Hello everybody, sorry for the wait for a new story or update. I had writer's block for the past month and couldn't come up with anything. Anywho, I will be giving stories I will not write anymore up for adoption.
Anyways, I hope you all like my rewritten version of The Delinquent Devil. I thought a lot on how to do this. I also came up with a Stand and it's powers.
Summary: Yare Yare Daze. My name is Naruto Kujo, I'm a second year student at Kuoh Academy and the school's delinquent. To add more to my life, I am the newest member of Sona Sitri's Peerage. I guess I can not complain, as I now have people who I will protect with all my strength.
Naruto, The Delinquent Devil
Chapter 1- A Bizarre Start
*Ring!*
*Ring!*
*Ri-SMASH!*
"*Yawn* Another day of school." A male teenage voice said as he stood up. Standing at 6'3", the male ran his hands through his blonde locks. Piercing blue eyes, looked around the rather plain bedroom. His body is muscular, but he has a rather lean frame. Three, distinct whisker like scars on each cheek.
After a quick shower, the person is wearing a black knee length gakuran, it looks more like a trench coat with a stiff collar. The upper chest open with the use of two gold buttons in the shape of arrows: one pointing up and the other down, and showing a red-orange shirt. The gakuran has an orange flame like pattern on the bottom, collar, and wrists. A pair of fitting black pants held up by a gold chain like belt. His outfit is completed with a pair of black shoes and a black headband with a orange swirl pattern.
After a quick breakfast, he grabbed his messenger bag and left. A stray paper fell out of the bag and flew in front of the camera. 'Naruto Kujo' is what read on the paper.
~X~
On his way to school, Naruto sighed and looked down. He tried to avoid the stares of people. In particular the stares of female students, *cough cough fangirls cough*
Unfortunately, the world has another plan. A group of about five girls spots him and walk up to him. "Hello Naruto-kun!" The first girl says as he walked next to him. Naruto just looked down at her as she blushed.
"Who do you think you are talking to Naruto-kun like that!" A second girl yelled to the first one as she pushed her out of the way. A small argument ensued as they walked behind Naruto.
"Shut up! You all are annoying!" Naruto yelled as he turned around. Just as fangirls did, they began to squeal and blush. Walking onto campus, Naruto received more looks from his fellow students. The males glared as they mumbled about pretty boys, and some of the girls blushed and began whispering to themselves.
~Naruto's P.O.V~
High School, possible the worse place a teenager can be in. Especially if you are me. The girls love me for reasons I do not know. The guys hate me; branding me a delinquent and thinking I am trying to steal the female population from them.
Especially three in particular, the Perverted Trio. Matsuda, Motohama, and Issei Hyoudou. If you couldn't tell from the name, they are the biggest perverts on campus.
Yet in the male population, they see themselves as betters compared to me. In the eyes of the female population however, they are lower than a dog's shit.
Speaking of which, I can see them peeking into the girl's locker room from a hole in the wall. Sighing, I walked over to them to "try" to get them to leave. Either way, they try to fight me.
"You three just don't learn do you?" I asked them as they jumped up and turned around to face me. "Shut up! Pretty boys like you just look down on us!" Issei yelled as he glared at me.
"If it wasn't for you and Yuuto, we would be swimming in glorious oppai!" Motohama said as his friends agreed. I resisted the urge to facepalm and just took in a deep breath.
"Look if you want girls to like you three, stop being perverts." I said trying to get them off my back. "Yeah right! You just want the oppai all for yourself!" Issei yelled as he threw a punch at me.
~?'s P.O.V~
As president of the Student Council, I Sona Sitri or my alias Souna Shitori start my school days walking around campus to make sure things are in order. As I walked to behind the locker rooms, I noticed a small commotion.
As usual, the Perverted Trio is there. However, there is also Naruto Kujo; the school's delinquent. I saw Issei Hyoudou throw a punch at Naruto. The blonde caught it with ease while glaring at the brown haired pervert.
"I tried to get through this without much trouble, I guess you just won't listen." I heard Naruto say as his whole demeanor changed. His facial expression turned cold and his tone turned cold.
The Perverted Trio, being idiots, decided to pick a fight with the delinquent. Issei threw another punch, but Naruto just leaned his head to the left to dodge. Naruto then let go of Issei's hand and socked him across the face.
Issei's back hit the wall as his nose was bleeding. Motohama charged at Naruto with his fists raised. Naruto just side stepped, stook his foot out, tripped him, and then slammed his elbow on Motohama's back.
Matsuda was cowering on the floor seeing his two friends taken down so easily. "I would've let you three go without any trouble. Just learn from their mistakes." Naruto said as he turned around.
I saw Matsuda not heed his warning and jumped at Naruto. What caught me off guard is that Matsuda fly back with his nose broken. Then I noticed it, I could just barely see it. An arm connecting to Naruto's shoulder punched Matsuda. I could not see it clearly but I saw it. Needing to get to the bottom of it, I walked over to him.
~Normal P.O.V~
"Naruto Kujo-san, you have to come with me." Sona said as she walked up to the delinquent. "Why do I have to?" Naruto replied as he turned around to face her. Sona said nothing as she just pointed to the three beat up perverts.
Sighing, Naruto followed her back to the Student Council room. Unknown to him, a pair of eyes was watching him with interest. 'Looks like I found another interesting student here.' The owner of the eyes said with a small giggle.
~Student Council Room~
When they arrived, Sona closed the door and looked at Naruto curiously. "So, care to explain to me why you were fighting them?" Sona asked the delinquent. "I tried to get them to leave peacefully, but they wouldn't listen." Naruto said the gist of what happened.
"Alright, I'll let you off with a warning this time." Sona said as she crossed her arms. Naruto just sighed and left the room. "Tsubaki." Sona said as a magic circle formed and out came the Vice President.
"Yes?" Tsubaki asked. "I want you to help me keep an eye on Naruto Kujo." Sona said.
~Two Days Later~
Naruto is now walking at around sunset through the park on his way home from work. As he was walking up to the fountain, he noticed Issei was there with a rather beautiful girl.
'Huh, looks like he actually got himself a girlfriend. I give her my sympathy.' Naruto thought as he walked through the trees in order not to disturb them. That is until he heard the girl say something that made him stop cold.
"Will you die for me?" She said as the sky changed color and she also changed. She is now taller and wearing an outfit that reminded Naruto of something akin to bondage. The thing threw him off was the pair of black wings on her back.
"W-What!?" Issei asked in shock. Naruto had to give him props, he's not focused on a girl's bust this time. Naruto just sighed, why is his life so… bizarre. Naruto then made his presence known.
"Yare yare daze. Leave the pervert alone." Naruto said keeping a cool face. Turning around, the girl created a pink spear like weapon. "Ahh a witness. I can't allow you to live." She said as she threw the spear at Naruto.
Just as it was a meter from Naruto, the same arm formed and punched the spear away. "W-What was that?" She asked as she created another spear. Taking the opportunity, Issei ran like a little bitch.
"He escaped! All because of you! My partner will kill him, but I am mad!" She cried as she formed multiple more spears. She sent them all at Naruto and then began leaving with a smirk on her face. Until she heard something that made her stop.
MuraMuraMuraMuraMuraMuraMuraMuraMuraMuraMuraMuraMuraMuraMuraMuraMuraMuraMuraMuraMuraMuraMuraMuraMuraMuraMuraMuraMuraMuraMuraMura!
Turning around, she saw Naruto standing there completely unharmed but with something standing before him. It was humanoid and stood the same height as Naruto. It also has the same type of build as Naruto, lean and muscular.
It has orange 'skin' for its main color. Over its body, it has gold yellow armor pieces on his body: bracers with gauntlets that has orange studs on the knuckles, a breastplate covering the upper chest, cuisse and greaves. It has gold but with an orange outline shoulder pads in the shape of arrows. It's most noticeable feature is the helmet it is wearing. (It is like an Imperial Officer Helmet from Skyrim, just replace the dragon symbol with a orange spiral.)
"W-What is that?" She asked as she formed another spear. "This is my Stand, Fallen World!" Naruto said as Fallen World took a stance. 'I'll have to be careful. I've never heard of a Stand before.' She thought.
"What is your name anyway?" Naruto asked as he took a step forward. "I'll tell you just before you die. My name is Raynare." The newly name Raynare said in an arrogant tone.
"Naruto Kujo." Naruto replied as he took a step forward. "To bad I won't remember your name after you die." Raynare said as she created another spear and threw it.
Fallen World grabbed the spear and then threw it to the side. Releasing a grunt, Raynare used her wings to fly into the air. Fallen World hit the ground with a Mura, then something happened that shocked Raynare.
The chunks of the ground began to float into the air with a blue aura surrounding it. Naruto pointed to Raynare and Fallen World let out a cry and began hitting the chunks of earth at Raynare.
MuraMuraMuraMuraMuraMuraMuraMuraMuraMuraMuraMuraMuraMura Fallen World cried as Raynare created more spears to counter the rocks. More of the rocks are above her, she has yet to notice.
"Fallen Meteors!" Naruto cried as the rocks above Raynare glowed red and were falling down on Raynare. The rocks mainly hit her wings causing her to lose her flight and fall to the ground.
"Cheap trick." Raynare said as she stood up. "A cheap trick is attacking someone who cannot defend himself." Naruto said as he walked up to Raynare. He then used Fallen World to grab Raynare by her throat.
"I can crush your throat right now." Naruto began as Fallen World's grip began tightening around Raynare's neck. "But I'll let you go." Naruto said as Fallen World slammed her onto the ground.
Naruto then turned around and began walking away. 'I'm not taking this falling down!' Raynare said as she stood up. She then formed a pink spear and lunged at Naruto.
Raynare was not expecting Fallen World to reappear. "I was serious about letting you go, oh well. After this, you might want to see a good doctor." Naruto said as Fallen World broke her wrist. Raynare's body then was surrounded by a red aura.
Before anything happened, she was able to reach into her breasts and pulled out what looked like a small red ball. The ball was dropped and a smoke was released from the ball as Raynare held her breath.
'W-Why do I feel so heavy!?' Raynare said as she could not move from the spot she was standing on. She could not hold her breath for much longer. Under her, the floor began to crack. She could barely look up and saw Fallen World pull back its fists.
MuraMuraMuraMuraMuraMuraMuraMuraMuraMuraMuraMuraMuraMuraMuraMuraMuraMuraMuraMuraMuraMuraMuraMuraMuraMuraMuraMuraMuraMuraMuraMuraMuraMuraMuraMuraMuraMuraMuraMuraMuraMuraMuraMuraMuraMuraMuraMuraMuraMuraMuraMuraMuraMuraMuraMura!
Fallen World introduced Raynare to its fists as it gave her a furious barrage of punched. Not only was she being crushed by an unknown force to her, she was having bones broken.
"Have a nice flight!" Naruto said as pointed away and Fallen World pulled back its right fist. "Mura!" Fallen World cried as its fist glowed blue and it gave a powerful uppercut to Raynare.
She was sent flying upward as her whole body glowed blue. Raynare was not able to control herself as she continued upward. "Now I feel that you should come back down to earth." Naruto said as Raynare then glowed red, and plummeted from fifteen meters in the air. She would have gotten back up, if not for her wings to be glowing red.
"I guess this is goodbye." Naruto said as Fallen World disappeared. He then turned around and went on his way. Only for Fallen World to form again to catch a yellow spear.
"Huh, I guess a pitiful creature like yourself can be worth something." A new female voice said as Naruto turned around. He saw a navy blue haired female with wings similar to Raynare's in the air.
"But I guess a low human has limits." She said as she created another spear. She was about to throw the spear, if not for a sharp stone that impaled her right shoulder. She looked down to see Fallen World with it's arm stretched out like it threw something.
"GAH! How dare a low level being like you do this to me!" She yelled in anger as she created another spear. 'She's just asking for me to go up there to beat her.' Naruto thought as he was starting to feel annoyed by this chick.
"I guess I can tell you my name before you die. My name is Kalawarner." Kalawarner introduced herself as she created a spear in her left hand. "You may have defeated Raynare, but you can never defeat me." Kalawarner yelled as she threw the spear at Naruto.
Said delinquent said nothing as a spear headed his way. Just as it was an inch from impaling his back, Fallen World grabbed the spear. "You know, if you keep underestimating me; you'll get killed." Naruto said coldly as Fallen World destroyed the spear.
MuraMuraMuraMuraMuraMuraMuraMuraMuraMuraMuraMuraMuraMura! Cried Fallen World as it began destroying the ground around Naruto. The chunks of concrete began to glow blue as they went up to surround Kalawarner.
"What is this? Stalling for a plan!?" Kalawarner said as she used another spear to try to move the chunks of concrete. Naruto said nothing as Fallen World destroyed a tree that was behind him. Fallen World then grabbed the sharpest piece of the wood pieces and aimed it.
"You know, you trying to fight me is useless." Naruto said as the piece of wood glowed red.
Fallen World threw the piece of wood at the pieces of concrete and it bounced off each one as the wood repeatedly cut Kalawarner. "You're finished." Naruto said as the chunk of wood pierced Kalawarner's stomach.
Then the pieces of concrete glowed red and the ones above Kalawarner caused her to crash to the ground. "That's that."Naruto said as Fallen World disappeared. "I-I'm still here." Raynare weakly said as she tried to move her weak body.
Naruto just huffed as he walked over to Raynare and crouched down. "You are still awake?" Naruto said as Raynare glared at him. She quickly formed a spear and stabbed Naruto. Well, she would have if not for Fallen World's hand to form and grab the spear.
"Well, I guess this is by for now." Naruto said as he stood up and lifted Raynare's head. Raynare let out a few weak chuckles and then said something that surprised Naruto.
"The smoke was a poison. The poison takes effect in ten minutes, and it's been nine." Raynare said as she finally fainted. Sweat began to fall from Naruto's face as his vision began to get blurry.
He fell on all fours and began to cough up blood. "C-cheap trick *cough!* bitch." Naruto coughed out as blood dripped from his lips. Before he was knocked unconscious from the poison's effect, he heard a pair of footsteps walking up to him.
"What a bizarre power you possess Naruto-san." Sona said as she pulled out what looked to be a chess piece. A rook to be exact, but it looked different. She just hoped it will work.
Aaaand finished! I hope you like this version of The Delinquent Devil. I will be posting new chapters for this one soon. But for that I will have to delete the chapters I already have for this story, so sorry about that.
Stand Name: Fallen World
User: Naruto Kujo
Namesake: Fallen World (Song by DragonForce)
Type: Close-range Stand
Stats-
Destructive Power: A
Speed: A
Range: C
Durability: A
Precision: A
Development Potential: A
Abilities: Gravity Manipulation- When Fallen World touches an object, it changes the gravitational pull of it.
Blue- When the object glows blue, the object's gravity is changed so that it can float to the users desire. Makes the object's gravitational pull less than earth's.
Red- Changes an object so that their gravity is more than the earth's gravity. Similar to the gravity machine in DBZ.
I hope you found that useful. Sorry if I could not make it read easier. That was the simplest I could put it. Before I forget, Fallen World will turn into a Universal Range Stand later involving the gravitational powers of Fallen World.
Also I will be trying to write a Fairy Tail and JoJo's Bizarre Adventure crossover later that I am sure you will all like. Anyways, this has been Demongod123 and I will see you all later.
Omake: Fangirl Vison
What Normal people see: Naruto walking down the street with an emotionless look on his face
What Fangirls see- Naruto walking down from heaven in robes that reveal his muscular body. The doves flew around him as he stares at the fangirls with a sexual look. Just then, one final dove flew from between his legs, causing the robe to fly up and expose himself to the fangirls.
