he believed it was a phase. That's when she appeared.
The woman that became the bane of the Loud girls.
Olivia Cook.
The two met months later after Lynn opened his second restaurant. This one was much bigger than his first location, Lynn was looking for a hostess and she had asked for a management position but his oldest daughter held that position. It wasn't love at first sight but Olivia was strangely attracted to him. She would flirt and send him signals.
It worked and things only got better. Olivia had connections and she used those connections to help open a chain of restaurants, must to his gleam, and within the month he made Olivia his business partner.
As time went on, Lynn Sr. and Olivia had started developing feelings for each other. Mostly since Olivia was a young woman who saw Lynn Sr. for the money he had made from his business and determination. They went out, enjoying time with each other. And eventually, after two weeks of dating, Olivia and Lynn made out, which turn into a full-blown sex session. In the dining room when the girls were out.
And it was the best sex Lynn could ask for. Even though Lynn Sr. was in his 40s and his dick wasn't the same as it used to be when he was with his ex-wife, sometimes he had to use viagra to keep up with her. And sex became a daily part of Lynn's life. Morning, noon, and night.
By day six Lynn Sr. totally forgot about his ex-wife Rita. His only focus now was Olivia, Lori, Leni, Luna, Lynn Jr, and Lola when she returned from Aunt Ruth and his businesses. Nothing else matters to him. However, things change when Lynn Sr introduces Olivia to his five kids. Things seem to be nice, Olivia tries to act like a mother to them giving them advice, beauty tips, and trips to the mall. Lori for the most part saw through the charade
However, most of the five didn't like Olivia at all, and they were suspicious that a young woman in her 20s would be into a man in his 40s without some kind of reason. Normally the sisters would ask Lisa to look at the background information, but she wasn't living with them nor was Lisa speaking to any of them especially Lola. They warn their father but he didn't listen since she provided what Rita could not. He was so satisfied with the money, the business, and the sex that Olivia was giving him that Lynn Sr. didn't even bother listening to any of his daughters, which really pissed them off to the point that none of them bothered to speak to him anymore. Along with the other problems the five of them were dealing with, having their own father ignoring them made things worse.
Olivia overheard this and laughed at Lori, Leni, Luna, and Lynn Jr, saying that they were fools to interfere with their father's life. Making the sisters wince at the time they interfere with their only brother's life.
The eldest Loud daughter however was furious with this, not the mention of her being a hypocrite and doing the same thing with father as she did with her brother, nor the face she insulted each and every one of them, but her break up with Bobby once she told him, and Ronnie Anne the truth about Lincoln. Yes, the two Santiago siblings were mad, but what more was that Lori not only hid the truth but agreed with her other four sisters on the lie Lola told.
Tho Lori and the rest of her sisters regretted their actions and as much as they started to dislike their father, they still love him.
That's when Olivia started to abuse the daughters verbally, calling them failures, loose sluts, and any name that could demoralize them. Despite the father being present he didn't do anything to help out his daughters. As the months passed, Lori moved out and went to Fairway University, followed by Leni who graduated high school and went to Great White Shark University under a fashion scholarship in Great Lake City. Luna, once she found out that Lincoln could be on a battlefield of war, joined the military, clinging to hope that her brother was alive. She didn't tell her father but her mother and grandfather. Each had different reactions.
With Rita, she weeps not wanting to lose another child, while Albert wished her luck and would pray for her when she graduated boot camp.
Lynn Jr was a different story. Lynn became more aggressive and more violent resulting in her being banned from all sports teams for poor sportsmanship. To make matters worse, Lynn Jr. was getting into fights at school every week, due to her temper and that she was being a bully half of the time.
Then one day after coming home from school, Lynn heard the sound of his sister Lola. Even though she had caused all of this Lola was going through some changes, and fear that she might become another Lucy, or worse.
Lynn Jr. heard Lola crying in pain and agony as she heard another sound of a hand hitting something, that's when Lynn ran upstairs and was horrified at what she saw. Olivia was hitting her sister...her little former princess turned goth sister. The former athlete was furious at this sight, Lynn then told Olivia to take her hands off her little sister, but she just laughed in her face saying she needed to be disciplined. This was enough to set Lynn off and attack Olivia, which resulted in a fight between the two. Sadly what Olivia failed to notice that Lynn was a 4-degree black belt in karate and was on a roller derby team. Not only that she was the 2nd strongest member of the Louds right behind Leni.
Unfortunately, Lynn senior and gasp seeing his fifth daughter over Olivia and ready to carve her face in.
Lynn senior rushed in, and pulled his daughter back, preventing her from harming his angel. Olivia in response called the police, when the police came, they immediately took Lynn Jr. into custody, but they didn't handle her like usually trained policemen did, instead they tossed her in the ground, kicked her with one of them aiming their gun towards Lynn's head.
Seeing what was happening to his daughter, Lynn Sr. actually wanted to step in and stop them, but Olivia stood in his way saying this was a part of their job. But regardless, Lynn Sr. didn't want the cops hurting his daughter any worse and was about to step in, until one of the two cops punched him in the gut very hard and held a gun to his head. Even the neighbors who were watching this wanted to stop the two cops, but they shouted at, pointed their guns, and threatened to shoot and kill any of them. They were scared for their lives and for the sake of Lynn Loud Jr. After the beating the two cops picked up Lynn and took her to the station.
What the two cops did to Lynn Loud Jr. caused people in Royal Woods to protest, demanding Mayor Davis and the Royal Woods Police Chief to take action against the two cops who brutally beat down done to both Lynn senior daughters. However, without any evidence there was nothing Mayor Davis or the Royal Woods Police Chief could do.
After that indent, things return to normal other than Lynn's former wife coming toward his new home, fought Olivia, and lose with the ultimate disrespect by fucking in front of his beaten, bruised, and naked ex. A couple of hours later, the former father-in-law came over to kill both he and Olivia, for what they've done to his daughter Rita as well as his granddaughters Lori, Leni, Luna, Lynn Jr., Lola, pretty much all of them, especially Lincoln.
Unfortunately, it didn't go well for Albert, as the two corrupted cops who beat down Lynn Jr. were there waiting for him, but since Albert was in the Navy, he knew how to handle guys like them but what he didn't expect was a taser
They dragged the vet into the car and drove off.
And you should know the rest.
After those hiccups things between Him, his ex, his children and Olivia settle. And life went on, with the notification of Lynn senior-only son moving up levels at the year's progress.
After breakfast, Lincoln agreed to take Lucy to the community college she and Haiku were attending. At breakfast, there was only chatting with Lincoln explaining what he did while he was at boot camp. After dropping Lucy off, he waved towards her and Lincoln drove off to the destination. The once happy white hair man turned into a cold. He knew what restaurant Lynn would be in, and knew the days he and his business partner would work and the time his business opens.
It was noon.
And lunch hour begins. Pulling up to Lynn's Table, Lincoln who was wearing his black business suit and white tie just looked around, He noticed a cop car parked in the parking lot, as well as vanzilla confirming that his dad was inside.
Lynn's Table has totally changed from the past 10 years, it's gotten bigger and Lynn Loud Sr.'s face is now part of the logo on top of the building. Granted this is his second location and the most visited.
'What a narcissist!' Lincoln thought as he walked towards the door. Before the white hair man could enter the restaurant, two caucasian white policemen, one of them looked like a young Charlie Sheen with a smug attitude, a cheesy mustache, and some nasty tattoos, while the other looked like Danny Bonaduce, except he had a buzz cut redhead with no facial hair and a lot chubbier.
"Excuse me." Lincoln said, being polite.
"Watch where you're going, nerd!" said the chubby redhead policeman.
"You know, you don't have to be rude, fatty."
"You watch your mouth, boy!" snarled the policeman, who almost looked like Charlie Sheen.
Lincoln just shrugged and walked inside ignoring the cops. 'Jerks!' He muttered to himself, opening the door, looking around, and checking out the place. Of course, the place was packed but a few people were getting up and leaving their table. Tips were ranging from five dollars per person to 20. Serve waiters and waitresses were walking around in a wood brown short sleeve t-shirt with Lynn's table logo stitched onto the fabric and matching brown pants. Hold glasses for juice, coffee, tea, and soda, while others held food.
'WOW!' he thought to himself, while a 21-year-old blond woman greeted him. "Hello and welcome to Lynn's table." She said in a cheerful tone. "Table for one?"
"Yes, and preferably one near the kitchen."
"Certainly." The waitress grabbed the menu and walked towards one of the polished wooden tables near the kitchen. With the 21-year-old man following. After thanking her he sat down in his seat, the hostess gave him the menu and told him his server would be here soon. As he waited the man could hear the moans on the other side, and from the sounds of it, it sounded like a woman who was screaming out of pleasure. Her words laced with honey and milk added to what was said next.
"Ready for Daddy my Sweet Olive Oil?"
"But what if someone hears us?"
"No one will hear us. Besides no one sits at table 25. Now let's make you a creampie."
"Whatever you say, Master Chief!"
Hearing this made Lincoln want to lose his appetite completely. He knew who one of those voices was his father and the other must be his girlfriend. Lincoln wanted to leave, but he knew he had to go confront his father. So instead, he wanted for his server to come.
"Hi my name is Nikki and I'll be your server today, can I start you off with a drink sir?"
"Yes please, I'll take a light Cherry Coke."
"Yes sir!"
After his server left, Lincoln just leaned back while listening to his dad and girlfriend fucking each other. It was making him sick to his stomach.
'Really wish I was somewhere else right about now...kinda don't want to hear my dad fucking someone's brains out.' The man thought with Nikki returning with a glass cup with a straw on it.
"Have you decided on what you want to order sir?"
"I have...I'll start with some Lynn wings." He then removed the straw from his cup, as he slowly drank his cherry coke. "Also can I speak with the owner if possible?" This question seems to make Nikky's eyes darted from side to side.
"I'm sorry but Mr. Loud isn't in at the moment." Lincoln knew she was lying. Instead of asking for a number or anything, the white hair man ball up his fist and banged the wall, much to the surprise of everybody in the dining room, and kitchen.
"Is there a problem, sir?"
"No, but I believe the owner is here. So can you please get him?" The server knew now that she would get in trouble if she went and get her bosses. Lincoln just kept looking at her. Waiting to see if she'll go and get him or tell him another lie. "Well."
"Uh!"
"If you're not going to help me out I guess I can go back there, and drag his bald head out."Lincoln got up from the table and headed towards the kitchen, only for the server to stop him."
"Whoa, hold on Mr. Loud and Miss Cook don't want to be bothered but...if."
"I don't care..just tell him that his son wishes to speak with him."
Nikki knew that she was stuck between a rock and a hard place, She could deny him and ask him to leave but what to say he wouldn't just go into the kitchen, and from the look in his eyes, he could easily do so. "I'll tell him, but if you wanna talk to him, please come back later sir." Lincoln was not happy about this and was about to march in there to drag his father out.
But Lynn senior was standing in front of the kitchen. In the past ten years, the only thing that changed was the color of the remaining hair he had was a light shade of gray. He wore his usual green sweater with a plaid green dress shirt and brown pants. Next to him was a 33-year old woman. Her hair was black, and she wore a white tube top with a black skirt reaching down towards her knees. What was notable was that the clothing was unkempt, with Lynn having multiple lipstick marks on his face.
"What is going on out here?" Lynn spoke but fell silent when he saw his son. His hair had grown longer but kept that cowlick of his. He was also wearing a black suit and tie, granted it was white.
"Hello, Father!" Lincoln said emotionlessly.
"Lincoln?"
"Surprise to see the failure of the family still alive and well?" Lynn Sr. was at a loss for words seeing his son for the first time after ten years.
"So you're Lincoln...Your father has told me a lot about you." Olivia said with a smile, then playfully punched her boyfriend in the shoulder. "Why didn't you tell me he was as handsome as his father. And the white hair adds to his uniqueness." His eyes then fall towards the black-haired woman. It held no emotions, no anger, or malice. It was a void.
"Why thank you...Miss Olivia."
Lynn Sr. was in shock "H-H-How did you."
"I have my ways Dad...but namely I spoke with Luan and the others, and I heard about everything you and Olivia put them and mom through. Including Lola."
"I don't know what you are talking about. But I never touch Lola, or anyone really." Olivia said convincingly, evening adding a smile, though it was obvious that she was lying. And Lincoln knew this.
"You don't need to lie to me, Olivia."
"Well, that bitch of a mother got what she was coming." Lincoln breathed in softly, inhaling through his nose, and exhaling in the same way, a technique he learned to keep calm.
"And what reason did you touch my sister for?"
"That little emo brat needs to learn her place." Despite his calm dementor, Lincoln was searing with anger from that response.
"And what about you dad...still think Everybody is going through a phase? Or are you too busy pounding the slut of American to notice your kids or that she is sucking everything from you?"
"Ohhhhhhhhhh!" gasped everybody in the restaurant, some of the staff chuckling, but quickly went silent when Olivia gave them a cold glare, despite her face being red.
"Tell me when was the last time you spoke to your daughters? Or sat down and talked to Lola?"
"Enough Lincoln!" Lynn screamed. "Not even 10 seconds, and you already show how much you mature in the past ten years. You haven't changed Lincoln." Normally this would shock the only son of the Louds to the core, but after listening to what Luan and the others had said, and being sent to boot camp over a lie, this wasn't surprising. Lincoln only continued to stare blankly at his father. "You come into my restaurant and insult my girlfriend of ten years. Not only that besides the suit and tie you show nothing. No talent, no job, well after the display you showed I'm not even going to hire you."
"I wasn't going to ask you for a job dad." Lincoln calmly stated that it was cold. So cold that both Lynn and Olivia shiver. "in fact I never dreamed of working with you in the first place. Besides, after the place you sent me, and what happened to Pop-Pop...I rather see you burn. And when the ashes settle you will realize your mistake as everyone you thought you loved turns their back on you." He then turns his glaze over to Olivia. "And as for you, Miss Cook...I know all about you. And those who work under you. I will have you know when the time is right when you have nobody to turn to. I will be there, and I will have the means to end it all Miss Cook." Taking another drink from his coke he placed the glass down on the table. "I'm also taking my sixteen-year-old goth sister."
"Oh no you won't...Lola is still under my custody. I won't." But Lynn was cut off.
"And where were you when my sister Lynn was being brutalized by the fuzz...those same two dumbasses I passed by before entering? Huh...It's clear to me that you are not fit to be a father, and I'll do what it takes to protect my sisters...even if it means killing you dad." Once Lincoln was done, he turned and walked out. Before he took a couple of steps towards the door, he turned and looked at his father. "It won't matter who you sent Miss Cook. Lola won't be going back with you or my father."
Lincoln then walked towards the exit, got in his car, and drove off, leaving Lynn, Olivia, and everybody stunned their mouth agape.
So this is the end of this chapter here, and yeah things aren't looking good in the upcoming chapters for Lynn and Olivia. Also yes I know...so please don't point out the bs in this chapter.
I also want to thank The Amazing Ghost Musician for helping me and coming up with most of the ideas.
Now I'm going to talk about my story.
I had a different vision for this story.
One; Olivia was never being the antagonist in this story. In fact, no one is...the original plan was to be something akin to A Loving Return by Devumaru. Lincoln gets sent to boot camp, comes back ten years later, finds that his family broken up, and recollects with them while being contracted to take out some people. One of the sisters finds out, which would open a whole can of worms. In stories like this, it's kind of a thing where Lynn Sr. is the punching bag and all, but I kind of want a story where he's redeemable. But that's not going to happen in this story.
Like Luna staying with Rita and her other sisters despite having PDST.
The original was that she would stay with her father since anything belonging to her brother would trigger an episode. But that was scrapped.
And yes I did want Lincoln to have a harem...somewhat of four people. You know the three are while the fourth is up for debate.
Well, he's going to have one...as meta as that is. And spoil alert for those who forgot...Caroline isn't in the harem. She will make a later apprentice in the later chapters when Lincoln goes to Great Lake City for something.
Yes, there will be incest because some of you are sick fucks(I don't care if it had incest or not)...And no The Amazing Ghost Musician is not helping me on that front.
Now since that's out of the way...A Dangerous Loud Family will be coming back, I'm just thinking of the age for Lincoln and the others will be. If 11 then there will be a sequel involving the sin kids. If not then too bad. As for the other stories I have...I have to run that by a beta reader.
Anyway see you soon.
