Chapter One
Here are the new story and rewrite for Path of the Light!
First, I'm very sorry for the Path of the Light, but I and Xyaqom couldn't come up with any ideas for the story. So, we have decided to make this rewrite.
Second, Thank you goes to everyone for reading my story so far and putting the reviews as well!
Finally, a special thank you goes to Xyaqom for helping me with this chapter, and please check his stories when you get the chance too!
Enjoy Chapter One and Rewrite!
At first, there was nothing for a normal person to do around the giant palace as one girl was racing to find a way out of her royal life. She had a black dress down to her lower thighs, with fifty percent of her cleavage was showing, and her stripes were dark green. Her breasts were a large C cup, and her butt was a bubble. Her pink was down to her neck, nearly touching it, and her eyes are light purple.
Her name was Momo Deviluke, the younger sister of Lala Deviluke and the twin sister of Nana Deviluke.
She heard about Lala has found her suitor on a planet called Earth. Her curiosity got the better of her because her thoughts are surrounding who was this mysterious suitor. There was one way to find out, and that was to go to planet Earth. Sadly though, she had to drag her twin sister with her.
Momo releases a sigh of disappointment, which she got landing part where the ships were holding them. She turns her head towards her twin sister with her expression was confused and firm.
"So, tell me again. Why are you coming with me, Nana?" Asked Momo.
"Because I want to make sure that this suitor isn't womanizer like the rest of them." Said Nana.
Nana had an incredible body, but she had small to growing middle size A cup breasts. Her outfit was the same as Momo's black dress. Her stripes are dark crimson, and her long hair was tied into twin ponytails. She did have an amazing bubble butt. Her hair was pink, and her eyes are light purple. Both girls were sixteen years old, about to hit seventeen. Both girls were 5'3 feet tall and weighed 135 pounds. Unfortunately for Nana, Momo was the more gifted twin, as her breasts were a 36C, and Nana's breasts were a 36A. Sadly for Nana, genetics works as kind to her as her sisters. Both girls had an amazing body and amazing bubble-shaped butts and legs. If we look under their dresses, we see that Momo was wearing a pair of pink panties that barely covered her pussy and butt, and Nana was wearing a pair of white panties that barely covered her bubble shaped butt and pussy. Nana also had a habit of keeping her legs open whenever she was sitting down, even when she was wearing a skirt. Even when she wasn't wearing any panties, she would keep her legs open.
"Nana, you just want to meet the suitor," Momo says with a confident tone, and she turns to sees the guards were gone for break.
"That's not true," said Nana.
"Come on, the coast is clear," said Momo.
Momo and Nana began to make a ran for one of the ships, and as they ran, we see Momo's breasts were bouncing with each step. Sadly, for Nana, her breasts were too small to bounce, at least noticeable though.
Nana shows jealously inside of her expression because Momo had an impressive set, but she knows that she is still growing. The ship was big enough for both of them to get off of Deviluke and begins pushing the buttons to get the ship start.
Momo's breasts swing slightly when she pushes the buttons to get the ship ready for take-off. The guards were none of the wiser, and they were too busy reading dirty magazines than doing their jobs. Hell, they were so into the magazines, that they didn't even hear any of the ships go off. Somebody was going to get fired tonight.
Anyways, the ship exited out of the planet and was on course to Earth. The twins cheer for celebration, making Momo's breasts to bounce and jiggle.
"Way to go on throwing the dirty magazine, Nana!" Momo gives Nana a comment as they high five with each other. Nana shows a gentle smile and gives the comment towards Momo.
"It all just shows to show that all men are perverts," said Nana.
"By the way, where did you get that magazine?" Asked Momo.
"I grabbed it out of dad's room while I wasn't looking," said Nana.
Momo nods at her twin sister and looks out of the window of the ship, which her thoughts about meeting the suitor. Parts of her begins remembering when she was younger, and Momo was adventurous type out of the Princesses of Devilukes
-In The Past-
Momo was six years old, and she went to finds the beautiful light blue flower then turns her head to sees Nana was behind her.
"Momo... Let's head back!" Nana speaks with a frightened tone, and she turns her head right than left because she didn't want to be here.
"But we just got here," said Momo.
"We've been here for the last twenty years!" Shouted Nana.
"Oh... I don't feel like I'm twenty-six yet?" Momo responds back to her twin sister Nana and she went forward to finds the beautiful flowers as Momo turns to waves her hand for Nana to see them.
Nana reaches to sees the beautiful flowers and two sisters see the flowers. It was an incredible sight to see them, and Momo makes a wish to meet the right suitor for her someday because she wanted to fall in love with someone who had the same impression for flowers.
"You know what they say if you wish on shooting stars," Nana tells Momo with a soft tone.
"Make a wish?" Asked Nana.
"I wish... I wish to meet the right one and someone who will love the same things I love to do." Momo speaks towards Nana with a soft tone.
Nana was surprised by the answer from Momo, and she closes her eyes to makes her wish to get the right body. However, her mind brought back to meet someone who was right for her. Momo and Nana open their eyes to sees the flowers were blowing into the stars as they knew their wishes were heard.
-Present-
"What are you thinking, Momo?" Asked Nana, her tone was slightly worried and tender.
Momo strokes her hair slightly with her hand, and her head turns to sees the bright stars were coming out of midnight blue skies. She walks out of the balcony and hears the shower sprays the water, and then her head turns to sees a young man who had orange spike hair with a white button shirt and dark blue long pants.
He stops in his tracks to sees the attractive girl was watching him, and he was carrying bags. The young man waves his right hand towards Momo with a friendly smile, and she returns the gesture.
Momo then went back in and took off her towel, revealing her amazing naked body. Here we are able to see her tight pink pussy. Although Devilukes don't grow hair on their arms, underarms or legs, they still grow pubic hair. We also see that Momo did have a bit of a belly and was soft and smooth, and she had a four diamond-shaped bellybutton.
Momo sees she has forgotten to shave her public hair, and it was light pink and saw that she was slowly growing a small bush. She went to get some clothes as her black pointed tail swings slightly, and Momo was thinking about the young man because she felt warm from his presence, then her thoughts are, "Who is he?"
She then bends over to look for a pair of panties. The light purple panties were found, and she places the panties underneath both of her feet. Momo begins picking them, and she hears the bathroom's door then turns her head to sees Nana got out of the bathroom with her light purple towel wraps around her body, and her hair was tied into the small towel.
"Hey Momo, what are you thinking about?" Nana questions her twin sister with a gentle tone, and she wanted to see what Momo is thinking about.
"Why do you ask?" Asked Momo.
"You seem to be thinking about someone, but it's your thoughts. I'm sorry if I seemed rude to you." Nana replies to her view of Momo, and she gets white pearl panties to puts them on.
Momo and Nana put a new outfit onto themselves because they have to bend in. Momo turns her head to asks, "Nana, I think you look great.
Momo was wearing a pink strapless tank top that showed off a quarter of her cleavage and a pink mini skirt down to her thighs and flip flops. Nana was wearing a red t-shirt and a blue jean short shorts and flip flops, the shorts she was wearing was showing off a great deal of her amazing bubble-shaped butt. Momo and Nana giggles as they were ready to meet the suitor of Lala. There was one problem: Who was he, and how should the twins find him? Lala's suitor was a complete mystery. They were going to have to do some serious detective work.
Momo and Nana nod at each other to go their separate ways to find more about Onee-san's suitor. The first stop was Sainan High School for Momo and sees a teenager with black spike hair with a white button shirt and dark blue pants which his appearance makes him look like sixteen then he sees the same young man that Momo had the friendly encounter.
The two young men looked like they were talking about boobs.
"Come on, Rito." The black-haired person was telling Rito with a confident tone that Momo could tell the black-haired guy will have a hard time getting any girl he wants in his life, which the next thing shocks her.
"Hey, Saruyama. There's more to girls then how big their chests are." Rito tells Saruyama, which Nana shows to hear those words as he continues, "I rather like the girl for her personality because if you only like them for their looks or what sizes they are. Then you'll find someone, but they'll ask you what do you like about me."
"You know, I think all those girls that you're always around with are starting to get to you because you're starting to act like a chick," said Saruyama.
"Well, that's what I believe in besides some of those girls who are hanging around me. They are good people, and they have a great understanding. I believe they should choose to get with someone who will love them for themselves." Rito makes Saruyama look like he's stupid, which Momo and Nana were crying for Rito had a good head on his shoulders.
Rito begins leaving Saruyama, which he begins telling him how stupid he was. He kept walking away, and Rito sees Lala was hanging out with Haruna, which his hand waves at them being friendly, and Lala runs up to him and hugs him.
Rito hugs Lala back, and he was getting used to her hugs as Momo and Nana made a discovery that Nana speaks, "As the second princess of Deviluke, I approve of his relationship with Onee-san... Maybe I would love to get to know him."
Momo felt her heart was going to come out of her chest, and she was wondering if this was love or was it something else.
"Well then, Let's go back home," said Nana.
"Nana... I actually want to stay here and try to get to know him more because to me... I think there's more to him then we know." Momo speaks towards Nana with a confident voice.
Nana was surprised by her confession, and Momo went to the rooftop to talk with Nana in better understanding.
"So, what do you plan to do?" Asked Nana.
"I'm going to go and see Onee-san, which I hope to see him again," Momo tells Nana the truth, but she couldn't understand why her heart was beating fast for.
"Are you sure that's a good idea?" Asked Nana.
Momo nods at Nana and begins thinking about how to get Nana to stay here, too, which she says, "Besides, I can tell you like him too."
"What?! I do not?" Said Nana.
"Right," Momo says about Nana's feelings, which she could tell her twin sister was curious about the young man too.
"What makes you think I like him?" Asked Nana.
"Because you like for his honesty," Momo tells Nana, in which she looks at her twin sister with a confident expression.
"Fine, I'll stay on this planet a little longer," said Nana.
Momo smiles at Nana and hugs her, which she returns the gesture as she whispers, "How about we invite him into that game we invented."
"You mean the virtual reality RPG game?" Asked Nana.
"That's right!" Momo pulls away from the hug, and Nana smiles then nod at the choice of her twin made.
"But it's still incomplete," said Nana.
"Well, let's get it complete then!" Momo tells Nana which she wants to see what type of Rito is.
"Okay," said Nana.
Momo and Nana work very hard to make the virtual game, which they nod at each other been ready to see what Rito is.
"Okay, I think all the bugs and glitches have been ironed out," said Nana.
"Alright, now it's time to send the letter out," Momo tells her twin sister, and they couldn't wait to see how Rito is going to face it.
"Um, how are we going to give it to them?" Asked Nana.
Momo begins thinking about how to give it to Rito.
"Wait, how about we put it in his locker," said Momo.
"Okay, but which locker is his?" Asked Nana.
Momo begins looking for Rito's locker, and she sees Run walking by it and outs in a love letter in his locker.
Momo nods at the locker, and she places the letter into his locker, which she smiles as she was hoping to meet him someday, and she could feel her heart beating super fast, and getting hot. Just then, she heard someone coming her way.
She hopes to see Rito again, and Momo went into hiding spots by hiding in one of the nearby lockers. Soon she saw Rito walking up to his locker, and she was getting excited. Rito opens the locker and sees two-letter, which he didn't understand where they came from. He opened one of them, and the one he opened up was Momo's letter. He reads it out loud.
Rito couldn't believe it, but he shows a light smile because someone understands him. He begins leaving to meet this person, which he didn't know this choice was going to leave him a surprise.
To Be Continued...