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Luka chuppi bahut hui, saamne aa ja naa
He stood in front of the door...he felt a rush of emotions...suddenly he felt so vulnerable...as if all of his energy was sucked out. His vision got blur due to the presence of moisture in his eyes.
Manav kept a hand on his shoulder and pressed it. Abhi took a deep breath and nodded.
Manav opened the door of ICU and stepped in...while Abhijeet followed him in slow footsteps.
He felt an agonising pain watching her again lying down lifeless...only evidence of her being alive was provided by those machines attached to her.
An image of a newborn ran through his mind...he closed his eyes to stop those threatening tears.
Manav looked at him and sighed deeply.
Abhi came near her...he looked at Manav...who nodded.
Abhijeet lovingly creased her head. He was not knowing...what should he say...how to express what he wants...well fathers are otherwise also considered to be the ones who rarely show their feelings towards their child...but...he knew a father should show his feelings towards his child...he also expected the same from Acp sir...yes he has always given him that place...not only him...but he knew...that Acp sir has also given him and Daya that place but...he never expressed it openly...sometime's for Daya it came out...but for him...he always carved for it. No, he was not jealous of his brother...but it's a basic human need.
Kahan kahan dhoondha tujhe
No, he will not do this mistake...yes he understood well that...why Acp sir was like this...but he didn't want his child to carve for the thing he carved for...he wanted to give all that he can...though he was not an expressive person...he has promised himself...he will let his child be aware of his feelings, his care, his love for him.
This has come abruptly in front of him...but, still...she is his child and this fact cannot be denied...neither he is denying...So what if she was born in such circumstances...it was none of her faults...she didn't tell them to bring her to this world...they did...so for what she should be punished...for what reasons...he should not complete his promise done to himself...for what reason he is supposed to be biased for her...no for no reason...Yes, he will full fill his promise that he has done to himself.
He with full love and affection kissed his daughter's forehead.
Abhijeet (fresh voice controlling his tears, with full of love ) - Hey, Champ...kya yaar aap toh phir yah aa Kar ase let gae...hmm...mujhe toh laga tha you hate hospitals like...like me...(wishpered) your father Haan...(he took a deep breath controling his tears)... After all sb Bolte aap meri Tarah hai...but I don't think so...Dekho na mein toh ek dum se thik ho Kar...jaldi se discharge Kar k Ghar phoch jata hoon...(Manav smiled on this) .(his voice was slowly turning teary) lekin aap Dekho ase lete ho yah...sab ko dara diya Apne...(gulping down his tears that are threating to come out)...or Nahi toh kya...asa karta hai kya koi bhala...(in teary voice)...Champ...champ..we...we... really l...love...you...champ...(and finally the tears rolled down his eyes)
Aaja saanjh hui mujhe teri fikar
(Manav was monitoring the machines but they were showing no changes...her vitals were still very unstable.)
pa...papa...chachu...da...dadu...we all love you...sach...I know...I..I couldn't full fill my responsibilities towards you.
Dhundhla gayi dekh meri nazar aa ja na
I know...JB apko...meri jarurat thi...toh...papa...aap k sath nahi the...par sach...agar mujhe thoda sa bhi andaz hota...toh...mein mere bache ko kbhi akela rhene deta. But, I promise you...aab aap ke papa...aap ko kbhi akela nahi hone dege...kbhi nahi...bs vapas aajao... please.
... please thik hojao bacha... please...give me one chance Bache.
Parallel to this
Kya bataoon maa kahan hoon main
Her eyes fluttered...and after blinking them two three time her vision got clear...she looked at surrounding... it was a beautiful place...the different kind of flowers were making it look more beautiful and their different fragrance were just making it adorable... butterflies all around...ohh then she looked at the Rainbow...her eyes twinkled like... eyes of small kid.
Yahan udne ko mere khula aasmaan hai
Tere kisson jaisa bhola salona
Then, her attention got focused on herself...she was wearing a beautiful white dress...hairs being combed so nicely...she was not looking less than a princess of fairy tails.
Jahan hain yahan sapno vala
Meri patang ho befikar, udd rahi hai maa
But, wait...where is she...she tried to recognise the place but she couldn't...she tried to find someone if she can.
Aaja saanjh hui mujhe teri fikar
Dhundhla gayi dekh meri nazar aa ja na
Then she heard a loving voice...
" Bache kise dundh rahe ho"
Teri raah take aankhiyaan
Jaane kaisa kaisa hoye jiya
She stood at her place for a moment...yes she knows...this voice...how can she forget this voice...no she can never... tears came in her eyes...she turned around slowly...
"Mumma"
Dhire-dhire aangan utre andhera, mera deep kahan
Her Mumma was wearing the same dress has her... looking prettiest...the fairy of the tales...which she always wanted to meet...whom she always wanted to be with her... finally after long wait...she is here.
And the her Mumma nodded with loving smile. Divya smilled in tears...and she just ran towards her mother without wasting another second.
Dhalke suraj kare ishara chanda tu hai kahan
Mere chanda tu hai kahan
And his mother took her bacha in her embarace. Ohh how much she missed it.
Divya (crying) - Mumma...aap...aap kyu...Chor aae mujhe akela ase...mujhe bilkul acha nahi lagta aap k Bina...I...I miss you so much Mumma...aap.. promise Karo...aab aap nahi jao ge mumma... please...Mumma...I can't live without you.
Luka chuppi bahut huyi saamne aa ja naa
Kahan kahan dhoondha tujhe
Thak gayi hai ab teri maa
Mother (creasing her head and back) - shhhhh...meri gudiya...ase rote nahi hai na...hmm...mera bacha toh strong hai na?
Kaise tujhko dikhaun yahaan hai kya
Divya ( nodded in no...and added stubbornly) - Nahi...Nahi hai apka bacha strong... mujhse... mujhse nahi hota Mumma or... please I am not strong.
Maine jharne se paani maa tod ke piya hai
Mother (she pulled her from hug and wiped her tears) - Aab Rona Nahi princess please...jb aap rote hai...toh mumma ko dukh hota hai na...(Divya nodded like a innocent child) betho.
Guchcha-guchcha kar khwabon ka uchal ke chuwa hai
They sat down on the grass...Divya put her head in the lap of his mother. Her mother kissed her forehead and creased her head. It gave Divya the sooth she was longing from the day her mother left.
Divya (complaining) - maa aap kyu Chor aae mujhe akela...kya mein...itna Bura hoon...ki sb mujhe Chor dete aap bhi chali gai...Nanu Nani bhi...masi vo...vo kbhi ho k bhi nahi the...or or papa...(she stopped abruptly)
Chaaya liya bhali dhoop yahaan hai
Naya-naya sa hai roop yahan
Mother (lovingly) - nahi Mera bacha...aap duniya k best Bache ho [ Divya (like a kid) - sach?] much meri Jaan...(Divya snugeled her more in mother embrace) naa mere Bache...asa nahi krte na...tujhe wapas jana hai meri Jaan.
Divya sat with jerk.
Yahaan sab kuch hai maa phir bhi
Lage bin tere mujhko akela
Divya ( in anger) - Nahi...mujhe Kahi Nahi Jana...mujhe aap k pass rhena...or or vaha Kuch bhi Nahi hai...(tearly) mein vaha akeli hoon maa...Nahi Jana mujhe bs...Nahi Jana mujhe. ( She looked other side)
Mother (lovingly turned her ) - Asa Nahi krte na...bahdur Bache...or Mumma toh hmesha aap k sath hai meri Jaan.
Parallel
Divya's vitals started to decrease continuously... machine's started buzzing.
Aaja saanjh hui mujhe teri fikar
Dhundhla gayi dekh meri nazar aa ja na
Abhijeet stunned looked at Divya than to Manav...who has already come in action.
Abhijeet - Manav yeh...
Nurse came in
Manav - Abhijeet tum Bhar jao
Abhijeet - Nahi mein Kahi Nahi jaa Raha ( he held Divya's hand possessively)
Manav looked at him...and sighed and continued his work.
Parallel
Mother (lovingly cupped her face) - Divya bacha...abhi aap ko vaha Bhot Kam pure Karne hai...Or papa ke sath Nahi rhene apko?
Divya (tearly) - par vo...vo toh nahi chate na mujhe...vo bs mujhe pe taras kha rahe hai...mujhe nahi bana bojh un k uper...or...or aap ho na...aap hi mere Mumma or aap hi mere papa
Mother - Or yhe aap se kisne Kaha...Haan...Bacha aap k papa aap se bhot pyar krte hai...bs unhe thodi Der hogai na...us k liye apko naraj hona hai toh ho jao par ase toh nahi krte na...Mera bacha toh smjhdar hai na...Papa ko ek chance toh do bacha...hmm...(Divya kept looking down)
Aaja saanjh hui mujhe teri fikar
Dhundhla gayi dekh meri nazar aa ja na
Bache mumma aab wapis Nahi aa skti (tears rolled down her cheeks) lekin hmesha aap k sath rahegi...or abhi aap Yaha Nahi Ruk skte ho meri Jaan...aap k papa aap Ka intezar Kar rahe hai.
Aap Mumma se pyar krte hona ( Divya nodded) bs toh u smjhlo yhe Mumma ka adhura Kam tha...aap ko aap k papa se milna...bacha Mumma papa se Bhot pyar krti thi or papa Mumma se...Mumma toh wapas Nahi aa skti...lekin meri gudiya toh Apne papa Ka dhayan rkah skti hai na.
Divya nodded slightly...she hugged her mother tightly.
Divya - Jana jaruri hai Maa?
Mother (deeply) - Bhot... (She kissed her temple)...chalo utho Jane k waqt hogaya hai.
Divya looked at her with tear in her eyes...Her mother nodded in no and wiped her tears...her (Divya) hand slipped from hers (mother)...and her mother vanished with the place in all white...
Manav gave a injection in her vains... slowly the vitals started to come back...still fluctuating a bit but not like before.
Abhijeet (tearly) - Don't do this Champ... please...ek Baar please...I promise...I will never leave you alone... please.
Aaja saanjh hui mujhe teri fikar
Dhundhla gayi dekh meri nazar aa ja na
Manav (while looking at the monitor) - Abhijeet ( he with a jerk looked at him) vitals are getting back.
Abhi looked at monitor...he sighed of relief... Manav patted his back.
Abhijeet (gave a kiss on her forehead with) - Thanks Champ.