how is this series doing and how could it be improved anyway.

Sky bridge hospital 3 days latter

Spyro and the others are in the hospital beds. Spyro awakens and has a look around confused wondering what had happend and why he was in the hospital. Spyro "huh where am i? what happend? and why is my side in Ahh! pain?"

the mabu "well sir you seem to have had a major accedent and well you are lucky to be alive." Spyro "what do you mean lucky to be alive? i am the chosen one i have slain fire vipers with my 2 own hands and beaten the devils trials and your telling me i need asistence." (with Spyro's voice geting heavier and agressive) mabu "um sir just calm down we can work this out.)

Spyro's mum walks in Spyro's mum "Spyro are you ok how do you feel?" Spyro "mum uhhh ... well i feel quiet alright and whats going on here? why is there a constraint suit on me?"

Spyro's mum "well you are alright i dont think your friends are doing as good and as for the constraint suit you lets say were in a very destructive state. literally" Spyro what do you mean my friends aren't doing as good as i am. they are probably at the academy or somthing arnt they?"

Spyro's mum says to the mabu to take the suit off. then says "Spyro if you can follow me ill show you what happend but first what was the last thing you can remember?"

Spyro "umm let me think oh yes i was teaching my class reflexes and then i came home to Cynder and helped her with her garden. i then made dinner and sat down with cynder and ate then ... (he pauses) the room went black and all i could hear was Cynder crying in the background with another voice. that was not anyone i knew but was very familiar and then she kept going on about how she would banish and destroy everyone i knew then i seen her. a figure that just stood there and was quiet similar to well how would i put it a pure black mist. this time only it had a physical form that looked like it was the body of a dragon but the head of a snake.it then gained a strain hold on me and i well tryed to blast her as she threw Cynder into the void and it changed form again. then it was more like a fox that was hybrid with grizzly bear. i then Charged up a dark beam as i was furious and and ... thats all i remember"

Spyro's mum "well your friends are at room 728 and your father is better to he is just sleeping at home." as Spyro takes the suit off and gets out of bed he then realises that there is a cut on him he then goes ow!

Spyro says wait how did this happen? i am inpenatrable."

malefor walks in and says "what have you done to my daughter? why would you send her to the emergency room?" as he begins to break down in tears and anger

Spyro "what do you all mean i honestly have no clue what you are... (he pauses yet again to realize or at least think. the women had actually pushed Cynder off in to the void and something happened to her. he now thinks it is he's fault because he swar to protect her more then him self.) wait she is in the emergency room. ima destroy that woman who ever she is im going to hunt her down and end this once and for all."

malefor "what are you on about" with the look and if he had seen sombody that was insane Spyro's mum "ah can i talk to you. she then exsplains everything as Spyro rushes to see everyone and Spotlight sitting right beside Blackout saying it is going to be alright.

Spyro "what In eons beard happend." Spotlight "you don't remember you single handedly sent everyone here. you went dark and beserk. I don't know the rest but you did this and that cut on you was also you.

Spyro changes a healing electric beam then shocked everyone. Blackout, eon and stealth elf had awoken and were all confused as to what happend. while everyone else stayed in a coma Spyro "why was... (huff) that so straining"

Spotlight "thank God you are not dead." and she hugged Blackout Spyro walks up to Cynder and looks at her. in the worst state out of everyone as she is on life support.

Spyro "did I do this hey can you guys tell me what happend and why we are all here and why Cynder is like this?" Blackout I can "you were in some sort of insane dark and destructive mood you did not stop and well you didn't even acknowledge us at all."... (as he exsplains the rest of the story)

a few hours latter

Blackout "the last thing I remember seeing was a black figure in front of well you Spyro. controlling you like some sort of puppet. then it's all pitch black from there" Eon and Malefor "wait you seen a black figure in front of Spyro." Spyro "when did you get in here?" as he looks at malefor with a concerned look. Malefor "a while ago but that is not the point. what do you mean a black figure?"

Blackout "like a woman standing in front of Spyro. i didn't get a clear glimpse but it was defenenly what was making Spyro crazy. in fact it looked a lot like Sprocket"

Spyro "ok so i was not crazy thank god. sombody else seen the black woman that was tormenting me... so what now?"

Eon "well then now we have to know who or what we are up against. until then lets search the academy for a sighn or anything that could tell us anything on what we are facing... and I'm going to question Sprocket? now to the academy!!!"

end of chapter 6

this is a lot of fun and i will at least try to upload once a week thanks