Here is my second NaLu fan fic, "Review This Story". Again, this is inspired by the fan fiction "Story Untold" by sakuraharuno0012 and "Fairy Tail on Facebook!" by Rawrzii. In the creation of this, I'm thinking "Why set this on fan fiction site itself?" so Review This Story is born! XD


"Lu-chan!" the bubbly Levy greeted her. Levy drags her to her laptop.

"Look at the site, there is Fairy Tail here!" Levy points out the word Fairy Tail in the categories.

"What site is that?"

"It's a fan fiction site, where people post stories about other people based on their imagination,"

"It's fan fictions, well, what did they think about me?" Lucy asked.

"There are a LOT of NaLu stories here,"

"NaLu?"

"Natsu and Lucy,"

"WHAT? These people pairing me up with Natsu?"

"Lu-chan, I know you like Natsu, too, but you have pairings with Gray, too,"

"No I'm not! These people are crazy… And I will be so dead to Juvia,"

"Well, Lu-chan, you can submit your own story that you're writing recently…" Levy went back to her laptop. "I like this story… It's so sweet…"

"What story is it?"

"It's called 'Weirdo' by Pyrokinetics… It's a NaLu story and it gets a lot of reviews,"

"What is it all about?"


Weirdo Ch.1

Natsu extends his hand to her.

"Do you want to join Fairy Tail?"

She holds his hand. He stares at her smile. She's so beautiful. She wants to hold it forever yet she's so far away.

Natsu woke up, ugh, a dream again. About her.

"Another day again," he gets up, wakes Happy up.

He thinks so many times if he will tell her what he feels to her.

But she's a weirdo, she will not understand it.

He stole the Rainbow tree for hr to cheer up when she's sick; he saved her numerous times from danger, he offer missions for her to get her rental done.

He did what he could for her to notice him, yet she didn't.


"Ugh… I don't want to hear this… I have to go and post my story there!" Lucy grins. "Good luck, Lu-chan!"


New Story submitted.


Lucy rested after typing the first chapter of her story.

"Hey Luce!"

"Why you keep barging in without permission?" Natsu looked at the PC screen.

"Is that a fan fic site?"

"How? How did you know that?"

"I read fan fics there, out of boredom,"

"Did you know about… NaLu?"

"NaLu… Yeah, but I don't mind,"

"Why?"

"Because… Lucy and I were only nakama," the statement saddens Lucy inside her.

"Oh… Is that so…"

"I liked the stories there… Especially 'Weirdo'"

"That's the story Levy is talking about… But I don't like the fact that I'm the bad girl there,"

"Oh… is that so… Maybe because you are?"

"Get out!"

Natsu giggles. Then, he jumped from the window.

"Use the door!"


All Fairy Tail members read Lucy's story, Stellar Flame.


Stellar Flame Ch. 1

"Do you want to join Fairy Tail?" the pink haired boy asked.

She never forgets of what he said before. Because of him, she is happy that she had a loving family. But then… Why he is like that?

Even though he is idiotic, barging in her room and always picking up fights, he saved her countless times and shows his kindness in weird ways.

She started to like him.


Chatting session…

IceBreaker: It's so obvious this is Lucy…

ArmorGoddess: Yeah… But I have the feeling Lucy didn't know about…

IceBreaker: Erza! Don't say that!

ArmorGoddess: Oh, sorry… I forgot this is a top secret.

IceBreaker: Well, will she flip up if she knew about that?

ArmorGoddess: Most likely…

Bookworm: Hey guys! Have you read Lu-chan's story?

IceBreaker: Yeah, it's a great story.

Bookworm: Isn't it weird that Lucy said the opposite things in the story 'Weirdo'?

ArmorGoddess: I expect she will do that after he saw Pyrokinetic's story XD

Bookworm: But this is really unexpected.

PathReader posted an announcement

POLL: All Fairy Tail members! Who had the best story? Weirdo or Stellar Flame?

ArmorGoddess: Ugh… Cana's making bets again.

Pyrokinetics: Hey, guys, I'm back…

Bookworm: Pyrokinetics? The creator of Weirdo?

Pyrokinetics: … Yeah?

IceBreaker: Hey, what do you think of the Stellar Flame?

Pyrokinetics: …

Bookworm: You know, the story under the username SpiritCaster?

Pyrokinetics: … Yeah, I know… Lucy's a weirdo…

Bookworm: …

IceBreaker: You idiot!

ArmorGoddess: You idiot!

Bookworm: NATSU?


I never knew Natsu can make stories XD I hope you like the new fan fiction! XD It's so hard to make mini stories in one story… Well, after the White Color, I hope you like this one…DX I'm so nervous… I've been typing the whole day… Thanks for reading! Like the title, Review this story! XD