Disclaimer: This is a work of fanfiction based on the Harry Potter Universe. All recognisable characters, plots, and settings are the exclusive property of Joanne Kathleen Rowling.

I make no claims to ownership, nor am I making any profit.

Author's Notes: I'll be taking a lot of liberty with some canon knowledge of events. Specific facts have been liberally changed to facilitate the plot of the story better.

This story has been an attempt to salvage one of the worst stories ever written. The original work belongs to Tara Gilesbie and serves as the base for this remastered edition.

Warning: This chapter contains adult content and a poorly written lemon scene. Reader discretion is advised.

My Immortal Remastered

By

Ares Alexander Peverell

AJAvenger01

Chapter 4

Original A/N:I sed stup flaming ok ebony's name is ENOBY nut mary su OK! DRACO IS SOO IN LUV wif her dat he is acting defrent! dey nu eechodder b4 ok!

AN: "DRACO!" I was confused and in desperate need of answers from him, so I shouted on impulse. "What the fuck do you think you are doing?"

My action didn't have the desired effect as Draco didn't answer me although he stopped the flying car before walking out of it. I walked out of it too due to my curiosity.

"What the fucking hell? Why did we stop here, Draco," I snapped.

"Ebony?" he breathed.

"What?" I questioned him.

Draco leaned in so close to my face that I could feel his breath on my neck. The simple state of him almost rattled me - subtleties I never gave a lot of consideration to previously. The unbending bends of his face, the profundity of his eyes, the discrete but solid circular segments of muscle underneath his unadulterated dark shirt. I felt my cheeks getting warmer and immediately tossed my raven hair sideways. My heart was racing and eternity passed for me as my eyes were fixated on his gothic-red eyes glinting with so much sorrow and depression that suddenly all the anger I felt towards him evaporated.

No words came out from either of our mouths and just as the popular saying goes, eyes are the windows to the soul. We stared at each other's eyes and understood what the other wanted to say.

I felt ages pass by and out of the blue, Draco abruptly pulled me close to his body as my breath hitched in my throat. I don't know who initiated it but both of us leaned forward and eventually our lips crashed against each other.

I felt as if the liquid fire was running through my veins, burning me from the inside with each thrust.

I whined in pleasure. I was beginning to experience an orgasm and my facial expression was one of ecstasy mixed with excitement. We started making out while embracing each other's body, and my usually pale body started warming up as sweat started dripping down me. Our passion was at its peak when….

"WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING, YOU MOTHERFUCKERS!" came the scream.

A voice—one of a person they were rather used to hearing during their school years, bellowed.

It belonged to Albus Dumbledore, his blue eyes no longer twinkling merrily but glinting with anger, and disappointment.

Ares- I've never read such a hilarious attempted lemon scene. So Dumbledore likes to curse. What else would be further? Harry Potter is also a bloodsucking Vampire and loves Draco of all things. Still, we had fun writing the lemon scene, although it was mostly AJ since my lemons would've been mostly explicit and I don't plan to write lemons as for now.

AJ- Damn...That lemons scene was so hard to write. Like it was impossible to write it with a straight face and especially hard for me considering I am a person who is yet to experience the pleasures that the two characters experience in this chapter.