PLEASE READ THE NOTE BEFORE STORY
Welcome to my first fanfic, readers. For my first one I decided to write the betrayal theme cause everyone likes to read this theme more than any other. Since it's my first fic, please go easy about mistakes.
Also it would be kind of routine where Ash gets betrayed and runs away to train and when he returns, he freakin possess god level pokemons on his side which he uses to crush them. So I decided to change it a bit with some ideas of my own. This fic will be based on the original story but with some plot changes and twists which I believe no one has ever thought of.
I've also tried my best not to change the behaviour of Pokémon characters and stick with their original behaviour from the anime but, sure Ash is gonna change.
I want to make it clear that this fic contains dark and disturbing actions (like killing in a terrifying way) which some of you like some of you don't, so I warn you beforehand about that.
Lastly this fic pairing will be a Rayshipping that is AshxCynthia also with some minor side shippings. I chose this shipping because of its demand in this betrayal theme but feel free to suggest any other pairing and I'll write a new story with the pairing as main shipping.
Also can anyone explain me about beta reader I don't have a clue about it. Thank you.
Disclaimer:- I do not own Pokémon.
Age of characters
Ash and all his companions except Brock and Tracey: 18
Brock : 20
Tracey : 19
Delia: 39
Prof Kukui : 27
Rod Burnet : 25
Now into the story
The scene opens up at the Alolan airport, it's nearly dark but still the sun is shining orange at the corner of the ocean while its setting down. The beautiful radiant colors in the sky, which are reflected on the ocean while some birds flying over the water going certain somewhere, probably to their nest. But there is one other bird which needs to fly home.
"Alola sure is a great place, right pikachu?" boy asked his companion while taking in the beauty of the Hawai region one last time. "pika pikachu" gladly replied a yellow rodent on his shoulder. Even that beautiful scenery didn't give him complete peace, he had a worried look on his face as he turned to face a woman with silver hair with green clips on and a guy with labcoat and a white cap. He want to tell something but he couldn't bring himself to do so.
'Why should partings be so painful?' he thought to himself while biting his lower lip. "Alright guys, I'll see you... Take good care, okay" he finally said the words. "Come..." the woman wanted to say something but held for a sec and then continued "Come back soon" she shuttered while looking at him with tears started to form at the corner of her eyes. Her eyes pleading him not to leave but she knew he had to.
"Good luck Ash" the guy wished him with a forced smile on his face and gain a thank from Ash.
The guy looked Ash in the eye and stated "But remember one thing... Burnet and I will be here for you for the rest of your life" he took a moment and continued "no matter where you go and what you do" he is trying his best not to sound sad but Burnet beside him can't hold it any longer. Tears start to roll down her cheeks as she closed her mouth with her hand to muffle her cry. She starts wiping her eyes she knew Ash is leaving for own good but still she can't imagine the school without him. "Kukui speaks for both of us" she managed to tell that in a shaky voice while still wiping her tears which won't stop. She slowly walked towards Ash and pulled him into a hug just like his mother would back at Kanto. Soon Professor Kukui joined the hug bringing them even close.
"Thanks" Ash spurtes out.
"piiiikachu" pikachu who's silent till now gave out a word.
They stayed there for a while taking in as much as they could. The memories, the difficulties they've been through, the good times they've spent together all came back rushing into their minds. Finally Kukui patted both Ash and Burnet a couple of times signalling to break the hug, he took a step back and said "alright Ash go get em" hearing this Ash's eyes gleamed with energy. He nodded "right" and walked towards his plane entrance.
He took his seat which is beside the window and looked outside while the plane took off. He couldn't help but think about all the adventures he had there along with the new friends he met, new rivals to compete, new pokemon to catch. All these thoughts came running into his mind and stopped at one certain thought. He looked at his buddy pikachu and said "hey pikachu... Do you remember the time when we visted Alola just as a small trip" he received a chaaa from his rodent in agreement. "Well who would've thought we get so many wonderful mem--" he was cut off by some people shouting outside. "Huh" he looked outside to see all of his friends and pokemon came surprise him "ALOLA SURPRIIIISEE" They greeted him while flying on pokemon's. Now Ash started to form tears as they roll down his cheeks" you guys... ". Pikachu's ears perked up, eyes widened and were shining happy to see them.
He quickly wiped his tears and waved them"BYEEEE"
Pikachu joined him as he waved his small paws in air "PIKA PII"
"COME BACK SOOON" they yelled as the plane took speed and increasing distance gradually until it vanished in distant. Ash closed his eyes and whispered to himself "thank you Alola" and focused on his next journey.
Time skip
Viridian forest
Ash is strolling with his head lowered thinking about his past journey and also a certain something is bothering him. Pikachu looked at him and understood what he was thinking but didn't speak a word. There is an eery silence in the air as they walked and Ash has been like this only two times in the past, after his sinnoh and kalos journeys. He had no idea what to do next.
"Hey pikachu" he finally spoke and hearing this pikachu's ears perked up. "pika" he responded. " How does challenging a champion sounds" he asked. "pika pikachu" pikachu happily replied. "ok then let's challenge Kanto's champion Lance then" he raised his fist in excitement and taking his signature stance joined by pikachu with same enthusiasm. "But how should we do it??" he asked in the same stance with same expression which caused pikachu to off balance anime style.
"Pikaaaaa" he sighed in disbelief
" I guess I have to ask Prof. Oak now" he said gaining a nod from his rodent friend "pikaachuu"
"So you ready to race home?" he asked his buddy who nodded and started running. "hey that's not fair" Ash frowned as he ran behind his partner.
They ran until they reached their home or atleast where it used to be. Pikachu and Ash stopped before a huge mansion, they both stood on their two feet with mouth open in awe while looking up. They looked left and right continously 3 times just to make sure he was at correct address and a mime pokemon came out clarifying his doubts.
"hey Mr. mime" he called out to the mime pokemon while running towards it who is busy singing and sweeping. "Mime mime mime mime... Mime??" he looked at the direction of the voice and confirmed it was Ash. "miiiimeee" he got excited and pressed the calling bell of mansion. "hey... Mr. Mime... what happened to our house" asked Ash catching his breath.
"mime mime mime, mime, mime, mime... MIIIMEE" Mr. Mime tried to explain something with his actions too which caused Ash and pikachu to sweat drop at his actions.
"Ash my baby boy" a lady cooed and pulled Ash into a bone crushing hug. Ash wanted to ask something but he couldn't get a word out of his mouth, heck he couldn't even breath properly. "oh sorry" the lady pulled back and let his son beathe.
"(deep inhale) what is going on mom where is our house??" he asked his mom to which he received a smile from his mother. "Well... Let's just say you got recognised by the pokemon league accociation my little champion" she said which made Ash remember professor kukui speaking with Charles goodshow but didn't really payed any attention becuase he was busy with his pokemon. " So this mansion is..." he was cut off by his mother " Yes dear it's our home now and also you've got all your pokemon in the backyard not in oak raunch" she smiled and Ash jumped into the sky like a rocket.
"Did you hear that pikachu, we can meet our friends right now" he got really excited and pikachu shared his excitement but soon he was shoved by his mother towards the door. " Oh Ash since you've mentioned your friends..." she opened the door only for Ash to get even more surprised.
"CONGRATULATIONS ALOLA CHAMPIOOOON" behind the door in the mansion all of his friends with whom he travelled the regions and met during his journey were presented over there.
The group included Brock, Misty, May, Max, Dawn, Gary, Cilan, Iris, Clemont, Bonnie, Serena, Giselle, Ritchie, Paul, Trip, Alain, Barry, Kenny, Drew, Bianca, Tierno, Trevor, Shauna, Miette, Liza, Lyra, Zoey, Tracey even Lillie and Gladion.
Of all the people Lillie and Gladion shocked Ash the most "L.. Lillie, Gladion what are you guys doing here?? I thought you were off searching for your dad?? He asked in utter shock. " hmmmhmm Alola surprise Ash!!... Magearna showed us all the way to Kanto and we thought why don't we pay you a visit" Lillie smiled and replied. "And after coming here we knew that your friends are giving you a surprise so we thought why don't we join them" Gladion continued his sister's sentence.
Ash just couldn't believe all this. All his friends were there for him, he was so happy that only one thing came to his mind. He closed his fist ducks down and jumps up saying " alright guys lets all have pokemon battle!!" only to make all his friends evasdrop anime style. "Ash we are here to celebrate your victory, chill man... we can battle whenever we want for the upcoming days I've closed my gym for a while" replied Brock while placing a hand over his shoulder.
"Ash you didn't change a bit, you're still a kid" said Iris.
"Now i can battle you Ash, ive been waiting for a long time to beat you" Max challenges Ash.
Serena tried to tell something but she noticed Miette, Misty and Dawn were about to talk to Ash. They quickly noticed each other and starts a glaring competition right there.
"How about trying my cookies Ash i baked them myself just for you" Giselle offered a small basket of cookies to Ash which he started to munch on like a snorlax " Geez thanks Giselle I'm hungry as hell". "Oh my!! Ash wait I'll bring you something to eat" with that his mother left to cook for her baby boy. The other girls looked down in disbelief and quickly turned thier glare towards Giselle and she looked at them from the corner of her eye and gave a 'No matter how hard you try he's mine' look which started thunder glares between them.
(we all know how famous Ash is with girl ' author shrugs')
Ash munching on the cookies noticed that even Liza is here "mhmm hey msghnsmm Liza (gulp) here too" he finished the cookies. "Yes Ash and guess what your Charizard is now the strongest one in Charicific valley so i brought it here to return him and trust me he is raging for a battle now" Liza replied with a smile. "Really where is he now?? " he didn't even looked at Giselle as he ran towards Liza. Giselle looked down as the other girls smiled at her with the most evil grin like some psycho killers.
(and we also know how mother fuckin dense Ash is 'author shrugs again')
Seeing this as a chance to fight ash's most strongest pokemon Alain challenges him. "hey Ash one on one my charizard vs your charizard what do you say?" smirked Alain. "well you would regret it later Alain" replied Ash with a smirk of his own but "(slap) first you need to eat then you can battle to your hearts content lunch is ready" Delia came back and slapped ash on the back of his head receiving ouch from him. "Bu.. Bu.. But you just went in right now" said a confused Cilan. "Leave it Cilan it Ash's mom we are talking about" replied May.
"alright Mrs. Ketchum cooking is the best I'm glad to be alive!!" exclaimed Max closing his eyes and joining arms with an animated halo on his head. "Then get ready Max I've made plenty for everyone" Delia smiled and replied. Everyone was happy to eat her handmade food so they got all ready and went to chow down.
After eating everyone gathered at backyard. For Arceus sake that was one huge backyard which has a pokemon battle field on the side. Ash walked into the back yard which is empty suddenly stopped and looked back "are all my pokemon here mom?" he askes which he got a nod from her mom. "Alright pikachu use THUNDER BOLT" Ash cried out as the yellow rodent jumped up releasing a huge yellow lightning into the sky.
"I wonder how many pokemon Ash had caught in his journeys?" questioned Bonnie.
"Maybe 20 or something like that I mean Ash just throws pokeball at them without battling so not a quite many" replied Iris.
"he also caught only 6 in Kalos nothing extra for backup" said Tierno.
"From which he also released 2 pokemon so you may be right Iris" added Clemont.
"Idiots"
"WHAT?!!" They demanded answers in the direction of the voice.
" I said idiots" Paul smirked. The rest were about to say something but were cut off by Gary. "Have you ever wondered how it would be if all the pokemon in the jungle decided to condut a meeting for themselves??" asked Gary and everyone else gave him a confused look. "(chuckle) Well you'll see it now" finished Gary as he looked at a distant rumble which is getting bigger and closer by the time.
"Oh my motherfuckin ARCEUS" Trip, Miette and Tierno said in unison while others except Gary, Misty, Brock, Paul, Tracey, May, Max, Delia and Dawn; were just shocked and awe strucked at the scene before them. "Language!!" Delia gave those three a stern look to which they lowered their heads but still in utter shock.
"Is he a Poacher or something i definitely need to check out his background before making decisions " said Miette in utter shock.
"Ash always has a secret ingredient which surprises everyone... But this... This IS BEYOND MY TASTE BUDS" Cilan exclaimed in excitement as he held his head. "Are those-...Yes" Serena was cut off by Misty.A big herd of pokemon came charging towards Ash like he is their diety or something. "Ash just caught nearly 50 pokemon!??" Gladion exclaimed. "more than..." May added with a smile while Lillie was completely lost.
The herd came with a big dust cloud which engulfed ash in it, watching this Serena got worried and was about to take a step towards ash but was stopped by Dawn. "don't serena you'll just ruin the moment" with a wink.
"Hey guys slow down I just nee..." Ash was cut off by his Bayleef tackling him down and started licking him all over. "Yeah i missed you too Bayleef" replied Ash. He got up to pet his small pokemons, setting feathers of hus flying types and continued having his moments with all his pokemon.
Then suddenly all of them felt a strong aura which sent creeps through all the girls and made guys freeze. They soon heard a ear splitting roar. "What was that??" asked Alain
"Such a showoff" said Ritchie
"Here he comes" said Liza with smirk.
A large orange dragon landed beside the group making his appearance clear to all. "CHARIZARRRD!!" Ash exclaimed as he ran towards the overgrown lizard who just attacked him with a flamethrower. "Oh my" Delia spurted with smile... 'Is she crazy?? Her son is being fried for dinner by a fire dragon' a lot of them thought but...
"Yeah Charizard i missed you too" Ash said as he hugged his Charizard who returned the hug gladly. "Ash and his pokemon enjoy it painful, just like an extra hot chillie sauce" Cilan appreciated in his own words.
He then got down and faced Alain. "You ready Alain??"Ash asked but Alain needs to take a lot in but eventually snapped out" Ri... Right" Alain relied and they went to the battlefield taking their sides while Brock decided to be the referee.
"Remember Ash I won't go easy on you" warned Alain
"Neither do I" replied Ash with a smirk. Both let their Charizards out to the battle field and they took the battle stance. "Hit me with all you've got" said Ash.
LET THE BATTLE BEGIN.
"Charizard use FLAME THROWER" both Ash and Alain called out the same move. Soon both the flamethrowers met at the middle of the arena and made a blast creating a smoke screen. "Charizard use FLAME CHARGE " Alain shouted made his move.
His charizard flapped it's wings hard enough to clear the smoke screen and charged towards his opponent. "alright charizard wait for my call" informed Ash. He waited until it got closer and commands his attack. Charizard use DRAGON RAGE" Charizard quickly makes an orange energy ball out of its mouth and fires it at his opponent which makes contact and causes Alain's charizard to fall back.
"Charizard you okay" asked Alain in concern to which charizard stretches its wings and smirks. "Good now use FLAME THROWER again" ordered Alain to which charizard spit out gushing flames from its mouth which engulfs Ash's charizard in flames. Alain smirked but soon Ash wiped that off with a smirk of his own "Charizard breath it in" Ash shouts as Charizard opens its mouth and takes in all the flames surprising everyone.
At the stands
"what just happened here??" asked Iris
"He learned it from the Charicific valley, the first time when Ash left his Charizard there, it attacked the elder one with the same move and then the elder charizard just breath in the flamethrower, Ash remembers pokemon moves very well" stated Liza getting an awe look from everyone. "and forgets about people very well" added misty causing everyone to sweat drop and laugh nervously. "Well that's Ash for you" finished Dawn and everyone focused back on the battle.
The battlefield
"Impossible" Alain couldn't believe what he just saw. "Alaiiin... I said I want you at your full poweeeerr" shouted Ash from the other side. Knowing Ash, Alaim smirked and shouts back "Don't blame me for whatever happens next" with that he touched his key stone on the bracelet and charizard takes in the energy which gives out a blinding bluish white light followed by a Black charizard with blue flames running on either side of it's face.
"Yes... Are you ready Charizard??" asked Ash to which he nodded in agreement. "Good lets go DRAGON BREATH" Charizard breathed out green flames towards its opponent. "Okay DODGE IT and use BLAST BURN" with that Charizard soared into the sky dodging dragon breath and then slams into the ground with force causing it to shatter as the fire power comes from underground. "Charizard use TAKE THE SKY and use STEEL WING" Ash's Charizard took off into the sky and it's wings started to shine bright white as it made its way towards the opposite dragon.
"Stop it use DRAGON PULSE" Charizard launches a purple coloured dragon shaped beam from its mouth. Ash was about to call out an attack but what too late that move already took Charizard and slammed it into ground while surrounding it. As the attack dies Charizard gets up but soon was about to hit by another attack Allain's Charizard was about to hit it with a FLARE BLITZ "Charizard quick DRAGON RAGE" Ash called out again it was too late and got hit which caused Charizard to roll and get down as Alain's Charizard stands tall... "Charizard get up" Ash called to Charizard but its not moving a bit. "Ash you did great but it needs more training" Alain speaks up as Ash lowers his head, his hair covering his eyes.
At the stands
"That's it" Paul shook his head in disbelief
"I can't believe i will see the day when Ash's charizard gets defeated" Misty shook her head.
"Such a show off" Liza smirked causing everyone to look up at her with "HUH???" and then back to the field.
Battlefield
"CHARIZARD IS UNAB-" Brock was about to declare Alain as winner but was cut off by Ash. "(chuckle) I knew it you are one heck of tough nut... " he looked up and saw Charizard back up but still with the effects of the previous attack"...Charizard" he finshed as his fire buddy roared and lets a strong flame thrower into the sky.
"Now... let's begin the real battle" Ash smirked. "Use FLAME CHARGE"Charizard engulfed itself in flames and started to charge at its opponent. "Tough..use FLARE BLITZ" Alain called out his counter both met in the middle of the field before throwing back from the impact.
"Charizard use DRAGON CLAW" Alain's Charizard flew towards its opponent with green glowing claws. "use STEEL WING" Ash called out. Charizard's wings started to glow as it flew ahead in full speed but it's attack was stopped by Dragon claw. Both are trying to push eachother with brute force. Ash smiled "Into the trap Charizard use SEISMIC TOSS". "What??"Alain was shocked. Charizard took it's mega evolved from into the sky and started to fly in circular patterns before tossing it back to the ground with full force.
"Now finish it with DRAGON RAGE" Ash called out his final move. Charizard used Dragon rage on the just struggled back Mega Charizard X. "Charizard DRAGON PULSE quick"Alain ordered both the attacks collided dangerously close to both Pokémon. That impact raised a dust screen.
As the dust settles both Charizards were up glaring at each other. One Charizard winced in pain and got down to one feet while the other Charizard fell down with swirls in it's eyes.
CHARIZARD IS UNABLE TO BATTLE. THE WINNER OF THIS MATCH IS...
There goes the first chapter of my first fanfic. Readers please review if any mistakes and also explain me about the term Beta reader.
Next chapter would be up next week but I'll try to post it sooner and don't forget to review please.
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