Dimension Traveler: First visit
Hi guys this is my first time writing a fanfic so please forgive me if my story isn't all that good. It's been a while since I have gone through the Naruto anime. I have been reading a lot Naruto fanfic lately so I will use knowledge I have combined with the anime. I am looking to produce a good story so if you see some parts similar to other fanfics please just forgive me I read a lot of fanfics to the extent that I forgot their names or the authors so please just notify me. Also please note that as much I like the almost all of the Naruto series characters but after reading a lot of fanfics I have come to view certain top characters in a new light so if you see some favorite characters being downplayed(not bashed too much) please forgive me in advance.
Disclaimer: I do not own Naruto if I did I wouldn't have made Naruto a total moron.
Chapter 1
It was a peaceful day in the Village Hidden in the Leaves, the sun was smiling upon the people, the birds were gracing the environment with their songs, and everything was just perfect. The village was abuzz with activity as it was that time of the month(not that time of the month that you are thinking) the 10th of October when their beloved 4th Hokage the greatest Kage ever(that's debatable) defeated the dreadful 9 tails fox and killed it sacrificing his life during the process. It was a huge blow for the village but they managed under the leadership of the 3rd Hokage Hiruzen Sarutobi. So the esteemed council (again debatable) decided to make a festival celebrating the defeat of the 9 tails. It's been 12 years and the village had somewhat recovered.
So as I was saying the village was abuzz with activity as people were enjoying the festival eating from various food stalls, watching the enactment of the defeat of the 9 tails and other things. It was truly a joyous day for all…. "AHHHHH please leave me alone I didn't do anything!" well maybe not everyone. On the other side of the village in a densely forested area (not The Forest of Doom I mean The Forest the Death) was a young 12 year old boy running for his life. He had spikey blond hear and 3 whisker marks on each side of his cheeks and wearing an orange kill me jumpsuit. Right now the jumpsuit was not looking good as it had tears, dirt and blood. This boy running for his life was none other than Naruto Uzumaki the jinchuriki of the 9 tails and right on his ass I mean tail was a mob of people comprising of both shinobi and civilians who seem to be out for blood.
The little boy was thinking. Why? Why was this happening to him? Ever since he got kicked out of the orphanage when he was 5 people outright hated him. It started with glares and curses, parents forbidding their children to associate with him and not selling or overpricing anything they sell to him. It seems as if he graduated from these to more violent things like beatings and torture and let's just say his life was a living hell. The ANBU always seem to be late arriving when the mob had their fill and the 3rd always preached about the will of fire and proving the village wrong. The 3rd gave the boy an apartment when he 'found' him in the streets. The apartment was not is the best of shapes and should have been listed as condemned. The aged Kage always said that it was the best that he could do but for a Kage that's just BS. At least he had a roof over his head. The 3rd told him one day that if he wanted to be acknowledged he would have to become strong shinobi thus was born the dream of becoming Hokage and him joining the academy.
As the boy was running a few kunai missed him as he ducked under some bushes leaving tears on his clothing. The boy had unbelievable stamina but even that was not enough against a prolonged chase by adults. Some civilians had given up but shinobi were another story. Well the boy had tried but the mob finally caught up to him. "Well well well look what we caught here boys a demon fox. Today we are going to skin it alive hehehe" said a shinobi while taking out a pair of kunai. "Please just leave me alone I didn't do anything to you" shouted Naruto while backing up against a tree. Well with no were to run and a set of lungs burning like Sarutobi lungs during their boys' night out, the boy just waited for the pain to start as he knew talking will not get him anywhere. "Shut up demon you killed our loved ones so we will make u suffer demon" said a civilian. "What are you talking about I am not a demon and didn't kill anyone" said the scared boy. The mob did listen the civilians began beating the boy first then the shinobi began testing out their Justu on him all the while the boy cried in pain.
"Yesss scream monster scream and suffer like our loved ones suffered" shouted a shinobi with a sadistic smile. Another one said "yes scream for help no one will come to help you you are all alone no one loves you". After a while the boy suddenly shut up eyes now dead of the light that makes a person normal. The boy just looked at the ground with dead eyes. Yes he was alone yes no one will come to help him and yes this was his fate to be a punching bag for the village. He was all alone unloved and uncared for. Just then the air became cold to the extent that you could see your breath and it was filled with murderous intent, the forest became deathly silent not a single animal made a noise. The mob became confused then it came "Oi what the hell do you think you are doing". It was a voice so cold that hell would freeze ten times over. The mob turned around to see a man in his twenties spikey silver white hear with royal but tips. His eyes were different, the left eye was silver white and the left was royal blue. The man about 6 feet tall wearing shinobi cloths but on top was a sleeveless high collar trench coat which was white with blue outlines. It was tied in the waist with blue belt like cloth and at the back was written white fox.
Naruto lifted up his bloodied face as the stranger walked towards him. To him he was another man who wanted to beat the demon. As the stranger reached him he knelt in front in him his eyes filled with and warmth and kindness that Naruto couldn't understand why. "They roughed you up didn't they kid. Sorry I am late I kinda got lost hehehe" said the stranger sheepishly while stretching the back of his head with a small grin. "It's okay kid rest up. Starting from today you have a family and we will take care of you." With that said Naruto's vision went black and he passed out with one thought in mind "Family".
The stranger gently laid the boy down then turned to the mob with the same murderous expression he had. The mob for their part didn't know who he was but one thing they were sure of was that he stopped their fun. "Hey what are you doing there we were relieving some stress just go away and you won't get hurt. This demon deserves what he got, we should have killed him" said a brave shinobi. The mob started to mutter in agreement and the stranger just held out his hand and a snow white katana with a red edge appeared. "Demon huh well the only demons I see are you people and well today won't end well for you" the stranger spoke in an icy tone and in the blink of an eye he was standing on the other side of the mob. The mob was shocked by this but the noticed that they just had one shallow cut on each person. They stated to laugh "dude you surprised us with your speed but it seems you can't use that blade of yours" said a smug shinobi. The stranger didn't say anything he just sheathed his sword and all hell broke loose. The mob started screaming as if they were in a nightmare while strange marks appeared on their bodies where the cuts were located.
"That's what your get for being ignorant fools. Enjoy your torment it will take a while just try to hang on otherwise your brains will turn to veggies" spoke the stranger in a monotone voice then he picked up Naruto and just disappeared. From one of the trees a 3 ANBU who watched the whole thing nodded. One went to report to the Hokage while the other two tied to see if they can help the mob. About 5 minutes the 3rd arrived and saw the situation was utter chaos. There were people screaming as if they were being tortured and his ANBUs seem to be at a loss as to what was going on. They looked fine on the outside. "Give me a status update" the 3rd said in an authoritative tone. "Well sir they seem fine on the outside but as you can see they are in a great deal of pain. There is no sign of poison or any fatal wounds. We thought it was a genjutsu but that does not seem to be the case. We do not know what is going on. This was caused by a stranger who took the dem.. I mean the jinchuriki and just vanished." "Vanished? What do you mean vanished" asked the 3rd. "well we couldn't detect his chakra signature anywhere sir" "This is most disturbing. Okay organise a search party and get these people to the hospital. Keep me updated of the situation and call a council meeting. This is going to be a pain in the ass (monkey ass)". The ANBU bowed and went to their assigned duties while the 3rd just looked at the sky thinking about Naruto.
The end
Well this is the end of the first chapter hope it was okay to you guys.
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