The Hero She Deserves Chapter 1, a naruto fanfic

The Hero She Deserves

AN: This is mi first story, and I'm not a native English speaker, I'm hoping there aren't many mistakes, but just a heads up if there are, thanks for the understanding.

AN: This story is the gathering of some of my ideas and preferences for all the fanfictions I read over de years, I hope that in this fanfiction I can put into a cohesive story and hope you guys like how the story goes.

DISCLAIMER: i dont own Naruto.

SUMMARY: The story starts at the times of the main generation parents (Chouza, Shukaku, Inoichi, Kushina, Mikoto etc…) In this story there will be no Minato, Naruto is going to be taking his roll but is not going to be be just a copy of him, In this story Naruto is going to be an Uchiha. He is going to have different personality but he is not going to be an emo, he will be more calm and collected but he will continue having the spark that identifies him. This will be a Naruto\Kushina fanfic, I really don't like the incest subject but I love Kushina as a character, and I think she will be the best catalyst of this version of Naruto. Naruto will have the sharingan, mangekyou sharingan, and he will be a prodigy plan and simple, he won't be at Konoha at the beginning of the story for reasons that will be explained later on, without further explaining let's get to the story.

Chapter 1: The beginning.

All starts at land of Iron were the grandchild of one of the greatest shinobi ever to live is about to be born, the son of Takumi, the grandchild of Madara Uchiha. Madara Uchiha in his last battle with his life time rival Hashirama Senju kept a great secret, he had a lover outside the village. Miko was a beautiful woman with black hair and a slender but healthy figure. In his last days with her with the knowledge that his upcoming battle maybe his last, the cold and uncaring Madara express his love for his lover Miko by having one last night of passion, the result of this night of passion resulted in something that not even Madara had the knowledge of, he leave his lover Miko pregnant. Miko knowing that Madara may never return, run away from the land of Fire towards the land of Iron, knowing that if someone suspects that she is carrying the child of Madara the greatest traitor of the Leaf, she will be brought to the Leaf and have her child murder for fear of him becoming another Madara.

MIko had a good life at the land of Iron living like a civilian no one ever suspect that she was carrying the son of Madara. When Miko gave birth to a boy she decided to name him Takumi in honor of her father because little Takumi had at birth a mop of golden hair and wide blue eyes lust like her father.

The days of Takumi pass peacefully and happy like any kid should have. Everything was fine with Miko and Takumi until the day that Miko died from old age, and in that moment she revel Takumi his heritage, of how his father was Madara Uchiha, how they met and how he left for his last battle with Hashirama Senju.

Needless to say that Takumi was fuming, how dare his father leave his mother alone just for his stupid goal of revenge, he was son angry that he awaken the sharingan and the sharingan with one tomoe was spinning wildly of anger, seeing this Miko on his dead bed gasp and explained that she never expected that he would awaken his sharingan because he didn't have the looks of his father, with her last strength she explained the secrets of the sharingan and she told Takumi of everything that Madara told her before he left, how to evolve it and the biggest secret of all the mangekyou sharingan and how to obtain it and the drawbacks. Takumi was beyond shocked that Madara had to replace sin eyes with Izuna's eyes. Takumi was so angry at the Uchiha clan especially at Madara that he swore upon his mother deathbed that he will never use the sharingan and he will continue living like a civilian like her mother.

Takumi tried to live a happy life, but like in every story never happens like expected. War broke out, the second great shinobi war started and every country was involved, even the land of Iron had to defend itself. Takumi was a civilian but even being a civilian did not save him of the war, he had to word as a blacksmith at the capital of the land of Iron, in his days at the capital he meet the woman that would be his future wife, Hana, Hana was a beautiful woman with short blond hair, something uncommon in those areas. They met at the capital working their best helping the samurais, they quickly fell in love and got married. During those days at the beginning of war Takumi met his long life best friend Mifune, a samurai that held talent like no other.

Within the first year of marriage Hana got pregnant, even in the time of war they managed to buy a little house at the capital where Takumi started his own business, he was one of the best blacksmiths in the hole land of Iron, and his customer number one was his great friend Mifune, when the first year of the marriage arrive Hana was eight months pregnant , and they decided that they will make his great friend Mifune their son godfather, needless to say that Mifune was static in joy when they give him the news, his two greatest friends were having a baby and they decided to make him the godfather, from that day forward Mifune was way too over protective with Hana, needless to say that Hana and Takumi were laughing their buts of at the odd behavior of the usually stoic and collected man. So the days passed with the same predicament till the day of the child birth.

The day of the birth arrive and Takumi was pacing like crazy around the house, if Hana was not having contractions she would be laughing at his husband behavior. Finally they arrived at the hospital and Mifune was already waiting them at the entrance, hours pass and finally Mifune that was waiting outside of the room heard the cries of the little baby, when Takumi got out of the room and told him to follow, when they enter the room Mifune could do nothing to hide his wide grin at seeing his friends so happy and the little baby in Hana's arms, he got close and asked "So what's the little guys name" Hana that finally noted the presence of Mifune smiled and said "His name is Naruto" she told him his name while she was playing with his son little finger, getting a giggle of the toddler.

Days passed and everything was great, little Naruto was healthy as it gets and spending the hole of the day either with his mother or sleeping, like every baby hi was driving his parents insane at nights and eating as much as he could at day. Mifune only manage to visit the little guy every two to three weeks having recently promoted to grand samurai of the Iron country, the title of gran samurai of the Iron country it's like the Hokage of the hidden villages. The years passed and the war continued.

Naruto was a happy 4 year old kid, with golden sun kissed hair, bright blue eyes as deep as the ocean, he was tall for a kid his age almost a head taller than any other kid, but he was not like the other kids, he was smarter, so smart that was ridiculous, he started to walk at the age of 9 months, started to speak at the age of 10 moths but nothing showed his intelligence more than the time he was allowed to play outside, any other kid when playing outside would started to play with the grass a toy or something normal, but Naruto was a normal kid, the first time he was allowed to play outside alone was when he was 4 year old.

That day showed the greatness of this child, the first thing he did was observe how the animals run, how they hide, how the ants work, how the frogs hunt, he was still for the good of 30 minutes, his father and mother were starting to get worried, Hana was about to call out Naruto to see what's wrong but what she saw stopped her, Naruto having seen enough was starting to copy the movements of one little frog that was trying to hunt, but no exactly the same, he was standing still behind a tree, in the foliage, the moment he saw a little bird starting to fly he knew that de did not have the log tongue of the frog but there he grabbed a stone and with an accuracy that he should not have hit the bird's head dead on target and the bird fall to the ground.

His parents were gapping at what Naruto did, about to scold him but Naruto turn around and they almost faint. Naruto said "tou-san , kaa-san , why was the bird so slow", There without any reason Naruto stood looking at his parents with red with one tomoe in each eye, Hana was confused at ever but Takumi was lost in thoughts, how he awaken his sharingan so early its almost stupid how early did he awaken it but one name stuck in his head, the explanation of his mother of Madara Uchiha and maybe just maybe Naruto had the strongest blood of Madara flowing between his veins, a kid a two year old kid that didn't even unlock his chakra awaken his sharingan. With only one thing in his mind he grabbed Naruto and Hana and he run to his house.

Within the house Takumi sat Naruto and told him in a stern voice "Naruto do you feel like you see thing different?" Naruto was a little put off by the question but focusing on his surroundings and remembering the park he told his dad "hum… tou-san I see everything slow, the same happened at the park".

Takumi was thinking of something and asked Naruto "Naruto do you remember when did you started seeing thins slow?", meanwhile Hana was silently listening the conversation between father and son already figuring out what her husband was thinking because Takumi already told Hana everything about his past and she was connecting the dots, Naruto was thinking of when did he started seeing thigs like that, remembered how he stared at the frog and there and then hit him "I was watching the frog, and I wanted to see exactly how it hunt… and there everything changed… everything became slow… and I could see exactly what I wanted".

Takumi was impressed with the sheer talent of his son and afraid that with war going and no sign of stopping that his son would be caught at war and die unprepared, with that line of thought he said goodbye to Hana and Naruto and got out of the house, Naruto was scared that he did something bad and asked "kaa-san did I did something wrong ?" he asked with tears at the corner of his eyes, Hana quickly reach out and hug her son and told him "You did nothing wrong Naruto your Tou-san just had something to do", Naruto happily accepted her answer and hug her back "Thank you kaa-san", Hana smiled softly and told Naruto "Naruto lets get ready for dinner your tou-san will return to dinner" and with a soft nod Naruto got up and follow his mother to the kichen.

Takumi run to the fortress as fast as he could to speak with Mifune the only one he could count on. When he reached the fortress he run into Mifune's office and enter without knocking and said "Mifune I need your help with something important", Mifune startled by the sudden presence quickly refocus at hearing problems worrying that something happened to his godson or his friends said "Takumi what happened?, is something wrong with Naruto or Hana?", Takumi quickly responded "Something happened but you got to see it, follow me to my house" Mifune accepted the request and the swiftly run towards Takumi's house.

When they arrived at Takumi's house, they quickly enter the house and started to look for Naruto and Hana, upon arriving at the kitchen they found they happily as ever, Hana was cooking dinner and Naruto was waiting patiently for the food. Hearing the noise of people coming Naruto turn around to see Mifune and his father at the doorstep he happily gave them a wave and a happy grin with his still red eyes wide open.

Mifune not expecting something like this almost faint but he managed to get himself together and stared at those red eyes, Takumi seeing the expression of his friend managed to get a little laugh before speaking sternly to Naruto "Naruto could you explain the same that you told me and you kaa-san earlier", Naruto not seeing a problem told Mifune everything that he told his parents earlier, needless to say that Mifune was dumb folded at what Naruto told him, this kid, his godson, had unbelievable talent, to awaken de sharingan at such an early age just because he wanted was nothing short of genius, he rapidly took glances to Takumi and understood why he was here, Takumi wanted training for Naruto, and the only one that can train him o see a way to train him was him. Mifune already knew of Takumi's legacy so he didn't need to ask why he unlocked the sharingan.

Mifune stood up and ruffle Naruto's hair and told him"Such a story little guy, now let me talk to your father a moment"

Hana having heard the conversation glanced to Mifune and gave him a nod before took Naruto's hand and told him "Come on Naruto lets wash up before dinner" Naruto give her a wide smile before following his mother. Mifune then turn around and address Takumi and said to him "You want the boy to be trained" it was not a question, it was a statement that Takumi could only nod to "Ok first of all we have to unlock his chakra so he can turn down the sharingan" Takumi nodded in agreement to his friends words then Mifune continued "We need to train him in shinobi arts just as much as in kenjutsu, it's his legacy after all, if we were not at time of war he could continue to be just a civilian but with war at the door step we cannot give him that choice"

Takumi knew that his son would not have a life like he did and then again he course his own blood for giving him more problems "Alright Mifune he need to be trained but, there are no shinobis in Land of Iron" Mifune nod in understanding he knew that Naruto needed shinobi training if they wanted to bring the boys potential a flute "You are right Takumi and I think I know the solution to that problem I will send a letter to the Hokage how better to train Naruto than an Uchiha" Takumi quickly understood that he was right so he only gave a nod to his old friend.

Some moment latter Hana and Naruto came back and Mifune walked to Naruto and told him "Naruto I need to teach you something very important to your future come with me" Naruto lit up like a light bulb and run after Mifune he loved to learn new things and he knows that Mifune is a very powerful warrior so without further to do he follow after Mifune to the backyard, Hana was confused by the events so he went to Takumi and ask him what happen and Takumi explained everything to his wife and went after Mifune and Naruto.

Mifune and Naruto were on the backyard, Mifune turn around to see Naruto and he told him "Naruto please sit steal I will teach you what is chakra"

Naruto quickly obey and sit with a startled expression and asked Mifune "Uncle Mifune what is chakra?", Mifune too took a sit in front of Naruto and started speaking "Naruto Chakra is an energy that flow within us, this energy is made of physical and spiritual energy, this energy help us do amazing feats such as walk on trees, walk on water, and even more strange things like the eyes you have now"

Naruto was gaping like a fish learning that something so wonderful exist but quickly pick something up "So are you saying that thanks to this chakra I see everything so slow?"Mifune understood what Naruto was asking and replied "Yes Naruto your eyes are something called the sharingan this eyes of yours are special because only the people with the same blood as yours can have them, only your family can have them" Naruto was surprise by this fact but quickly turned around and saw his father watching him and Mifune and then he saw him nod the unasked question, Naruto understood and turn back to Mifune "Ok Naruto now that you understand the theory behind chakra I want you to learn how to unlock it"

Naruto quickly nod already prepared to do whatever was needed "Now Naruto sit still and close your eyes" Naruto did as he was told and close his eyes and listened intently "Now Naruto I want you to relax and search for something warm, when you feel it I want you to pull it to the surface" Naruto understood and started searching for what Mifune told him, after 10 minutes Naruto felt something and with no hurry started to pull the warm feeling to the surface.

Mifune, Takumi and Hana were gasping at what they saw, from Naruto there was a thin layer of white chakra, Mifune was gaping because chakra should be blue and should not be this easy to unlock, but snapping to reality he rush to Naruto and broke his concentration "! Naruto stop! you already did it" snapping to reality Naruto saw Mifune and asked nod, Mifune calming down asked Naruto "Alrigh Naruto you did it way faster than expected, now I want you to cut the flow of the chakra to your eyes, if you do it correctly you will see everything at the same speed as normal"

Naruto nod to what he said and tried a couple of times before finally succeeding and opening his eyes they were back to the usual ocean blue, Mifune seeing that he finally did it spoke to Naruto "Good job Naruto, you did it, now that is late lets eat dinner at go to sleep tomorrow we will continue training"

Naruto stood up and nod happily. Everyone had a happy diner at the end of the night Naruto told Mifune before he left "Thanks for everything uncle Mifune lets learn more tomorrow" and with that said he quickly gave him a hug before going to his mother so he can tuck him in for the night. Mifune before leaveing the house turn to Takumi and said "Takumi I will see the matter of the training and will sent the letter tonight I will come back tomorrow afternoon for the rest of the explanation" and with that he left with a wave to his friend.

Mifune arrived at his office and gave a tired sight and thought back to his day with everything happening with Naruto he will be having a long days from today forward. He sat on his chair an started writing a letter to the Hokage of Konoha.

"Hokage-dono

I sent this letter with a request, recently there have been a new development in relationship of one of the kids in the fortress, the kid in question is called Naruto and he awaken an unusual bloodline, this matter must be treated with maximum secrecy because of the lineage of this child, I request an instructor to teach the child, I know that the request is really outlandish in this times of war, but nonetheless it's with most urgency I ask you this, I know that we can come to an agreement on this topic if you are willing to make I deal I could reveal his lineage to you and come to some sort of agreement with regards the instructor

My regards Hokage-dono

Mifune Gran Samurai of Iron"

Land of Fire, Konoha

In Konoha there is one little girl named Kushina Uzumaki, Kushina is the daughter of the uzukage, she was hailed as the princess of Uzu, but because she has an especial type of chakra she was taken to Konoha to be the new Jinchuriki of the kyubi.

The last jinchuriki of the kyubi was Mito Uzumaki the wife of the shodaime Hokage, Mito was still alive till last year were she herself sealed the kyubi to Kushina a little red headed girl with round face and beautiful purple eyes, she told Kushina that the only way to keep the kyubi at bay is with love, and when she finds love like the one she had with Hashirama, she will be able to control and submit the Kyubi.

Kushina at hearing the news of leaving Uzu was destroyed, she had to leave her parents to an unknown land, the worst of all was when she arrived at konoha and Mito told her that she will be housing a demon within the seal, she was devastated, she cried for days, and with the dead of Mito her only blood relative at konoha, she felt completely alone and sad, but everything got worst the next year after the sealing of the kyubi.

Uzu was destroyed, the people killed and the only survivors lost, at hearing the news that her native land, her parents and all her family were destroyed and dead, she was destroyed even considering killing herself. She was only a 4 year old little girl and everything that she knew was gone and she was all alone. Her first hope of happiness was when the granddaughter of Mito arrive at the Senju compound, where she was living the las year of her life.

Senju Tsunade, the graddaughter of Hashirama Senju and Mito uzumaki was a beautiful woman, with pale long blond hair, she had a great figure, wide hips and huge breasts bordering double D. Arriving at the Senju compound Tsunade went to see the little girl named Kushina that was living there since last year. Hiruzen Sarutobi, the third Hokage of konoha, and the teacher of Tsunade Senju, Jiraya and Orochimaru, told Tsunade of the girl and the dead of Mito since Tsunade was all last year at war and couldn't came back at Konoha, at first she was sad that Mito died, but already knowing that Mito was way too old she understood and made peace with the dead of Mito, the problem with little Kushina was that Hiruzen told her that she was the new Jinchuriki of the kyubi, and from the stories of Mito and news of what happened to Uzu she knew that Kushina must be devastated.

Tsunade went to Kushinas room, hoping to talk to the little girl. Arriving at the door of her room she knocked and waited a moment for the door to open.

Kushina was crying at her bed not knowing what to do with her life, hearing someone knocking the door, she tensed and slowly got up from the bed and went to open the door, Kushina was beyond surprised that knocking the door was the most beautiful woman she had ever seen in her short life, being a little tensed of the woman at the door she asked "Wh-oo are y-ou?".

Tsunade first notice that Kushina had red hair like his Mito, then she saw her beautiful purple eyes and the tears marks all over her face, knowing that she must be crying, hearing the questing she bend down to eye level with Kushina, gave her a soft smile and told her "I'm Tsunade Senju, Mito was my grandmother, you must be Kushina", Kushina hearing that this woman was related to Mito was surprised and told her a little afraid of Tsunade"y-yes I-II-am".

Tsunade hearing the fear in her voice quickly put a hand to her head and brought her for a hug, Kushina first flinch of fear to the woman, but quickly relax into the hug and got a feeling of warm that she desperately needed and started feeling tears in the corner of her eyes, feeling the motherly hug that Tsunade was giving her, the las thing that Tsunade told her before Kushina cried her eyes out was "Kushina-chan you are no longer alone" and that did it for the little 4 year old girl, the feeling of love, warm and peace finally hit her and she cried till falling sleep.

Hiruzen Sarutobi was having a great day, the paper work finally finished, Tsunade finally back to take care of the little Kushina and with the war going as planned, nothing could go better, so he was surprised when he received a letter of Land of Iron. The letter had the especial seal of Mifune the ruler of Iron, so he opened the letter and it said:

"Hokage-dono

My regards Hokage-dono

Mifune Gran Samurai of Iron"

Needless to say that Hiruzen was beyond surprised with the nature of the request, a thousand thoughts were passing in his mind, so he did the only thing that he decided at that moment, he called and anbu and told him "Anbu, Tell Orochimaru to come here right away" the anbu quickly mutter a "Hi" and disappear in a swirl of leaves.

Orochimaru was something that people call a prodigy, he was adept with all the shinobi arts and was the favorite student of Hiruzen. He is a tall man with pale skin, black hair slender build and yellow eyes, the same eyes as a snake. Orochimaru was lost in thoughts at one of the hospital labs, his favorite activity was researching new things, so when an anbu pop in a swirl of leaves and told him that the Hokage was asking for him he quickly put everything away and despaired in a shunshin (body flicker) of leaves.

Feeling a presence appear at his office Hiruzen address his student "Orochimaru glad that you are here, I have a problem that I may need your assistance, please read this", and he passed the letter to Orochiamaru, when he finally finished reading the letter he told his sensei "So sensei do you have any idea which bloodline it is?".

Hiruzen understood the question and replied "No, I don't know but if Mifune himself is asking this then it must be something important, also hiding his lineage is something to took notice of".

Orochimaru understood the point his sensei made so he said "So who are you going to send, maybe we don't have an aliance with Iron country but the trade agreements with Iron is something we cannot risk especially in times of war", Hiruzen agreed with his student with a nod because without the trade agreements with Iron country they would have shortage of kunais shurikens and swords, so he answered to his student "I want you to go Orochimaru, learn which bloodline the kid possess and maybe his lineage too, then you can see who would be the best teacher for this kid".

Orochimaru understood Hiruzen and asked "when do I leave?", "You cannot leave right now, we need you to win this war, and the rode to Iron is way too dangerous to a shinobi alone, and if Hanzo catch that you are leaving without escort he will hunt you himself".

Orochimaru understood and nod to his sensei, "So what do we say to Mifune" , Hiruzen replied "I will send him a letter explaining the situation and I will send you as quickly as we can without risking your life, I will tell you when to go, in the meantime everything will go as normal, you are dismissed" and with that Orochimaru gave him a nod and disappear, Hiruzen quickly started to write a reply to Iron.

"Mifune-dono

I value our trade agreement as much as you do so I'm going to send my apprentice to see this bloodline you write about and he will see who will be the best to teach him, but in this times of war he cannot go to iron because, Ame and Kusa are way to close so I'm willing to send him as early as possible that I can without risking my shinobi's life, I hope that you understand my rezoning

With my highest regards

Hiruzen Sarutobi Hokage of Konoha"

And with that he sent the reply to Mifune at Iron country, needless to say that Hiruzen, or Orochimaru had any idea that Naruto will be one of the greatest shinobis ever to exist.

AN: I hope you guys like the start of the story, this is just the prologue so is not expected much but information.

AN: Please review and told me what I did wrong and what I can get better at, thanks for your time.

AN: Naruto and Kushina are the same age, they are 4 years old at the begining of the story, and this first chapter i just wanted to lay a ground for the rest of the story.