One more thing, I'm not sure if I should keep the same chaotic energy I had for the story or try to make it seem a bit more serious grammatically and from a writing sense. I saw a comment about that a while back with criticism about something about not always being able to follow who's talking due to the people talking not being labeled always. It's a good point, I just feel like that's one area where my writing is kind of flawed. Anyway, sorry for the extra update next chapter will be out today. Thank you all!