Magic Wild
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I wanted to revamp this story so here's a better update for Chapter one, and tell me what you think, okay?
It was early daytime and at a neighborhood with a sign saying Privet Drive on it was solemn as mist weaved through the air and the streetlamps gave off their gentle glow. In one of the cookie cut white houses, a light was seen with two people, a man and a woman talking to each other. These two were Mr. and Mrs. Dursley, and they were talking while a bundle with a baby boy was on the table sleeping with a strange scar on his forehead. It was in the shape of a lightning bolt and it seemed to glow red with blood droplets coming out of it. The Dursley's were not happy, not at all. This bundle they had found on their doorstep was their 'freaky' nephew from Mrs. Dursley's dead sister, Lily. They were sleeping until the sun started to peek in their window, and Mrs. Dursley went to get the morning milk and saw the bundle with a letter. She looked into the bundle and saw the baby, when she read the letter she was mad that she now had to care for 'one of them' along with her sweet baby boy Dudley. She went to wake Vernon, and they both decided to talk about what to do with the freak. After much time had passed, Vernon said, "Let's just take it with us to the campsite and we'll leave it in a place where it will never be found." Then Petunia agreed, "Yes, let the wild animals eat it, and we can go on with our normal lives." After that they started packing what they needed while getting their precious Dudley comfortable in his car seat for the trip. They put the bundle containing Harry in a basket without a second thought, and started driving towards the campsite. All along the way there, little Harry never woke up once, and yet Dudley cried like crazy in his seat earning some coos from his parents on how sweet he was. After passing the gate for the campsite and paying the toll fee, the Dursleys went to pick their spot and find a hidden trail to dump the freak alone. They chose a cabin that had a porch on it and a plants hanging in special pots from the roof of said porch. They got settled in and made ready to leave little Harry in the woods nearby with no-one to find him at all. Vernon took Harry in his bundle and basket while Petunia cared for Dudley; then he went off towards a trail and then strayed from it to find a river where he saw many animal tracks. Near the river was a rock carved by both weather and time until it was smooth and flat on top, Vernon left the bundle there and took the basket back to make no-one the wiser that he had done something wrong. He looked at the bundle and sneered in delight as he left with a chuckle coming from his mouth. Little did he realize that watching him was a black colored female fox with orange-yellow eyes, and after seeing the man leave; she headed for the bundle. She had just got close enough to see what was in the bundle, when Harry opened his eyes and cooed as she looked at him. They looked at each other in curiosity and amazement, while she sniffed him; he was laughing as her nose tickled him. Then she took the bundle in her jaws carefully to carry him back to her den and mate, along with her six kits. Harry was laughing and clapping his little hands as he was taken to his new home and family. As the female fox carried her new 'son' floating over her was a spirit, a man with blue robes and a long white beard. This spirit was following them cause this child needed help and he wanted to help raise him while teaching him all he needed to know while growing up. Until little Harry was eleven years old, he was to learn from both his family and this spirit what he could.
All while Harry was being taken to his new home and family, another pair of parents were walking on a different trail with their baby girl in her mom's arms. They were there to enjoy some camping too, and to show their little treasure some stuff, like trees, leaves, and the various animal tracks left in the ground. After walking around for a good five minutes they both stopped at a bench to catch their breath and have a drink of water each. They placed their little girl near them on the ground while looking around at the beautiful scenery; they did not think to keep their daughter in sight cause she was always quiet and hardly ever moved around. However little did they know, a family of red foxes was watching them all, and Hermione was excited to see the family; so she started crawling towards them quietly. Her parents did not notice she was gone until it was too late, Hermione had crawled to the foxes and was holding onto the father and mother fox each on their main bodies. She was then pounced on by their four kits and she laughed as their tongues licked her face. The whole family then ran off with Hermione being held in the father's mouth carefully towards their den. Once her parents saw she was gone they shouted for her and told the campsite security to look for their daughter, but all to no avail. They cried sad tears and decided to leave for home, after packing up everything and driving back to their home, they were sad to have lost their treasure and were crying all the way home. Once they reached their home, they went to their bedroom and held each other in remorse and pain. They fell asleep after crying so much, and dreamed of a life without their daughter around. While Hermione was sleeping in her new family's den, a female spirit was floating over her, just like Harry had the male spirit. She was to teach Hermione same as her fox family, and then have her meet Harry when they were ready.
As the day finished, and the sun was setting in the sky, a man in a castle was sitting in his throne chair in his office thinking about the boy he had left with the letter. He thought about how this would make the boy be molded enough to face his destiny by his relatives abuse. He also thought about the marriage contract between Harry and Ginny Weasley he had done, plus how Ron Weasley would befriend him on the train. There was also the mum Harry would find in Molly Weasley, and those three were perfect for keeping the boy in line. They would keep him on the right path for the Greater Good and away from those that were dark, like the Malfoys. As he sucked on a lemon drop, Albus was happy to see that everything was going to plan, unaware that his phoenix Fawkes was shaking his head at his plans. The fiery bird was also smiling in secret cause he knew that Harry and Hermione were safe until their eleventh birthday, when they came to Hogwarts; he would keep them safe as best he could.
This is where I'll end for now on chapter one, see you next chapter. Remember to review and tell me your thoughts on the edits for each chapter, okay.