This is my first time EVER writing a story, please give criticism in the comments!

Suzuki POV:

Suzuki Satoru was an average 8 year old boy in the year 2185, his mother could not afford to get him a proper education, which would prevent him from getting a good paying job that didn't completely overwork him in the future, but that didn't stop him from dreaming about a better life for him and his family. Which is exactly what he thought this situation was, a dream. He was currently standing in a beautiful marble hallway, its craftsmanship was unrivalled by anything he's ever seen, although it's not like he's ever seen anything to compare it to.

"I think I've gotten myself into quite the pickle here..." He thought aloud. Perhaps this is one of those 'Isekais' his mother bought for him to read once? He doubted something this pretty could exist on earth. He was dressed in weird clothes too, long flowing purple robes, with a gold trim on the edges, including shoulder armor with red orbs in them. 'What weird clothes... they kind of look cool though... they're definitely super expensive, I can't afford these!' And so, Suzuki decided to start off down this hallway, to see if he could find anyone who could tell him where he was.

Decrement POV:

I am one of the 41 homunculus maids who serve Nazarick, and more importantly, serve Ainz-sama. Which is why when Ainz-sama said that we should take breaks from our work, we were all downhearted at the thought that we failed him, although that was quickly amended when he put us on a rotation of personally serving him. Today was my day to serve him, but I can't find Ainz-sama! He just disappeared without letting me come with him... but nonetheless, it is our duty to serve Ainz-sama, so I must find him, wherever he is. I shall start by informing Sebas-sama, perhaps he knows where Ainz-sama is.

"Sebas-sama!" I shouted out from behind his back. He was accompanied by that human maid... Tsuare? I think that was her name. Ainz-sama's generosity is truly unrivalled, letting a mere human serve in Nazarick, thankfully she isn't on the rotation to serve him, I don't think she would be able to even begin to comprehend how to serve a supreme being.

"Yes Decrement? What is it?"

"A-ainz-sama... d-dissapeared from his room! He didn't even tell me where he was going."

"This is cause for concern, I shall contact Lady Albedo to see if he informed her of where he went."

"Lady Albedo?"

'What is it Sebas?'

"Ainz-sama's maid for the day, Decrement, says that Ainz-sama suddenly dissapeared from his quarters without telling her where he was going, or bringing her with him."

'What??!! Did he gate out or did he just dissapear?'

"I do believe he dissapeared, she would not be causing such a commotion if he simply gated out."

'Understood, I shall inform the other guardians and put Nazarick in high alert mode.'

"Understood. Thank you Decrement, for bringing this information to us, you resume your normal duties for the time being."

"Thank you, Sebas-sama."

CZ2128 POV:

I am currently patrolling the hallways of Nazarick due to Ainz-sama's disappearance, and while the Pleiades and Guardians can still sense Ainz-sama's presence in Nazarick, we can't pinpoint his exact location. So Albedos having all servants on all floors look for Ainz-sama, or a hint to where he is. However, I do believe I might have found a hint, because what else would you call a 8 year old human child wearing Ainz-sama's clothes running throughout Nazarick?

"Little boy." I say in my signature monotone voice. The boy pauses in his tracks. Curious.

"I-I didn't mean it! I swear! I don't know how I got here!"

I approach him slowly, with my finger on the trigger of my gun.

"Turn around."

He rotates slowly, and flinches when he see my gun pointed at him. Interesting. How would he know what a gun is if he's a new worlder?

"Why are you wearing Ainz-sama's clothes?"

"I don't know! I just arrived here and they were on me!"

If he isn't lying, and his appearance lines up with the time Ainz-sama disappearance, then the rational hypothesis would be that Ainz-sama has been turned into a human child. It's a good thing I found him, and not Albedo. I let my gun hang at my waist, and he seems to be somewhat relived, but he's still quite scared, with tears in his eyes. Sort of like a cute puppy. Mhm. Cute.

"What's your name?"

"S-Suzuki Satoru."

Interesting. Ainz-sama's name is truly Suzuki? This would also mean Ainz-sama is originally a human. No matter, he's still a supreme being.

"Come here."

He edges his way over to me, and I pick him up in my arms like I do Eclair. Ainz-sama in this form is very cuddleable. I could get used to this.

"I am Shizu Delta, you'll be coming with me for the time being. Although you aren't in trouble, we will need to ask you some questions."

"A-alright Shizu-san..."

And so we set off towards the throne room, to make contact with Lady Albedo.

Alright! 1st chapter done! Obviously little suzuki will be introduced to the all denizens of Nazarick, but please tell me what characters you'd like to be in the next chapter, and if I should pull in characters from outside the tomb. I'd also like to know what I can do to improve my writing, so please tell me how I can improve in some areas!p.s: Shizu is the best Pleiades