To Yukilumi,
This is type of review I was waiting for.
You wrote everything in so much detail, and put so much effort into it. Thank you for that.
I have stopped uploading new chapters because I had already realized the mess this fanfic is.
I always felt anxious about following canon storyline despite the personality change of the protagonist.
After writing an un-uploaded story and reading other's stories, I understood that personality change can change the story significantly.
In my perspective, I don't really agree with your opinion about Kazuma's personality and actions. Reason being simple, beacuse this is my OC and I know this true personality and reason behind his actions. I know he is worse than canon Kazuma. This Kazuma, anti social person who does whatever he wants and is very arrogant. But again, there is always a good reason behind his actions.
Wiz's smile was completely unreasonable after the negatives things Kazuma said. Maybe, I had not realized just how much Wiz was expecting to see her friends and care for them.
Also, this story is just something I wrote for fun and to see things I wanted to see in the canon happening.
I had some scenes I wanted to see as scattered dots on a chart. This story just connects those dots and enacts the scenes I wanted to see.
It is not like I was gonna continue canon forever though. At some point, I would start writing my own chapters.
But, that day will probably not come. I saw through my mistakes and have lost interest in writing this fanfic.
My other konosuba fanfic is also a mess. It has so many of concepts that it has become my own story.
I have written some chapters of a new one, but might not upload.
That's all. Thanks for the review. And can you review my other fanfic, "The Black Knight" too?
Also, thank you all for reading and reviewing this trash with praises. :D
PS: Yukilumi, I suggest you read further to find more about his personality(optional ofx).