Cap goes next.
"The Nap, eternal slumber seems like a good topic."
Cap reads through the story.
"Rowley, this one isn't scary, just depressing. I may not be a fully family person, but you made me cry again."
"Sorry."
"Also the ending feels to forced. Maybe change it so that she dies peacefully in her sleep."
"Alright."
As we can see in the final book, Rowley didn't change the ending at all.