So after some thinking and reading all of your comments, I have made a decision.
*Drum Roll*
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I am not rewriting anything.
This story is not perfect and it never will… and that's fine.
I will try to improve it as I go, but I think it's fine just as it is.
Thank you all for sharing about this little dilemma of mine, they are all greatly appreciated and I look forward to your future support.
Anyways, the next chapter is in the works right now and probably won't be out for a while but it should be out somewhere this month. When I upload it, I plan to delete this and the other one.
Thank you all and happy 4th of July.
Peace~
