Hello people of the internet! This is my first fanfic on this site and i'm a little rusty. Please, review so I can know how to improve my writing!

~ Shelfly

Planet Vegeta - During the destructin

Raditz POV

The ringing of sirens rung in both of my ears loudly, people running and screaming trying to get to space pods. They were saying things like "Freiza is destroying the pla-" I didnt hear the rest because of the sirens, but they were also talking about my father. I couldn't think about why because of the panic, something to do with Frieza and dad. "RADITZ!" My Mother's voice fought over the sirens, reaching my ears. I turned around to look at her, she was holding Kakarot, he was crying loudly, maybe because of the sirens or the panic in general."Mom! What is going on!"I said with panick in my voice running over to her. "I cant say right now Raditz, but we have to leave NOW!" "What about father!" "I don't know where he is, but I know he would want you and Kakarot in the space pods!" Just as she finished the sentence, we say a giant yellow-orange ball coming to the planet followed by my Father!

Bardock POV

I just barely dodged Frieza's attack, if that would of hit me I would have been dead for sure. Wait, its going straight towards the planet! There is no way I can stop the attack on my own, and I doubt anyone is going to try it. I have to get my family off this planet! I fly as fast as I can toward the planet, I see Gine holding a crying Kakarot and Raditz following close behind them running toward 3 space pods. "Gine! Raditz!" Gine turns around and smiles brightly before returning to her panicked state. "Bardock! Come on!" "Dad!" I grab Raditz and rush to the space pod with Gine close behind. I put Raditz and a space pod and Gine puts Kakarot in the one next to it. They were all on the dock that headed to a planet called "Earth". I open the last space pod and yell"Gine get in!" "No! Leave me here! Your the strongest saiyan, even stronger than King Vegeta himself! You can protect them if something happens!"

"You can come with me!"

"The space pod is way too small for two people!" She was able to push me into the pod because of my weak state and close it. "I love you, and I love my two sons. Don't let me down, Bardock! Stay safe and keep Raditz and Kakarot safe too, I all of you so much" And with that, our ships blasted away from our home. The last thing I saw before the planet was blown to bits was the smile of my wife.

Raditz POV

M-my home...it was just destroyed. Mother and all my friends... there all dead. My entire race gone... What do we do now?

3rd Person POV

Raditz pondered in his pod, wondering what the hell just happened and Bardock was left dumbfounded. Goku, or Kakarot had cried himself to sleep.

Well that's the end of my first story! Was it good, bad, decent? Please leave a review :D