This is my first attempt at a gravity falls fanfiction. I have no idea what I am doing! Sorry if it's short. Other chapters should be better quality. First chapter fixed
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Chapter 1
"Think about it kid," The yellow Will said, "All the mysteries of the universe for just one puppet."
"Five minutes until self destruction." the laptop beeped.
Pacifica SouthEast began to panic. She had stayed up all night trying to figure out the password for the laptop. At this point she was hungry, exhausted, and desperate. This strange version of Will had offered her the password if she gave him one of Gideon's sock puppets. She wanted to say yes, but even in her slightly foggy mind, she did not trust him. Then again, she could not loose the information that the laptop could be holding. On the other hand, it would break Gideon's heart.
"But Gideon worked so hard on these." Pacifica said as she picked up one of her cousins beloved sock puppets.
"How about all the things you gave up for him? What did he ever do for you?" he asked
Pacifica thought of all the things that she did give up. The entire summer she had been making sacrifices for him. Yet, that was what family does for each other, right? Besides, Gideon would devastated if his puppet show was ruined. He was so excited about a girl, other than Mabel Gleeful, was showing interest with him.
"It seems like he does not really care about what you think." The dream demon persuaded.
That did seem like the case a lot of the time. He refused to accept her relationship with Dipper Gleeful, no matter how many times he had saved their lives. He never was really there when something was important to her. Especially now that they found the laptop, possibly their key to finding the author, he abandoned her. She had to admit that she was slightly frustrated that he left her on her own when they were so close to discovering the author.
"One puppet for the secrets of the universe." He persuaded "Is that not the deal of the century?"
"Just one puppet?" she asked
"Just one puppet." he responded as he reached out his hand. She tried to ignore the blue flames surrounding his hand.
She was about to reach out her own hand and accept the deal when a voice interrupted her.
"Stop!" The voice screamed
She turned around to see a young boy. He was dressed like Gideon with the same exact hat and with a vest and shirt only slightly different colored than Gideon. He was skinny even for a preteen and had a mop of brown hair. Dare she say he looked like a young Dipper.
"Pacifica?" he asked before shaking his head. "Never mind. Whatever he promised you, I assure you that it is not worth it. He will take advantage of you in ways you could not even imagine."
"Ummm... I guess no deal, then." She told the demon as she stepped away.
The once yellow demon turned red. "Do you have any idea what you cost me?!" He screamed.
"Something you were most likely going to use to hurt me and family." The boy responded "So I guess I have a perfect understanding of what I cost you."
Pacifica was impressed by the young boys courage. The triangle was actually, really terrifying at the moment. The boy looked around twelve, which was really no older than Gideon. How in the world did he have the guts to stand up to such a creature. Just looking at the demon sent chills down her spine, it was even worse now that he was mad.
"You will regret this Pine Tree."
"You have no vessel, Bill." The boy snapped "You can't hurt anyone."
"Don't challenge me." Bill, apparently was his name, snarled. They were interrupted by Dipper storming in. She let out a sigh of relief once she saw her boyfriend's familiar face.
"I don't know who you are, but so help me if you hurt her I will..." He paused when he saw the boy.
"It can't be." He replied as he starred at the boy. "Impossible."
"I really look like that in this world?" The boy whined.
Wait, did he just refer to Dipper as himself? Than again, he really did look like a younger version of Dipper. He had the same chin, hair, and scrawny body. Pacifica would bet one of her favorite sweaters that he had the same birthmark under his hat. Did he mention something about another world?
The demon's laughter echoed through the room. "Oh this is too good. How about, I take you?" he pointed to Dipper. "To my world and leave Pine Tree here. It was really my fault leaving the rift open for you to follow me anyway. Now I can close it and leave you here. Have fun dealing with the Mable in this universe. I hear from my brother that she is just a blast."
"Don't you dare." Her Dipper responded before he disappeared in a poof with the demon.
There was a moment of silence before the boy spoke up. "So there is a Mabel in this world?"
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Please review and tell me if it is as terrible as I think it is. Also tell me if anyone wants me to continue it.
