Let's get this out of the way first and foremost: I do not own Harry Potter and the universe it is in. That honor goes to J.K Rowling herself! This is a FANFICTION under the copyright law section 107. The fair use Act and the characters are used just for this story.
This is an Adult Rough-Draft! (18 and over only!)
All your favorite characters are back! Harry, Hermione, Fred, George, McGonagall, Snape, Remus, Tonks, Draco, Neville, Luna and so many others! Harry, Hermione and his other witches over powered and filthy rich!
Pairing Of: Harry James Potter, Hermione Jean Granger, Daphne Victoria Greengrass, Cho Yue Chang, Fleur Francesca Delacour, Nymphadora Tonks and many others.
Pairing Of: Neville Franklin Longbottom with Luna Lovegood.
Pairing Of: Sirius Orion Black with Amelia Lavada Bones
Original Characters: Aedan Charon Potter, Alan Alcides Potter, Benjamin Daedalus Potter, Celestine Cassandra Potter, Clover Irene Potter, Destiny Althea Potter, Euphemia Laura Potter, Fleamont Stephan Potter, Floyd Duarte Potter, Harriette Danica Potter, Holly Skyla Potter, James Fleamont Potter, Jason Aristodemos Potter, Lilly Marie Potter, Lucie Aoide Potter, Mathew Alexander Potter, Voilet Persephone Potter and so many others along the way
Rated M: For mature due to language, mild violence and adult content! If the Sexual Content is not your cup of tea, then please skip then continue! Thank You!
Fate had enough of her son's heartache and pain. She decides to step in after watching the love of her son Harry's life and soul bonded one Hermione Granger die in his arms. She changes things that happened in the past while helping her son Harry with a brighter future. Harry and his witches go back in time and they're 25 year old selves are now stuck in their 15 year old bodies. This story starts in 2013 right at the beginning of everyone's summer holiday before their fourth year. This story starts in Harry's and all of his wives summer holiday after him and Hermione saved his godfather Sirius Black from the Dementor's Kiss. Harry Potter and his witches now have to face down Voldemort once again along with the meddling, manipulating, little boy chasing, gay-ass Dumbledore, The Dursley's, Ginevra Molly Weasley, Ronald Billous Weasley, Molly Priscilla Weasley and the Ministry of Magic. How will Harry's entire family handle everything? A few more surprise for our hero Harry also lay instore for him.
Bashing on: The Dursley's, Ginevra Molly Weasley, Ronald Billous Weasley, Molly Priscilla Weasley, Albus Percival Wulfric Brian Dumbledore.
Author's Note: I want to apologize to my readers, reviewers and Followers for the Italics. Please read slowly if you must! This message will continue for the rest of this story. I also want to say I am not a perfect writer and I do this for fun. I want to thank A10riddick ahead of time for working on this story with me. Please be on the lookout for a reboot when it is available. From this point forward I will be adding a writer and story after Next Chapter information. After the chapter will be a Fanfiction Story Recommendation for those of you looking for new stories to read, however I do not read any crossovers. They are confusing to find out what universe they all are from. (Sorry!) Please No Flames for that or for a bad story! I went back to my play and script format since it is easier to read. Please ignore this… (Harry:) that is there so you know who is talking to who.
This is a Harry Potter Changing the Future: Chapter Special where you my fellow readers, reviewers and followers will get all of your reviews answered. They will be open and brutally honest.
Next Chapter: Harry Potter Changing the Future: Chapter 10: Sisters and Longbottom's
This chapter is 14 pages with a word count of 10,508 words after this section. Enjoy the New Chapter Everyone!
Harry Potter Changing the Future: Chapter 9: Special, Answering Readers And Reviewers
Okay normally I would start working on the next chapter the following morning after I have posted a finished chapter. Since I have 89 reviews, 341 followers, 246 favorites and 9,178 views. I know it takes time to gain a large number of followers, reviewers Favorites and views. That don't happen overnight and I am so far happy with what I have now. I hope in the near future I can see this story grow for you my fellow readers, reviewers and followers. Since I have so many reviews I thought I should do this Special Chapter just so everyone knows I do read all the reviews and have replied to some but not all. I do know that a few readers and reviewers are from different countries so I will be using Google Translate so it can be seen. I will show the non-translated and then I will show the translated version. Please look for this English Translated:. If I get to 176 reviews, I will try and do another Special Chapter Answering Readers And Reviewers. If you want to see your name in the next Harry Potter Changing the future: Special Answering Reader and Reviewers; All you have to do is just write a review. These are everyone's personal thoughts and words. Everyone has that right under the constitution for freedom of speech. I will answer everything honestly and will pull no punches since I am under the same rights. Let's get started and see what all you readers and reviewers have said and I will answer all of them in this Special Chapter.
(Reviewer 1 of 89)
Chapter 1. Feb 27: From LordNemesis
He said this: What about Luna Lovegood she can be trusted! beside Nevel needs someone to love or two or three.
Answer: Yes Luna Lovegood can be trusted and she will play a big part in up and coming chapters. As far as Neville is concerned I can't see him with anyone else but one witch, Luna Lovegood.
(Reviewer 2 of 89)
Chapter 1. Feb 27: From Old sarge101
They said this: Good so far. Continue
Answer: I am going to continue this story for the foreseeable future. There is a lot more to come for Harry and his wives along with his entire family.
(Reviewer 3 of 89)
Chapter 1. Feb 28: From
They said this: I like where this is going so far. My only critique would be the format for the dialogue. Having the speaker's name before they speak is a bit annoying. Maybe put in a few "he said", "she said," etc. Or any other type of whatever grammatical tool that is. The way you have it now makes me think I'm reading a script or a play or something.
Answer: That is because you are technically reading a play for adults. I have written a few plays when I was going through high-school and college. This was my strong suit throughout my years.
(Reviewer 4 of 89)
Chapter 1. Feb 28: From rnarly10
They said this:
1. Could be more creative, but the title doesn't matter to me as long as the story is good.
2. It's easy to read, but not structured well. There are several grammatical and sentence structure errors. More importantly, you're writing it out like a script of what actors in a play would say rather than having natural transitions. If you want to identify the speaker, you can do so like this (example): "How?" asked Hermione, "that curse has never been stopped unless it was done improperly." You do not need to put the speaker name in bold in front of their part. It reads less like a story and more like a script. On a related note, when someone is speaking, you use double quotes around the parts spoken "out loud" and it isn't italicized unless you want to stress a certain spoken word/phrase. When a person is thinking, you use single quotes for their 'thoughts' inside their head, usually the thoughts are italicized.
3. I would suggest rewriting this chapter first and cleaning some things up. First of all, why does Harry need 30 billion galleons and how does Ginny spend 30 billion in 3 years? If you want to make him rich then that's fine, but I've never read a single fanfic where Harry has over a billion galleons and has actually needed or used anywhere near that much. In most such fanfics, it is rarely written that Harry even uses 1 million galleons. Second, you are making Harry's stupidity go to 100 on a scale of 1-10. Who in their right mind would not have a problem with a spouse spending 30 billion in 3 years? Also, what kind of marriage is it that Harry never even had intercourse with Ginny and has no problem remaining married to her? These types of things indicate very poor planning of the story right off the bat. There is so much over exaggeration of events that need to be scaled down to realism before continuing the story further. I hope this helps and I wish you good luck.
Answer: Okay this review has a three part preview so my answer will be longer then the first three.
1.) I understand you can be more creative and I respect that, however if you are trying to Flame me for a bad story then I will suggest that you re-read the Author's Note again or write your own story.
2.) I understand that there are several grammatical and sentence structure errors, that is why I put this before each chapter: This is an Adult Rough-Draft! (18 and over only!) This story is a play like you would see when you go to one. If you have ever seen a real script that Actors and actresses use then you would see a lot of the same thing I am doing, but with different color highlights and small scribbled notes for changes. It is a shit show of a mess to try and make sense of what your reading. I have tried the quotation marks and everything else I can think of to show who was talking to who. I stumbled across the Italics and it seemed to fit.
3.) Sorry but I will not rewrite this chapter since it is a Rough-Draft. In this story Harry Potter was born in the Goblin palace due to Lilly having complications during her pregnancy. Prior to that both Lilly and James were so well loved by the goblin royal family they were adopted into the family, which in turn once Harry was born made him a prince. It is not just being a prince of the Goblin nation that he has 30 billion galleons, but throughout his family history before he was born the Potter family were inventers and they invested heavily in both the magical and muggle worlds with a very high return rate. Ginny spending 30 billion galleons in 3 years would not be that hard to do. Have you ever been around people who just shop all day without a care in the world like money was just like water. I have and I used that experience to portray what Ginny is really like. She is a fangirl of Harry Potter, she doesn't love him like Hermione and the rest of his wives do in this story. All she loves is the galleons Harry has and she will not stop spending his galleons until he is completely broke. Harry didn't have sex with Ginny throughout their 3 year marriage because of what I said previously, all she loves is the 30 billion galleons he has and not him. She thinks that money is the most important thing in her life. Harry is not stupid in no means, but he believes that once you're married, your married for life. He was stuck in a loveless marriage with no way out no thanks to the marriage contract that Dumbledore and Molly put him under without his knowledge. Believe me Harry has a real big problem with Ginny and is stuck, so what should he do but to sink himself into his work dreading coming home. Scaling down the events will leave me without using my imagination for this story and without that we couldn't have fun just writing.
(Reviewer 5 of 89)
Chapter 1. Feb 28: From Garth
He said This:
1. Not very creative, but I personally don't care what the title is as long as the story itself is good.
2. It's easy to read, but not structured well. There are several grammatical and sentence structure errors. More importantly, you're writing it out like a script of what actors in a play would say rather than having natural transitions. If you want to identify the speaker, you can do so like this (example): "How?" asked Hermione, "that curse has never been stopped unless it was done improperly." You do not need to put the speaker name in bold in front of their part. It reads less like a story and more like a script. On a related note, when someone is speaking, you use double quotes around the parts spoken "out loud" and it isn't italicized unless you want to stress a certain word. When a person is thinking, you use single quotes for their 'thoughts' inside their head, usually the thoughts are italicized.
3. I would suggest rewriting this chapter first and cleaning some things up. First of all, why does Harry need 30 billion galleons and how does Ginny spend 30 billion in 3 years? If you want to make him rich then that's fine, but I've never read a single fanfic where Harry has over a billion galleons and has actually needed or used anywhere near that much. In most such fanfics, it is rarely written that Harry even uses 1 million galleons. Second, you are making Harry's stupidity go to 100 on a scale of 1-10. Who in their right mind would not have a problem with a spouse spending 30 billion in 3 years? Also, what kind of marriage is it that Harry never even had intercourse with Ginny and has no problem remaining married to her? These types of things indicate very poor planning of the story right off the bat. There is so much over exaggeration of events that need to be scaled down to realism before continuing the story further. I hope this helps and I wish you good luck.
Answer: Okay I think this guy is the same person as rnarly10. Since these are the exact same things that were already spoken about. I will not answer these same points since my response will be the exact same thing.
(Reviewer 6 of 89)
Chapter 1. Mar 3: From SeranoirStarfall
They said this: For the title, I have mixed feelings, but it's good enough. For reading it seemed to have mixed formats but was still easy to read. Finally, yes continue this story I hope to see more of this. I really enjoy stories like this. More so than the other story, too large of a harem. Characters need development in a story. I typically find harem stories that keep said harems smaller give the characters both in and out of the harem better attention. If Harry's has more than four girls they start to feel like conquests and friends with befits rather than lovers. Doesn't mean I don't like the other story but it's characters are less a harem of lovers and more different notches in his bedpost that he may or may not revisit.
Answer: I certainly understand your mixed feelings about the title of this story. I am glad you find it easy to read where some may not. I will continue this story for the foreseeable future. The characters will come into their own as the story progress's. All 10 of Harry's wives are not conquests or friends with benefits to put a notch under his belt. Each girl has different qualities, strengths and weaknesses which Harry helps them overcome their weakness's and makes them stronger in their strengths. While he does that for his girls they do the same for him.
(Reviewer 7 of 89)
Chapter 1. Mar 5: From SLYNNR
They said this: LOVE THE TITLE AND I LOVE THE STORY. PLEASE WRITE MORE OF THIS STORY SOON!
Answer: Thank you and I will continue to write more. Some chapters may take a week while others may take 3 weeks to write. Either way as soon as the Rough-Draft chapter is finished I will post it.
(Reviewer 8 of 89)
Chapter 1. Mar 6: From Isabelle6116
French: She said this: J'aimerais lire la suite avec des chapitres plus aérés svp
Okay so before I answer this I want to say this is French. I will translate both what she said and my answer once I reply to her response in French.
French: Answer: J'aurai bientôt d'autres chapitres de Harry Potter à lire. Veuillez être à l'affût des mises à jour.
Okay now that I answered in French using Google translate, here is what the conversations was.
English Translated: She said this: I would like to read more with more airy chapters please.
English Translated: Answer: I will have more Harry Potter chapters in the near future for you to read. Please be on the lookout for updates.
(Reviewer 9 of 89)
Chapter 1. Mar 4: From Guest
They said This: How about this title: Harry Potter and Fate's Quest
Answer: Thanks for the suggestion and I might use that for a new Fanfiction story.
(Reviewer 10 of 89)
Chapter 2. Mar 7: From
They said this: I love it!
Answer: Thank you, I may not be a perfect writer but I do try and make a good story.
(Reviewer 11 of 89)
Chapter 2. Mar 7: From Philosophize
They said this: This script format is simply too hard to use. Formatting it like a script means it can't be read as a story. There's no immersion. It's more like a police report about events; it's not something a person can just get lost in. All of the italics makes things worse because an italics font is inherently harder to read than a normal one. There are a lot of reasons why published fiction books never do these things.
Answer: I understand your frustration and I can see your points. I must apologize if you can't get into the story. The italics may be a bit harder to read, so that's why I put this in before the start of each chapter: I want to apologize to my readers, reviewers and Followers for the Italics. Please read slowly if you must! I will give you a suggestion to help with the issue that you pointed out. If you have a kindle Fire or any other type of device as such. Please download the FFN App. That app has a way for you to read the story a lot easier and faster.
(Reviewer 12 of 89)
Chapter 2. Mar 7: From SLYNNR
They said this: MOLLY AND DUMBLEDORE HAVE JUST CROSSED THE WRONG MOTHERS.
Answer: Yes they did and it is not just them but the Dursley's did as well. Just wait to see what happens in later chapters.
(Reviewer 13 of 89)
Chapter 2. Mar 7: From A10riddick
He said this: Great story! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Answer: Thank you and I will have new chapters out as fast as I can.
(Reviewer 14 of 89)
Chapter 2. Mar 8: From Vanadir
They said this: Brilliant thank you for a great story.
Answer: Thank you, it's people like you who give me the strength to get up in the mornings and continue writing.
(Reviewer 15 of 89)
Chapter 3. Mar 9: From
They said this: I dunno about other people but I can't continue reading this story with it's current format. I know it sounds petty but the italics and the speaker's name in bold at the beginning is just so distracting that it makes the reading experience unenjoyable.
Answer: I am sorry to see you go. It is a shame that I would not be able to hear your opinion. I wish you luck in your next reading adventure.
(Reviewer 16 of 89)
Chapter 3. Mar 9: From Old sarge101
They said this: Yes give a list
Just so everyone knows I asked if anyone wanted to see the list of names I use for my Harry Potter stories.
Answer: I will get the list up as soon as I can. I have been pretty busy lately.
(Reviewer 17 of 89)
Chapter 3. Mar 10: From SLYNNR
They said this: I WOULD LOVE TO SEE THE LIST!
Answer: Since this is the same review I will not answer this. My response will be the same as I gave Old sarge101.
(Reviewer 18 of 89)
Chapter 3. Mar 10: From A10riddick
They said this: Great chapter! Can't wait for the next one!
Answer: Thank you I do try and will have new chapters up as fast as I can.
(Reviewer 19 of 89)
Chapter 3. Mar 10 From Guest
They said this: Why do you make it harder on readers by putting all the dialog in italics? Making things harder to read is like exactly the opposite of what a writer is supposed to do. Using italics isn't easier for you, it's something you have to go to extra effort to apply. This means you're investing extra time and effort to make this harder to read. Who does that? And that's not including the dumb script format. Hint: this site is for stories, not screenplays. Publishing a screenplay actually comes with a risk of having it taken down.
Answer: I have tried several different ways and got the same response you point out, so I use Italics. Sorry that it is hard for you to read. Like I told another reviewer, I put this in prior to the start of each chapter: I want to apologize to my readers, reviewers and Followers for the Italics. Please read slowly if you must! If you think that my script format is dumb then may I suggest that you stop reading this story and write your own the way you want. Publishing a Fanfiction here on FFN that is in a play or TV script is not against the rules, because if it really was that damaging, then they would have to take down over 5,000 plus stories. That would hurt this site, and with over 12 million registered users and hosts stories in over 40 languages. I don't think Xing Li, a computer programmer who also runs the site wants to lose the fan base. Keep in mind that Xing Li has made this site free for everyone to use and it is your choice to read the stories or not. Us writers are not forcing that choice on you.
(Reviewer 20 of 89)
Chapter 1. Mar 12: From fvdv123
They said this: like
Answer: Thank you, What did you like about Chapter 1 if anything.
(Reviewer 21 of 89)
Chapter 3. Mar 13: From fvdv123
They said this: like
Answer: Again, thank you. What did you like about Chapter 3 if anything.
(Reviewer 22 of 89)
Chapter 1. Mar 13: From ThunderSphinx
They said this: You do realize that Amelia is like 10 or 20 years older than Sirius. You should pair him up with someone else IMO. Other than that, this looks great.
Answer: I did some research on Amelia Bones, as I looked into her age she was a second year when Sirius, Remus, James, Peter, Severus and Lilly started Hogwarts. She is also the youngest Auror to ever sit in the Director of the D.L.M.E. The only one that surpassed her is Harry Potter.
(Reviewer 23 of 89)
Chapter 2. Mar 13: Form ThunderSphinx
They said this: Lily Evans-Potter is spelled "Lily." There is only one 'L.' Hopefully you start using quotations and punctuation because this can get hard to read.
Answer: Yes I do know Lily's name is spelled with 1 "L". I changed the spelling of her name for a reason and it will be apparent in later chapter why.
(Reviewer 24 of 89)
Chapter 4. Mar 17: From A10riddick
They said this: Great chapter! Can't wait for the next one!
Answer: Thank you I am working hard on new chapters.
(Reviewer 25 of 89)
Chapter 4 . Mar 18: From Guest
They said this: I notice that you don't answer the question: why invest extra time and effort into doing things that make this harder to read? You apologize for them and you acknowledge that it slows them down, but you do it anyway. Bizarre. No, you aren't doing your damnedest to write a good story when also do your damnedest to inhibit easy reading. And yes, there are many script entries on this site. Doesn't change the fact that it's against the rules and you risk having it taken down. But if you don't care about people being able to read this hot mess, I guess you won't care if it's removed.
Answer: Actually I do care if this story gets taken down, because it would hurt the public as a whole for a different writer. I did answer your question and from what you have written here you are flaming me for a bad story. I will say this one last time. As writers who post their stories here on FFN are not forcing anyone to read them. It is their choice if they want to read a story or not. You have no standing on what kind of story that I want to write because it come from me and not you. If you don't like this story then don't read, but don't ruin it for everyone else who actually do like it and are willing to help when they can.
(Reviewer 26 of 89)
Chapter 1. Mar 18: From zenbone7
They said this: everything feels like a run on sentence, should work on showing and not telling. the idea isn't bad, just needs polish.
Answer: I know what you're saying here, but I do put in Rough-Draft prior to each new chapter so everyone is aware that it is not polished.
(Reviewer 27 of 89)
Chapter 1. Mar 20: From MarkuzBlack
They said this: Good start.
Answer: Thank you, what did you like about Chapter 1.
(Reviewer 28 of 89)
Chapter 3. Mar 20: From MarkuzBlack
They said this: Thanks for the chapter
Answer: Again, Thank you.
(Reviewer 29 of 89)
Chapter 4. Mar 20: From MarkuzBlack
They said this: Thanks for the update
Answer: Your welcome, I do try and get new chapters out as fast as I can.
(Reviewer 30 of 89)
Chapter 1. Mar 20: From thunderofdeath97
They said this: wow you just killed this already. he felt he would fall in love with Daphne, just from a kiss on the cheek and a hug? while what, fourteen? also trillions and billions of galleons? wow yea Dudley is kind of a victim but he is also an antagonist. Snape is not one of my favorite characters, no offense to those who like him, but i just can't stand him as a character, nor as some tragic heroic martyr, if you ask me, he didn't suffer near as much as he should have in cannon. Daphne's middle name in the fic itself does not match what you claimed it was at the top of the chapter.
Answer: I am sorry that you think I killed this story before it got started. In Harry's old timeline during their fourth year teenage hormones can run anyone ragged even from a simple thing as a kiss on the cheek. Dudley is both as you say in Cannon, but in this story he was bullied by his father and mother. He really isn't that bad of a guy for keeping his true feeling for his cousin away from everyone else. Don't worry though, he'll get a nice surprise. Severus Snape is s grease ball throughout cannon, but turns out that he actually cares. That being said, in this story he is a slimeball through and through. I have something planned to take care of him. I fixed Daphne's middle name.
(Reviewer 31 of 89)
Chapter 5. Mar 22: From Packer82
They said this: Good story, I can't wait to read more. You have a good story going keep up the good work. Thank you the effort during these trying times. Take care of yourself.
Answer: Thank you, I do try and I will get new chapters out as fast as I can. It is people like you who say these kind words that get me up at 6:00 Am to start writing and stopping around 9:00 Pm. During these troubling times with COVID19 it is a hardship on everyone and that's why I write for long periods of time. I want to try and get people's mind off of what is happening in the world at least for a little bit. I will take care of myself.
(Reviewer 32 of 89)
Chapter 5. Mar 23: From A10riddick
They said this: Great chapter! Can't wait for the next one!
Answer: Thank you, I try and tie in one chapter to the last one.
(Reviewer 33 of 89)
Chapter 6. Mar 24: From SPBRX
They said this: there too much long names and fuckery and absolutely no tact I'm done
Answer: I am sorry to see you go. The names were passed down to Harry's bloodline and it's important to point that out in this story.
(Reviewer 34 of 89)
Chapter 6. Mar 24: From
They said this: I don't like how the story is written in script format, it takes only a bit more to make the format run similar to a novel. There are several grammar issues but all in all the story is legible. I'm actually going to stop reading a chapter 6 until I see more improvement or a more edited version of the story. thanks for the story.
Answer: Thank you for reading up until chapter 6. I hate to see you go. I hope you find a story you like. This story is done like a play since that is my strong suit of writing. I do put this before each chapter so people know there will be mistakes: This is an Adult Rough-Draft! (18 and over only!)
(Reviewer 35 of 89)
Chapter 6. Mar 24: From SLYNNR
They said this: I CAN'T WAIT TILL DUMBLES AND MOLLY FIND OUT THAT THEY ARE NOT GOING TO GET THERE WAY.
Answer: Oh they will find out the hard way, and it will start in later chapters, finishing off with Harry and Lilly serving their ass's on a silver platter.
(Reviewer 36 of 89)
Chapter 1. Mar 24: From sykartracer
They said this: Definitely like the premise. Reading it is a tad different, almost like reading a movie script or playwrights. I'll read on and see where you go...
Answer: Actually you are reading it like a play. If you have ever read William Shakespeare's Hamlet, Romeo and Juliet, Othello, King Lear, and Macbeth, then you're one of the lucky few who has. They all are considered to be among the finest works in the English language. J.K. Rowling's Harry Potter and The Cursed Child is also in a play format. I have written a lot of plays in my high-school and college days so I am just writing to my strengths.
(Reviewer 37 of 89)
Chapter 6. Mar 24: From fvdv123
They said this: like
Answer: Thank you, what did you like in chapter 6.
(Reviewer 38 of 89)
Chapter 6. Mar 24: From A10riddick
They said This: Great chapter! Can't wait for the next one!
Answer: Thank you, I do try and make each chapter exciting to read.
(Reviewer 39 of 89)
Chapter 6. Mar 24: From boogeyman
They said this: why did you write a script
Answer: Like I said many of time previously, writing in T.V. and Script format is my strong suit.
(Reviewer 40 of 89)
Chapter 1. Mar 29: From Shad0wNinja
They said this: I started reading this on a whim, and HOLY FUCKING SHIT IS THIS AWSOME! I kid you not the way in the prologue, how things went from 0 to 100 really quick synched it for me keep up the great work
Answer: Thank you for the compliment. I may not be a strong writer, but I do have fun writing even though I have my problems at times.
(Reviewer 41 of 89)
Chapter 1. Apr 2: From Pteaset
They said this: Love it
Answer: Thank you, what did you love about Chapter 1.
(Reviewer 42 of 89)
Chapter 7. Apr 2: Reader of Harry Potter
They said this: Thanks.
Answer: Your welcome, I hope you continue to read this story.
(Reviewer 43 of 89)
Chapter 7. Apr 2: From Guest
They said this: I've purchased hundreds of fiction books over the years, and none of them have been formatted as scripts. Do you know why? Because it is not, in fact, easier to read. None of them have had all the dialog formatted as italics, too. Can you guess why? Come on, it's not that hard.
Answer: Okay I am glad you purchased hundreds of fiction books over the years. That just means they are published, this however is not published works and is fanfiction. If I went to a publisher with this then a lawsuit and ensue. This is a site that lets people who love their favorite book, T.V. Show, Movie, Anime Etc. to let their own imagination out. We do this for fun and we make no money on these stories. If you don't like this story then you are not forced to keep reading. May I suggest that you write your own Harry Potter story.
(Reviewer 44 of 89)
Chapter 1. Apr 2: From LightningFlik
They said this: I'm sorry, I'm having difficulty making it through the first paragraph. The second sentence doesn't contain any verbs. The third, fifth and seventh sentences all begin and end by referring to a time period. "After the war, Harry married Ginny after the war." "Every time he saw Hermione, his heart soared every day." "It soon changed after a few months." It reminds me of the Spinal Tap song "Tonight, I'm Gonna Rock You Tonight", except that was a parody. Sentence 10 said Hermione always lied. Sentence 11 says Harry knew she never lied. Paragraph two says Ginny spent all of Harry's money in three years and they soon divorced. Soon divorced _after_ three years had passed? And Hermione quit her job after one year? So two years before Harry got divorced or four years after he got married? And then after decapitating Ron, Harry reminisces about when he loved Hermione and other women as well. I think this story isn't for me. Best of luck.
Answer: Okay I can see the confusion. Let me if I can clear it up. Harry married Ginny unwillingly, he was put under a binding marriage contract by Albus and Molly. Ron and Hermione married a year after Harry and Ginny under the same conditions. Ginny was spending Harry's Galleons like it was water while Ron mentally, emotionally, physically and sexually abused Hermione. after three years of marriage Harry finds out that his marriage to Ginny was illegal since Dumbledore nor Molly had the right to place him in a marriage contract. He was to Marry Hermione and nine other witches from the very beginning after he read a blood binding marriage contracts he found in the Department of Records. Harry and Ginny divorced after that, but she only left him broke and beaten man. Harry know Hermione just as well as Hermione knows Harry. Hermione never lied to anyone but one time. But don't forget the victim of abuse no matter what it is will always lie to the people around them and to themselves thinking this is what is normal for a relationship. It took Hermione to be on her death bed to realize the truth and the fact she always loved Harry Potter and not Ronald Weasley. That being said, I am sorry to see you go and wish you luck in your reading adventures.
About the Author: Okay my fellow readers, reviewers and followers; we have hit the halfway point in this Chapter Special. So let us pause here and I'll tell you a bit about myself.
Of course my pen name is SHADOWWOLF123. I won't give you my real name since that is left for my Beta-readers to know. The reason I choose SHADOWWOLF was because of my service dog Shadow. She was 17 when she died and she was a loyal Rottweiler wolf mix. She wouldn't hurt a fly that was how gentle this dog was. Anyway that covers my pen name. Now about me. I grew up with seven sisters and I am the only boy out of the bunch (I know scary right!) I have now eight sisters and one brother since my father remarried before his passing. I started writing in Junior-high with my girlfriend at the time and they were not very good since I have dyslexia. But when my girlfriend became my wife in high-school things changed for the better. With my dyslexia and her help in all the corrections, I became one of the top students in our school. We took writing seriously for a while since it would serve what we did for a living at 17. We became the youngest A.D.A. workers ever. (Americans With Disabilities) Our writing slowed because of our work but it didn't stop. We continued and wrote plays for our school and college.
We wrote fanfictions from some of our favorite anime's. Anime's such as: Sailor Moon, Robotech, Dragonball, He-man, She-ra and so on. A few years later I stopped writing after our twins passed away and then so did my wife two years later. My heart was not into writing anymore and I swore never to take up the keyboard again. That however was my thought, but when J.K. Rowling's Harry Potter series came out, and now with two boys and one girl thanks to getting remarried I started reading them. It wasn't until my daughter at the edge of 12 found my old writing and boy was I mad since it was adult. But with a bit of coxing she had me start writing once again. Of course for her age I kept it PG, but when she had trouble with her Sexual Education class I knew it was time for me to bring out my medical knowledge that I gained when I was going through surgeries and physical therapy over the years. I started to write Harry Potter After The War. You can find that story here on FFN by my Beta-Reader and Co-author LittleMissAuthor01. I was new to this sight and just read fanfictions prior to her. So now that I know how to publish my stories here we are today. I have three stories up and three wonderful Beta-readers. I am still not that great at writing, but at least I have fun writing and that is all that matters to me. it is all of you who get me to get up in the morning grab a cup of coffee and check my E-Mail to see if I have any new reviews to read before I start writing in the new chapter. For that I want to say thank you to all of you. Now let's get back to Harry Potter Changing The Future: Chapter 9: Special, Answering Readers And Reviewers.
(Reviewer 45 of 89)
Chapter 2. Apr 3: From teachergirl
They said this: Her name is spelled Lily not Lilly. And the word is you're (the contraction for you are) not your (the possessive of you). Those are some pretty basic things to know.
Answer: I spelled Lily's name wrong because of what will be happening in later chapters. I don't know if you're a teacher, but having dyslexia is a real bitch for me. it's hard enough to write and to add in corrections is even more so. I request that I get cut a bit of slack for not having the story perfect when it comes to misspelling, punctuation or contractions. But I am trying my very best.
(Reviewer 46 of 89)
Chapter 3 . Apr 3: From teachergirl
They said this: Misspelling someone's name on purpose? That's not nice.
Answer: I misspelled Lily's name on purpose because of future events that will come later in the chapter.
(Reviewer 47 of 89)
Chapter 4. Apr 3: From teachergirl
They said this: Harry met Bill at the World Cup during the summer between third and fourth year. In addition, Bill was part of Harry's "family" who visited before the third task. That's when Bill met Fleur. It was not in sixth year!
Answer: I know this since it is cannon. However this story is not fully cannon. I mixed Cannon with this fanfiction as a nod to J.K. Rowling's works. Without her Harry Potter series we all would not be able to do any fanfictions in her world.
(Reviewer 48 of 89)
Chapter 1. Apr 3: From spacecowboy2011
They said this: Holy fuck this is some lazy ass writing. Script format is meant for the stage, not for us to try and muddle through. Story is a hot mess
Answer: I am sorry that it is a hot mess, and you may not like the script format, but it is my story.
(Reader 49 of 89)
Chapter 7. Apr 4: From A10riddick
They said this: Great chapter! Can't wait for the next one! What was the two lessons? First lesson? Second lesson? Was it the marriage?
Answer: Thank you and I'll be doing new chapters as fast as I can. The first lesson was knowing that he was a god. The second lesson was how to marry a couple as a god.
(Reviewer 50 of 89)
Chapter 3. Apr 5: From stylo1
They said this: this is horrible no ifs and buts about it
Answer: I am sorry you feel that way.
(Reviewer 51 of 89)
Chapter 7. May 3: From ultorek
They said this: well You said yourself that you're in need of a beta, so there is no point in writing about mistakes of that sort. Overall I've get through all 7 chapters in past two days. My opinion is clear, this story has potential. what I would like to see... mostly some character building. of Harry's ten wifes I can't say I know anything when it comes to personality, about more then four. not to mention other characters, some of which are OC's. creating is as sort of screen play it will be more difficult, but if you do not build them up, and build them good enough to be valid parts of the story, why introduce them at all? second thing I'd like to point at is a few of inconsistencies they might be easier for me to spot as I've read it in one go. At the beginning you were writing about eight wives Harry knew, plus one OC. then It turned to ten with no explanation. Resurrection of Lilly was hard an complicated enough to explain the need of fate to feel her up, jet now she seems perfectly fine with doing it over and over again with James. there is also a bit confusing bit about living arrangements. Let's get Hogwarts, let's leave in Potter's house. with the goblin nation... I believe you get the point.
Answer: Thank you for pointing out it's potential. I will try and have some character building in later chapters, and their personality will come along with it and it is a slow process. This story is a play more but it also is a story. Sorry about the confusion on Harry's wives that was a typo. All in all you do bring valid points and I am not perfect in writing. I do miss some things and it's people like you who can point them out so I can be a better writer in the future. I will try and make as many corrections as I can.
(Reviewer 52 of 89)
Chapter 7. May 24: From Isabelle6116
French: She said this: Je pense que vous avez republlier le chapitre 1 au lieu du 7
French: Answer: J'ai vérifié si j'avais republié le chapitre 1. Il s'est avéré que j'avais raison. Désolé si c'était confus.
French translated: I think you republished chapter 1 instead of 7
English Translated: Answer: I double checked if I republished Chapter 1. It turns out that I was correct. Sorry if that was confusing.
(Reviewer 53 of 89)
Chapter 2. May 25: From Guest
They said this: Can you add Susan Bones for pairing with Harry Potter
Answer: Actually Susan Bones is paired with Harry.
(Reviewer 54 of 89)
Chapter 7. May 25: From George Cristian810
They said This: I am sorry, i simply cannot read this.
Answer: I am sorry that you cannot read any more of this story and I would hate to see you go. I wish you all the best in your reading adventures.
(Reviewer 55 of 89)
Chapter 1. May 25: From Blueleader2010
They said this: What happened to chapter 7 I opened and it's gone.
Answer: I am sorry that it happened to you. I took the chapter down to make corrections and add more to the chapter.
(Reviewer 56 of 89)
chapter 2. May 25: From Isabelle6116
French: She said this: Jaime
French: Answer: Merci, qu'avez-vous aimé dans le chapitre 2.
French Translated: I like
English Translated: Answer: Thank you, what did you like in Chapter 2.
(Reviewer 57 of 89)
Chapter 3. May 29: From Isabelle6116
French: She said this: Je trouve que vous avez beaucoup amélioré cette histoire
French Answer: Merci, je pense que je l'ai fait aussi, mais encore une fois, certaines personnes peuvent ne pas le penser.
French Translated: I think you improved this story a lot
English Translated: Answer: Thank you, I think I did too, but then again some people may not think so.
(Reviewer 58 of 89)
Chapter 3. May 29: From Reader of Harry Potter
They said this: Thanks.
Answer: Your very welcome.
(Reviewer 58 of 89)
Chapter 4. Jun 2: Form decadenceofmysoul
They said this: Awesome update!
Answer: Thanks a lot it means a lot to me for your review.
(Reviewer 59 of 89)
Chapter 4. Jun 2: From firebird-fenix
They said this: Good story, it has some resemblance with Christmas wish, continue both
Answer: It may have some resemblance do to the characters are easy to write but it is not. I will continue both stories in the near future.
(Reviewer 60 of 89)
Chapter 5. Jun 6: From geekymom
They said this: Wonderful Chapter! Yay, Cedric! Was the ex-manager in on the plot to attack Harry and co.?
Answer: Thank you. No the ex-manager was not in on the plot to attack Harry. He was just a stuck up snob that just looks down on people. I used him as a way to show bigotry in the world.
(Reviewer 61 of 89)
Chapter 1. Jun 6: From Jonathan Deller
He said this: This story is very good. Will the formatting be like this for the whole story? It feels more like I am reading a play, including stage directions, rather than a story. The story is great. Maybe the formatting could be fixed?
Answer: The formatting will stay throughout the story and yes you are reading a play. It is for the adult.
(Reviewer 62 of 89)
Chapter 2. Jun 6: From Jonathan Deller
He said this: I just read your Authors note at the beginning of chapter 2. I was unaware that the script format is intentional. I do hope you continue the story.
Answer: yes the script format is intentional and I will be continuing the story for a long time to come.
(Reviewer 63 of 89)
Chapter 4. Jun 8: From Isabelle6116
French: She said this: Je viens de remarquer qu'il y a deux déesse de la nature. Est-ce voulu? Une déesse de la gestion serait peut être une bonne idée
French: Answer: Non, c'est en fait une erreur et sera corrigé. Une déesse de la gestion semble être une bonne idée, mais qui choisiriez-vous.
French Translated: I just noticed that there are two goddesses of nature. Is it wanted? A goddess of management might be a good idea
English Translated: Answer: No that is actually a mistake and will be corrected. A goddess of Management sounds like a good idea, but who would you choose.
(Reviewer 64 of 89)
Chapter 2. Jun 12: DriftWood1965
They said this: You really think a play format is 'easier to read'? You take out emotions of the speech by using it. It's robotic...and frankly, not worth readying.
Answer: It depends on who is reading the story. Have you ever read William Shakespeare's Hamlet, Romeo and Juliet, Othello, King Lear, or Macbeth. Those are in a play format and more confusing then what my story is. No offence here but if your looking for a perfect story, then may I suggest going out and buying a book.
(Reviewer 65 of 89)
Chapter 5. Jun 14: From SLYNNR
They said this: Please write about Petunia meeting her parents soon
Answer: I think I might just do that. If I do I will do a shout-out to you before the chapter.
(Reviewer 66 of 89)
Chapter 1. Jun 18: From spacecowboy2011
They said this: Script format is the cancer of fanfiction.
Answer: That is your opinion and you have every right to think like that. However over 5,000 plus other fanfiction stories are also written in T.V. Script and Play formats here on FFN.
(Reviewer 67 of 89)
Chapter 1. Jun 19: From plums
They said this: Your money numbers are just too big. It's kinda immersion breaking to see just silly numbers thrown around.
Answer: Well it is fanfiction so why not. I mean think about it this way. Harry's family were inventers and they invested heavily in both the magical and muggle worlds, and they had a high return rate. Let's add in the interest for over the years where the Galleons were never used.
(Reviewer 68 of 89)
Chapter 1. Jun 23From Stag Otter
They said this: [Henry P., Hermione G., Daphne G., Fleur D.] Henry P. or Harry P.?
Answer: Actually it's Harry P., Hermione G., Fleur D.,. Henry P. does show up in the story since he is Harry's great-grandfather.
(Reviewer 69 of 89)
Chapter 3. Jun 23: From Bennyt8
They said this: Sorry, but I can't agree with your view that the script format is easier to read. I've seen it work when stories are almost entirely dialogue with no narrative, but with each line of dialogue followed by a paragraph starting "He/She said" it doesn't make sense. It's a shame, because it's an interesting premise, but with your current format, I'm afraid I find it unreadable. I've tried, but it's not for me. Best of luck with your ongoing writing though.
Answer: I can see your argument and will not discredit you for your opinion. I thank you for trying to read the story and I hate to see you go. I wish you the best of luck in your next reading adventure.
(Reviewer 70 of 89)
Chapter 7. Jun 25: From SLYNNR
They said this: I CAN'T WAIT FOR NEVILLE'S PARENTS TO COME BACK TO HIM!
Answer: Neville's parents will be back and their appearance will be coming up very soon.
(Reviewer 71 of 89)
Chapter 1. Jun 26: From Nevarus
They said this: the first chapter or chapter 0 is really hard to read on the app. it has one paragraph or section (whatever it's called) covering the entire screen. it needs to be chopped up to make it easier to read.
Answer: in the FFN App there should be a pair of headphones in the top right corner. (Depending on the Device your using) The headphones will read the chapters for you. That should help with that issue you are having.
(Reviewer 72 of 89)
Chapter 1. Jun 26: From Nevarus
They said this: I agree with the whole intent thing, but if I believe lacking oxygen won't kill me... doesn't mean it won't kill me. I assume that you are trying to get across that you can negate it with an equal or greater will, but then you are stating that no one is more powerful than another (when you take their wills out of the equation, because knowledge apparently doesn't matter in this case). The way that I see magic working is something along the lines of: strength of magic 6 parts magical ability 2 parts intent (will) 2 parts knowledge. there are going to be people who possess more raw magical power.
Answer: Your total analogy is a good way to put how spells work. Like I had Fate said, it is all about intent and emotion. The intent let's say is to kill another witch or wizard, well the spell Avada Kedavra will do it even in the weakest form. However if you put hatred and malice into it through your emotion than it is more powerful.
(Reviewer 73 of 89)
Chapter 8. Jun 27: From Clive54
They said this: This is your best chapter so far. There was no repetition of previously spoken paragraphs and the courtroom even was excellent. Looking forward to reading more from you soon.
Answer: Thank you I do try and not repeat things, but it sometimes is needed. I will be writing more chapters soon.
(Reviewer 74 of 89)
Chapter 8. Jun 27: From SLYNNR
They said this: LIFE AND DEATH MAYBE TWO SIDES OF THE SAME COIN, BUT IT USUALLY HURTS TO FLIP IT. I LOVE HARRY TAKING ALBUS AND THE WIZENGAMOT DOWN. LET'S FACE IT RON PROBABLY HASN'T GOT MUCH FOR GINNY TO WORK WITH.
Answer: Life and Death are opposites of the same coin and your right, it hurts no matter how the coin lands. Harry just took back what Albus and Molly stole from him. It may only be one seat, but it is a start to cleaning up the Wizengamot. Ron thinks of Food and quidditch mostly, but he has always wanted a fuck toy, so why not let Ginny do that. Of course Ron don't have much, but at least it's a dick for Ginny to crave other than trying to get to Harry's galleons.
(Reviewer 75 of 89)
Chapter 8. Jun 27: From Guest
They said this: there is no house Snape dumb ass
Answer: Okay and that is your opinion. This is a fanfiction and not cannon so if you think of calling me a dumbass for using my imagination then so be it. I do ask that you don't call me a dumbass because of that, thank you.
(Reviewer 76 of 89)
Chapter 2. Jun 27: From Guest
They said this: shit story harry does not have a brother.
Answer: I respect your oppion, but this is my story. You may think it is shit but I think there are others who would disagree with you. A word of advice, if you don't like this story then don't read.
(Reviewer 77 of 89)
Chapter 8. Jun 27: From Isabelle6116
French: She said this: J'ai adoré ce chapitre et la vengeance d'Harry
French: Answer: Pourquoi merci, et la vengeance d'Harry n'est pas encore terminée. Attendez de voir comment Lily réagit et traite avec Molly, Dumbledore, Vernon et Pétunia. Cela viendra vers les derniers chapitres de cette histoire.
French Translated: I loved this chapter and Harry's revenge
English Translated: Answer: Why thank you, and Harry's revenge is not finished just yet. Wait and see how Lily reacts and deals with Molly, Dumbledore, Vernon and Petunia. That will come up towards the last chapters of this story.
(Reviewer 78 of 89)
chapter 1 . Jun 27: From Gnormann
They said this: How is this supposed to be a novel? It's in script format or something. Literally unreadable
Answer: I never said it was a novel. It is an adult play format and I am sorry that your having a hard time reading this story.
(Reviewer 79 of 89)
Chapter 8. Jun 27: From Rick1952
He said this: Out-freaking-standing. Keep up the good work.
Answer: Thank you and I will.
(Reviewer 80 of 89)
Chapter 8. Jun 28: From sonicthegravedigger
They said this: this story is awesome and I can't wait to see what happens next
Answer: Thanks, there is a lot more to come in this story.
(Reviewer 81 of 89)
Chapter 1 . Jun 29: From XxKonekoLoverxX
They said This: I'm gonna keep reading but I'm confused, how can Narcissa be 15 when draco will be almost the same age as harry?
Answer: Okay that may sound confusing, but it is not. Everyone knows in Cannon Andromeda, Bellatrix and Narcissa are sisters. It is also Cannon that Bellatrix married into the Lestrange Family, Narcissa Married into the Malfoy Family and Andromeda eloped. In this story The only switch is Narcissa was born a few years before Harry. Bellatrix is Draco mother instead of his aunt. Andromeda is still with Edward "Ted" Tonks. After Narcissa was born both of their parents died and Andromeda raised Narcissa until Lucius wanted a play thing since his wife Bellatrix is sitting in Azkaban.
(Reviewer 82 of 89)
Chapter 8. Jul 3: From totalsolution
They said this: Alright. This is... a disaster. At least purely from a stylistic point of view. I will try not to be caustic or anything, but it needs to be said. Your story, at the moment, is pretty much unreadable. Your sentence structure is just bad. It is overly simplistic, but tries hard not to be, which leads to awkward to read sentences. Especially in direct speech, people tend to use colloquialisms, certain fill words and have a certain sentence structure that slightly differs from person to person. People talk differently and if you have many people using direct speech, having a clear picture of how each person talks is an important aspect to give a character individuality. All your characters have the same style of talking, making them completely interchangeable. They have no individual flair or characteristics, which makes them seem to be just one big puddle of people with no personalities whatsoever. The way you describe reactions is overly dramatic and over the top. This leads to every single character seemingly overreacting to everything they are told, regardless of the actual personal meaning for them or anyone else. This beginning of the last chapter is a good example. Why would Harry bite that sentence out at people he likes and appreciates? Yeah, he might not like the minister, but him being so acidic against his loved ones makes him seem a petty asshole nobody would stand with for long. It would be very different, if he had been talking that way to Ron or the minister himself, but this is just bad writing. Then the plot. I am one of those people who likes a good power fantasy. I can even like a Mary ir Gary Stu. But! They need to work for that kind of power. Maybe not overly much, but there needs to be some flow, some struggle, some development. You just made up an omnipotent Goddess that, with merely a flick of her hand, solved every single one of Harry's problems for him. This makes him very much a Gary Stu, just with absolutely no interesting struggle to get there. You took away the main characters background story, which made them who they are. Their whole development was thrown out the window just so they could have their happy family life. I understand that somewhat. But why did you then took Harry Potter and Hermione Granger? You could have just ignored everything else, and written this story with other people, since it would make no difference. Let me make this clear, I really like the basis of your story. The plot is, in my opinion, much too dependent of that weird Goddess, who should only enable Harry and maybe Hermione to travel back in time and work the rest out for themselves, even if she got involved and changed things. Show, don't tell, is how authors describe the process. Don't tell us what she changed. Let your characters explore that and gradually find out with us. That also gives you possibilities for subplots. Lastly, what is it with that absolutely horrendous italics. Why do you use them? There are certain standards to writing and you should hold yourself to them. Using italics for direct speech is. Not. Done. Use the usual ways to write direct speech or it gets tedious for readers to keep up. Please.
So, to summarize:
1. You've got the basis for an interesting storyline, but exaggerated the changes you told us about. Let Harry and company find those changes out for themselves and that way show us, instead of tell us.
2. Use international standard punctuation for direct speech instead of italics.
3. You absolutely need to reduce the overdramatic and exaggerated reactions of people to any statement. Make them more realistic. Also, don't make the statements too dramatic either. The minister wanting to talk to you is news. It's not bad news until you know what he wants, so people would only jokingly say that they had bad news, but not seriously .
4. Personalize and individualize the character roster to show each character's traits, so that they don't seem to be so interchangeable and similar to one another. Good luck.
Answer: I get what you're saying and they are valid points. I will try and take what you say and put the criticism to heart and utilize it to the best of my ability.
(Reviewer 83 of 89)
Chapter 8. Jul 3 TiffNicole18
She said this: Okay so I find a few, well kinda glaring issues.
1) in your chapter heading you call Molly - Molly Lucretia but in your actual chapter you call her Molly Priscilla
2) It's Severus Tobias Snape, Nott not Knott, and you never explain about Narcissa and how she is 15 and who Draco's mother is.
3) It's Lily not Lilly
4) The script style you have is very hard to read and to be honest is a turn off.
5) I kinda like the concept but it's just too much at one time. Between Fate being his mother, the 10 marriages, the Goblin adoption..
6) Honestly I'd rather not read the sexual scenes... you can write a great fanfic without all of that in there by just implying things. That's just my opinion though.
Answer: I see all six points and I will address them one by one.
1. Molly's middle name was a mistake. Her full name is Molly Priscilla Weasley (née Prewett)
2. I understand Severus Snape's middle name is Tobias, but for this story Declan sounds a lot better and I changed it for that reason. It doesn't mean in cannon it was changed.
3. I understand Lily's name is spelled wrong and I spelled it Lilly. I did that on purpose because of what will happen later on in the story. You will see why in later chapters.
4. I am sorry that you're having a hard time reading this story in script form. It is a strong suit of my writing style. I apologize if it is a turn off for you.
5. Thank you for the concept and I understand it may be a bit much but after all it is just a story and nothing more.
6. The sex scenes you surely do not have to read. I do have this in every chapter that has them: (THERE IS A SEXUAL CONTENT WARING IN THIS CHAPTER! 18 AND OVER PLEASE!) If you are under 18 please skip and then continue reading, Thank you! If the sexual content is not your cup of tea then please skip before continuing to read, Again Thank You! That way you can just skip over them and continue reading.
(Reviewer 84 of 89)
Chapter 9. Jul 11: From Isabelle6116
French: She said this: J'ai hâte de voir ce qui va se passer avec les parents de Neville. J'espère que vous prolongerez cette histoire au delà de leurs année a Poudlard pour voir ce qu'ils feront du monde
French: Answer: Le prochain chapitre est en cours d'élaboration après ce chapitre spécial. J'ai eu quelques demandes personnelles pour continuer cette histoire à travers les années 5-7. Je pourrais ajouter deux années de plus à Poudlard, mais je ne suis pas encore sûr. Je pensais à leurs années de collège et à la vie après avec leurs enfants.
English Translated: She said this: I can't wait to see what will happen with Neville's parents. I hope you will extend this story beyond their years at Hogwarts to see what they will do with the world.
English Translated: Answer: The next Chapter is being worked on after this Chapter Special. I have had a few personal requests to continue this story through years 5-7. I might add two more years of Hogwarts, however I am unsure yet. I was thinking of their college years and life afterwards with their children.
(Reviewer 85 of 89)
Chapter 9 . 21h ago: From Guest
They said this: OK back in chapter 6 you had Death give Harry a wand and said that nobody could use the wand except for him and his wives and then you had Barty crouch jr. take his wand and cast the dark mark in the sky. If you give someone what is essentially a soul bound weapon remember that in later chapters to not have plot holes.
Answer: Okay your right, in the story Death did make a soul bonded wand for Harry and his wives, however I didn't say that it couldn't cast at least one spell before it stopped working for the one who stole it or found it. I will try and not to put plot holes in the later chapters so it don't come back to me and bite me in the ass later on.
(Reviewer 86 of 89)
Chapter 9 . 3h ago: From geekymom
She said this: Wonderful chapter. just a correction on the -in-law... the plural (s) comes before the in-law. i.e. fathers-in-law.
Answer: Thank you and I will try and remember that for the near future.
Author's Note 2: Okay, I think I have missed three of my reviewers somewhere along the way out of six pages. So it is 86 reviews out of 89. I will look for the missing three and if I get to 178 reviews I will add those three that I have missed. I hope everyone enjoyed this Harry Potter Changing The Future chapter special: Answering Readers and Reviewers.
Fanfiction Story Recommendation: There is no story recommendation at this time.
Please write a review and I will get back to you as quickly as I can. If you want to read more chapters then don't forget to add it into your favorites to get updates. Guests: I will be able to read your comments but I will be unable to respond. For that I apologize.
Thank you for reading this chapter! I Hope you enjoyed and keep reading everyone! 😊