Hey everyone, Poke'boy24 back with the next Chapter of Alien Maelstrom since a lot of you had been waiting for this after a whole year as this will be based around the Episode 'Tourist Trap' but like always there will be some slight changes.
Also I've decided to change the name of Naruto's Kinecelerian/XLR8 form from Rapturbo to Slipstream as well give you other Characters next to their names so you'll know what/who their voices sound like.
Kaima/Naruto Ripjaw's form- Terrafin from Skylanders
Kusa/Naruto Wildvine's form- Shaggy's Ghost Uncle from Scooby Doo meet the Boo Brothers
Tengu/Naruto Thanagarian's form- Vulture from Batman the Brave & the Bold
Blizzard/Naruto Arctiguanna's form- Gill-grunt from Skylanders
Override/Naruto Upgrade's form- Preceptor from Transformers G1/80's Cartoon
Hanta/Naruto Sotoraggian's form- Blastoff from Transformers G1/80's Cartoon
Slipstream/Naruto Kinecelerian's form- Sonic from Sonic-X
Ghoul/Naruto Ectonurite's form- Zs'Skayr from Original Ben 10
Inferno/Naruto Pyronite's form- Heatwave from Transformers Rescue Bots
Brawl/Naruto Tetramand's form- Brawn from Transformers G1/80's Cartoon
Now that you know the vocals, time for the Reviews.
SonicBlast4444: Yes Tenten will appear and yes she will be an Alien but you'll have to wait to see.
Jajur von Hohenzollern: Glad you like this and yes I'll try to continue this as I can.
thewittywhy: Thank you for enjoying this and as for your questions, yes Anko will be a part of Naruto's Harem and yes there will be a Naruto vs. Batman scene as the Story progress.
alkirus: Thanks for the info, but I won't be using your suggestion of turning Naruto into a Kryptonian Woman as that would be weird since Naruto's a Male so all this Alien form will also be Male.
Brandedcolt: Updates depends on what I can think of since I also have other Stories to work on as well so you'll have to wait to see what gets updated.
HalloweenJackal0w0: I couldn't think of a longer lemon between Mary and Killer Croc since I focus my Lemon writing for the Main Characters and their Lovers, but yes the Killer Croc is from Arkham Knight.
herob2301: Thank you since many Trolls/Haters can be big babies sometimes fussing over something they don't like and just expect people to change things just because they whined about it as they just don't understand the simple fact which is 'Don't like, then don't read' but hey, they're babies.
Fox Boss: Didn't know or heard of the Character as I was thinking more like the Bird-people from the ThunderCats remake from a couple years ago.
SPeCTeR-ll7: Yes there will be DC Heroines/Villainesses in the Harem.
thunderofdeath97: The Harem will have to wait as I'm still deciding so you'll have to wait for that.
Trace Reading: If you didn't like, well that find because this is MY Style of writing but the second comment was completely uncalled for because from what I could see is that it just showed you're an immature jerk who has no life of their own.
Skull Flame: No, no one is safe from the terrors that are Yanderes.
Now that's out of the way let get onto the Story and remember that I DON'T own Naruto or Ben 10 or DC Nation or any other Characters/Elements that may appear in this Fic.
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Driving down the dusty Highway road within their RV Naruto was writing down in his Notebook with Kushina was texting her friends back home asking how their Summer was going.
"Okay you two, we're almost at our next destination." Mito said as she turned the next exit as the Family was nearing the next stop of their Road-trip.
"I can't wait to get to Sparksville. So far this Vacation had brought a lot of surprises to them from Robots to Aliens, to Robbers and Super Villains, so a visit to a quiet Tourist Town will be kind of relaxing." Naruto said with a breath of relief because the Town was so quiet and peaceful that no Villain would ever bother going to a boring Tourist trap.
"Yep, and I can't wait to see their Exhibits as a little peace and quiet would be very nice." Kushina stated since this Family outing won't be like last time with Killer Croc since what Villain wants to attack a dull boring Town like Sparksville anyways?
/ /Meanwhile, somewhere else/ /
"WWWWWHHHHOOOOOOAAAAAA-AAAAAAAHHHHHHH! ! !" a shrivel Male voice screamed out as an obese Man with long greasy Ginger-Orange hair and Chops and a big Black Monobrow as well a couple pimples around his pale cubby face as he was wearing an Cosplay outfit of a Character from a Sci-fi Space Film.
This Man is Control Freak, a sad Villain Wannabe as he was running from his angry Landlord as he was several Month overdue on rent.
"And stay out you Greasy Deadbeat!" the Landlord yelled shaking his fist as he lost the bum who owe him money before stomping back to his Apartment Building to either throw out or sell the Deadbeat's stuff.
Popping out of the Dumpster in the Alley by a Department Store, the Wannabe climbed out before falling face-first as he started sulking. "Great, now how am I going to be recognized as a Villain now?" He complained as he now only have two options, either live like a fancy-dressed Alley Cat, or get a job as that last option made him shuttered at the thought.
"{If ya Folks are tired of seeing the same old same old City, then ya'll come on down to Sparksville.}" a monotone Male voice said getting Control Freak's attention as he got up to see a commercial play on the Tvs in the display window of the Store. "{We got the Largest Attractions ya have ever seen}" the voice said as pictures of different large items appeared before continuing. "{We even have 'IT' as ya'll will have a ball with 'IT' as long as ya mind the Signs.}" the commercial then ended with flashy Question marks with 'IT' written on the screen before showing the Town's Sign as a wicked grin appeared upon Control Freak's greasy face before turning to the Fourth wall.
/ /Control Freak's Fourth wall moment/ /
"Well Folks, look like I'm going with choice Number Three where I'll steal 'IT' and then ransom 'IT' for a boat load of sweet sweet Mula." I said rubbing my hands together at the thought of how must money I could get from stealing and ransoming that Town's prized attraction. "Oh hohoho~ I can just imagine the awesome Movie merc I can buy with that much money. Freak Out!" I exclaimed grabbing out my Remote and with a press of a button I'll be there in a zap.
/ /End of Fourth wall moment/ /
/ /Chapter 5: Live from Sparksville/ /
"Okay Kids, we'll here!" Mito cheered as she stopped the RV as the Uzumaki Family stepped out as they took in a breath of fresh air as they looked over the Town.
"Finally, a place like this is less of a magnet for trouble." Naruto said stretching his arms behind his head as it would great to actually take a break for some actual Family time.
"Yeah, though I wish the Diner had a better shogun." Kushina giggled covering her mouth as she pointed towards the Building with a giant Hotdog and Ketchup bottle that had 'Pick a Weiner' written under it as it had a lot of different meanings as her little Brother and Grandmother began chuckling as they also had their own thoughts of that slogan.
"Welcome to Sparksville folks. My name is Earl, the Mayor, and let me welcome you to our fare Town seekers of Wonder." A dull monotone Male voice greeted as the Uzumaki Family turned to see a Man in his 40s with Light-Brown hair and Blue eyes dressed in a Sky-Blue Suit with a White Under-shirt, Black Bolo-tie, and Brown Loafers.
"Well… You kids enjoy some of the sights and I'll catch up to you after I've checked us in." Mito suggested placing a hand on both her Grandchildren's shoulders getting both of them to nod as she handed them some Tickets before heading towards the Motel.
"So Onee-san, which Exhibit do you want to see first?" Naruto asked as they walked towards the Ticket-booth.
"Hmm… I don't know…" Kushina pondered as she doesn't know what to see first.
Once they made it to the Ticket-booth, both Siblings notice Earl now wearing a Grey Cap. "Tickets please." He asked in his dull bored voice.
"Wait, I thought you were the Mayor?" the Blonde sibling asked as he handed their tickets to him.
"Those who wear the Crown are burden with many Hats." Earl simply said tearing the tickets as the Uzumaki Siblings remembered that this Town was built to attract Tourist so it makes sense that they might be under staffed. Stepping aside the Mayor allowed them in but now before giving them one little bit of advice. "Mind the Signs." He simply stated as both Siblings nodded and entered.
/ /Motel/ /
"Thank you for the Room because I know my Grandkids are going to really enjoy this new sleeping experience." Mito said looking over the entire Room which makes the phrase 'Bedside Manor' all the more literal since it was literally on its side.
Setting the bags down she exited the room to go meet up with her Grandchildren, not noticing the Box-cable Television sparking as Control Freak zapped right out of the Old-school Entertainment device.
"Whoa-WHOOOOAAAAA! !" he stuttered loudly once noticing that he was on the wall of the room before falling over before realizing that he hadn't hit the floor was then he notice that the room was actually built this way. "Stupid Theme Motels." He grumbled as he hates places that use obstacle illusions as their theme.
/ /Control Freak's Fourth wall moment/ /
"Ugh, this is why I hardly ever leave my couch." I complained since this Vertical Room theme was seriously irritating and now I feel like gagging. "There will be time to barf later, because for now, I have 'IT' to steal. But first…" I paused with a slide smirk as I whipped out my Remote and press a button as it zapped the Room's entire furniture as they started to come alive. "Now you folks enjoy some Bedside entertainment while I try to locate 'IT'." I said with a grin as this terrible room will be good for one thing after all.
/ /End of Fourth wall moment/ /
/ /With the Uzumaki Family/ /
After checking there Motel room, Mito caught up with her Grandchildren who were standing in front of the World's largest Fish bowl as Naruto was deep in thought.
"Hmm… How much Ramen do you think that Bowl can hold?" he questions as he imagine gallons upon gallons of Ramen being poured into the bowl along with the World's largest Toppings and Chopsticks landing on top before he was shaken from his daydream by his older Sister.
"Still thinking about Ramen, huh Naru-chan hehe~" Kushina giggled before the sound of her stomach growling interrupted causing to blush with embarrassment.
"Guess I'm not the only one thinking about Ramen, aye Tomato-chan~" Naruto said with a teasing grin upon seeing the Redette's blushing face which soon changed from embarrassment to annoyance as steam huffed from her nose as she quickly grabbed the younger Blonde and started noogieing him hard.
"Okay calm down you two since It's almost close to Dinner time." Mito said as a small smile graced her lips from seeing her two Grandkids getting along as nothing could possibly ruin this moment.
CRASH! !~
"""GRROOOOAAAARRR! !/SCCCCRRREEEEEEEEECH! !~"""
"""Oh FUCK!/COME ON?!/Dammit!""" the Uzumaki Family exclaimed frustrated as their day of relaxation is once again ruined as they turned to see…
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…A bunch of walking Furniture?
"Now that there is something ya don't see every day." Earl stated plainly as he watch a bunch of Bedroom Furniture literally break down the wall of the Motel from Beds to Drawers to Lamps and even the Toilet. "We have Signs that tell people not to take Motel Property, but never think that Motel Property would escape on its own." He added as he sat down on a Bench and started sipping on a Soda.
"Okay, is it just me, or is this Summer just starting to get weirder by the day?" Kushina questioned as they saw the Toilet charging at them while the rest of the Furniture Monsters were attacking the Town's Residents and other Tourists.
"FFFFlllluuuuuuuuussssssssshhhhhh-Gggrrr-GGGGRRRRRR! ! !" the Toilet Monster flushed-roared before spitting out a blast of water from its bowl/maw.
Getting in front of her Grandkids, Mito summoned up an energy barrier to shield them from the blast. "Ewww… No wonder that thing is grumpy. Whoever used it last forgot to flush." She said in disgust as the Monster's attack contained some nasty bits.
"Well that Toilet is about to get a nasty case of explosion Diarrhea." Naruto stated as he activated the Omnitrix before cycling through a few Aliens before pressing the Faceplate down as he was covered by the blight Orange light.
/ /Alien Transformation Sequence begin/ /
(AN: Look back at Chapter 1 for the Sequence because I cannot do this repeatedly for every Alien he had already turned into.)
/ /Alien Transformation Sequence end/ /
"So what do you call this guy?" Kushina asked seeing that her Brother changed into the first Alien that started that Forest Fire last week.
"I liked to call this guy…"Naruto paused creating a Fireball between his Magma hands before dashing from behind the Mana barrier. "…INFERNO!" he then exclaimed hurling the Bowling-ball sized Fireball towards the Toilet Monster who Flushed-roared before being blown to pieces once the Fireball made contact.
"Ugh! Burned Toilet smell!" the younger Anodite gagged as what was left of that Toilet was now the stench of fried poop.
"""GRROOOOAAAARRR! !/SCCCCRRREEEEEEEECH! !~""" the rest of the Monsters cried out seeing their friend destroyed as they all started charging towards the Family.
"You guys feel like doing some renovation work?" Inferno asked getting the two Female Aliens to nod as some Mana enveloped around their hands. "Then let wreck some Furniture!" he declared as a Bed Monster pounced towards him as he incased his fist with fire and punched right through the Monster before setting it on fire as in burned to ash.
"Remember what I've taught you Sweetie." Mito said towards Kushina as both Anodites used the Mana in their hands to create Whips that they used to flick and smash some of the Monsters.
Meanwhile, Earl was sitting on the Bench not even bothered by what was happening in front of him. "I've been needing to get new Furniture for the Motel anyway." He said blankly as he took another sip of his Soda as he watched the one-sided fight taking place right before him.
/ /With Control Freak/ /
With his Monster Minions were busy distracting the people, the Ginger-haired Couch-potato was free to steal 'IT' as he saw the Barn where 'IT' was contained which wasn't that difficult to find since there was a very helpful sign leading to 'IT' as he rubbed his hands together excitedly.
/ /Control Freak's Fourth wall moment/ /
"Hehe~ Soon, 'IT' will be mine, all mine HAHAHAHA! ! !" I laugh triumphal before opening the doors and enter but not before seeing the signs. "No Touching 'IT', No taking Pictures of 'IT', No using any/or all Electrical Devices near 'IT'. HA! Like I'm going to let a couple dumb signs tell me want I can or can't do." I laughed as I've seen the giant curtain with 'Here 'IT' is' written on the sign in front.
"Oh-ho~ Finally, I Control Freak, Master of Media, and greatest Villain of Jump City, had now stolen 'IT'!" I declared pulling down the curtain.
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"WHAT THE HECK?! 'IT' is just a stupid Rubberband Ball! ! !" I yelled out in frustrated as I looked at 'IT', and 'IT' is just a giant stupid ball made from Rubberbands! "No Hero will take me seriously if I steal this stupid junk pile of Office supplies!" I exclaimed before whipping my Remote out as I aimed it at. "Sparksville, your great attraction has been cancelled!" I declared pressing the button as my device launched a beam that would permanently delete that stupid thing for good!
/ /End of Fourth wall moment/ /
Once the beam hit the Rubberband ball, the electricity danced around the surface before being absorbed into the mass sphere.
"Delete!" Control Freak declared pressing the button again only for the second beam to be absorbed just like the first. "Delete! Delete!" he called out again hitting the button two more times only for those beams to be absorbed too. "Delete! Delete! Delete! Delete! DELETE! DELETE! DELETE! ! !" he screamed out as he shot rapid barrages of beams at the Rubberband before screaming out in frustration and chunked his Remote at it.
As soon as the Remote made physical contact, the entire surface of the Rubberband ball began sparking with electricity. "That's something you don't see every day." The Villain Wannabe said slowly backing up as something shot out from within the giant sphere zipping around the Barn before charging towards him.
/ /Control Freak's Fourth wall moment/ /
"EEEEEEEEEOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWW-HHOOOOOOOWOOOOOOOOO! ! !" I cried out like a Cartoon Cat in pain as something zipped towards me so fast I didn't even know what hit me. "Well Folks, here's a Live-lesson for everyone. If someone or something gives you a super wedgie, make sure you're not wearing your limited edition ones." I wheezed out as tears leaked from my eyes from the pain I was feeling from being hung from the Barn window by my limited edition Galaxy Trek Underwear as the elastic was now being stretched thin.
/ /End of Fourth wall moment/ /
/ /With the Uzumaki Family/ /
After a very short and one-sided fight, the Family trio managed to destroy every last Furniture Monster.
"Well we've checked in, but the Furniture checked out." Inferno stated looking at all the bits of broken and burnt pieces of the Furniture Monsters.
"But the only question that remains, who brought them to life, and why?" Mito questioned since the only reason for this kind of distraction was to steal something.
"Guess we will never know since Sparksville doesn't have anything worth stealing anyway." Kushina said just as beeping was heard before Inferno flashed Orange changing back into her little Brother.
"Well, can we can at least try to enjoy the rest of our visit tomorrow." Naruto suggested as the two Redettes nodded as they headed to the Motel to check into another room as well rest up.
"Well, look like I can finally do that remodeling I've never got around to doing." Earl said getting up from the Bench before heading back towards his office to look at some Catalogs to rebuild the Model room with a new theme to help keep things for interesting for Tourist.
Will everyone doing their own things, neither of them noticing a zigzagging bolt of electricity heading skywards.
/ /Up in the Air/ /
Zipping and sagging through the air was a small Black and Yellow Creature that looked like a Battery with stubby arms with three-digit hands and legs with no feet, and a Crazy expression on its face with its big electrifying eyes and big goofy grin as it chackle madly as it was ready to unless a series of 'Pranks' upon the Town.
SWOOOOOSSSSHH! !~
SNAP-Click~
Only for something to fly behind it as the Electrical Creature fell towards the ground trapped within a non-conductive cage.
"Hey Boss, we snag another one!" a Gruff Male voice said as a Man wearing Biker-style clothing.
"Excellent work my Hench-Bro. Another little Sparker for own collection." An even Gruffer sounding Male voice said before picking the cage up and placing in the back in an Armored Jeep with dozens of other cages with these Creatures inside. "Now Bros, let split this snore-fest." He ordered hitting the Jeep a few drives as they drove away.
/ /In the Barn/ /
Still hanging from his underwear, the greasy buffoon could only hanged as the Sun started to set.
"Umm… Hello? Anybody? Awesome Villain needs help getting down from here!" he called out for help as he was left there for the entire night until the next morning when the waistband of his underwear finally gave out.
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And there's another chapter is finally done and yes I know it's short but I've been having some technical difficulties with my Ben 10 Original Series DVDs where some of the Episodes keep glitching or my Player having an 'Disc Error' so yeah, obstacles in the inspirational stream.
So to make up for lack of action I've decided to go to a more Comedical route by using a Character we can all laugh at.
Another thing is that I'm only doing Transformation Sequences for Naruto's Aliens only once as I can't keep going back to each Chapter what with Cloudflare and everything and so far the only seen the Sequences of Seven Aliens with only Hanta, Slipstream, and Override not having Sequences of their own let which begs the question.
"Should I do an Alien Bio Page to go along with their Sequences, or not?"
So don't forget to Review and vote as I'll have the Poll up on my Bio.
See you all next and remember to stay safe and Trolls/Flames with be vaporized by Mito and Kushina's Mana blasts.