Author's Note
So first I must apologize for just a author's Note even after that previous month update on the last chapter. but continuing on...
To the comments I didn't respond to bc I actually was unsure how to actually respond by commenting on this story or private messaging...that certainly confused me.
Guest: I think what went through my small almond brain when I wrote that was that she wasn't sure how they, rayna and Montain, could change his future without huge/grave consequences after that.
And the fact that they were a clone trooper too as well and wasn't sure if she could change anything at all but because, in my opinion, I never fleshed her out in previous chapters successfully and wrote it a bit dull, it felt like she kinda just went- welp your death is inevitable, I can't do anything about that.-
Cyber-Kanochi: you are absolutely correct in that statement, I literally forgot that Echo and Fives were later made ARC troopers and later with the 501st, Jesse appears and I just naturally affiliated Jesse with the Domino Squad whoops-
(I was watching the last season of CW and I absolutely blame some of this on the great final journey of the Clone Wars.)
So reading the comments, I'm grateful for your wisdom and loving this story but I personally made a conclusion of perhaps halting this story so I can achieve a different means of writing with this story.
I'm quite obvious when I re-read this story and with help from you guys that spot it and tell me/inform me of it, that I have made mistakes for Jesse, Shaak Ti's and Montain's back story.
I'm going to rewrite this but I will update the next chapter before marking it complete/incomplete and writing this with a more experienced headspace because I'm pretty sure I'm at least evolved to a level four and I freely have access to the series again to make a more better story.
(damn you Netflix! I will never end that grudge any time soon!)