Hey my beastie readers and other this is my first time writing a fanfic for FSOG so please dont be too hard on me. i'm all about constructive criticism but this isn't my first story so i'll just say it now so we can get it out of the way, you don't like my story then dont read it and we'll have no problems.
Anastasia Steele (20) has a one night stand with the mysterious grey eyed Christian Grey (25) the night before she has to leave for her year long internship at a publishing house in London. the night they spend together Ana feels a strange pull to the handsome stranger but can't quiet figure out why. the next morning Ana leaves the hotel room with the idea that she would never see this stranger again but a year later when Ana returns her life is turned upside down when she is once again brought face to face with a certain billionaire grey eyed Adonis.
OK just some things i want to let you know:
- Might change the title of this story its not for definite
- Ana is NOT a virgin in this story when she meets christian.
- There may be some BDSM in this story but it wont be alot just some fun kinky stuff here and there :p
disclaimer : all characters belong to E.L James and the fsog trilogy
Fuck! What is it with these woman trying to fuck up my life. First my birth mother now Elena, that bitch thinks she can say jump and I ask how high. Fuck that! She's got another thing coming if she thinks I'm going to put up with her shit any longer. She's gone too far this time. no one mess's with Christian-fucking-Grey!.
"Taylor!" I bark out and a few seconds later my head of security stood in front of my desk
"I want all of Elena Lincolns access to GEH and Escala terminated immediately" I roughly run a hand through my hair "have sawyer and Reynolds track her down and watch her every move I can't risk her hurting my family" I would die if something happened to the people I love. He nod his head
As soon as Taylor exits my office my phone beeps and my fist clench when I read the message from satin her self
Catch me if you can.
I smash my phone off the wall and take a deep breath.
Oh! You can fucking bet on it!
18 Months Earlier.
Ana's Pov
"Kate hurry up or we're going to be late for your brothers graduation" Jesus it amazes me sometimes how long it takes that girl to get ready.
"Coming, jeez steele keep your hair on" she grumbles as she grabs her purse and walks past me out the door. It's about dawn time.
"Ana" I hear Kate's eleven year old brother luke call my name when we enter the auditorium and then see mr and mrs kavanagh both shush him as we find our seats a row behind them.
I can see Kate throw Her brother the death glare and giggle when he sticks out his tongue at her but when she's about to flip him the bird I grab her wrist and push her hand back onto her lap
"Kate!" I warn and she rolls her eyes "you know he's had a crush on you forever " she whispers and now it's my turn To roll my eyes, but I don't have time to reply as the presentation begins
Yeah I know Luke has a crush on me and at most times it's cute like when he gave me a flower last valentine's day and told me I was the only one for him I was flattered but then there are times when I catch him staring at me and honestly it kinda creeps out.
My phone rings mid ceremony and I look down to see mel on the caller ID. Rays new wife. Don't get me wrong shes nice and all but she trys so hard to be the mother I lost that its getting annoying. I press ignore then put it on silent, I'll call her later.
"Ethan kavanagh" the announcer calls out and Ethan walks across the podium. me and Kate jump from our seats and cheer as loud as we can when Ethan collects his degree then walks off stage.
"Ethan" I squeal as he walks towards us after the ceremony had finished. I wrap my arms around him and squeeze tight
"Ana..losing the ability to breath here" he stutters and I release him from my grip then Kate and his parents hug him.
"Thank god that's over" he says releasing a sigh of relief
"Sweetheart" mrs Kavanagh says to her son "we should get going its a long drive home but we are so proud of you" she hugs him once more and with that there gone.
"Sooo What now?" Kate asks with a mischievous grin and I know that only means one thing...trouble
Ethan looks at us with a quirked eyebrow and throws his arm around my shoulders "let's get drunk".
"to Ethan graduating…" Kate holds up her margarita "and Ana's last day in Portland" she pouts and I laugh
after a quick pit stop at the apartment, we both changed while Ethan waited for us in the living room. i decided to go with a sexy black dress with an open back that stopped mid-thigh which made my legs look like they went on for days which I paired with a pair of sinful Christian louboutine heels that I borrowed from Kate that finished off my look perfectly. Kate went a little more glamorous though wearing a red sequined one shoulder dress that just about covered her bits which she wore with a pair of sky high stilettos and a black clutch.
When we reached the night club that had just opened in a secluded part of the heathmen hotel Kate surprised us by pulling a few strings and getting us into the V.I.P area upstairs, where we were handed strawberry margaritas and led to our private table. To be honest I felt a little out of place with all the attention but then I had to remind myself it was only for one night, My last night. So I finally started to loosen up and have some fun.
"Kate it's only a year and I'll be back to visit and we'll talk on the phone every day. You won't even know I'm gone" I smile but notice her eyes watering so I pull her In for a hug
"Group hug" Ethan announces and wraps his arms around me and Kate
"I'm going to miss you steele" she whispers and I nod my head
"Oh stop with the tears we're celebrating" I grab their Hands and pull them onto the dance floor
When we reach the dance floor Kate and I start dancing together and soon the floor is filled with a crowd. I lean over to Kate
"I'm going to grab a drink" I yell loudly and she gives me a thumbs up so I head for the bar.
I order my drink and turn around to see Ethan dancing with a cute little brunette. He looks at me and I nod suggestively. He gives me the thumbs up and I can't help but smirk. That's my boy.
Ever since Ethan came out as gay a few months back he had been a little shy about making moves on other men when we were at clubs but it looks like he's finally open to meeting someone.
When the bartender hands me my drink I smile grateful and take a drink.
"Is he your boyfriend?" I hear someone ask then turn to see one of the most beautiful men I've ever seen in my life with copper hair and alluring grey eyes standing next to me. I had a hard time finding my voice
"Excuse me?" I ask and see him smirk "the guy you came here with, is he your boyfriend?" he asks as he moves closer. There is something oddly familiar about him.
"What Ethan? No. I think that's pretty obvious" I look over at Ethan who's practically dry humping the brunette then look back at the handsome Stanger who I find is already looking at me. His eyes are so intense, like he's trying to figure something out.
"Christian" he finally introduces himself and I smile "Ana" I shake his hand and the minute his skin touches mine it's like a shock of electricity runs through my veins and I'm suddenly breathless
"You wanna dance Ana?" he asks and I bite my bottom lip .yes please
His expression changes immediately as his eyes darken he takes the drink from my hand and places it on the counter, grabbing my hand; he walks us through the crowd and onto the dance floor.
"I like this dress" Christian whispers in my ear when we start to move to the beat of the music my back to his front. I start to grind against him and hear his sharp intake of breath
"keep doing that Ana and I'll take you across my knee" he whispers then nibbles on my earlobe. I gasp feeling heat pool between my legs.
I turn my head and without thinking kiss his lips. The electric feeling travels through my body as I feel his tongue on my lips asking permission, I part them and feel his tongue dip into my mouth. I grind harder against him looking for some sort of relief and can feel his rock hard erection against my ass.
I turn to face him and wrap my arms around his neck. By the time we pull away we're both breathless. Christian's hands rest on my ass pulling me closer to him and feeling brave I do the same and grip his firm ass. i Look up at him with a smirk. He seems surprised but can't hide the grin tugging at his lips, as he leans in closer he presses kisses along my neck. Oh god! Yesss
"I have a room upstairs" he whispers and I tense. Oh god. What do I do?. I'm not the kind of girl to just have a one night with any random stranger but Christian doesn't feel like a stranger and this is my last night and I want too ohhhhh god I want too
I look at him from under my lashes and nod my head as I sink my teeth into my bottom lip his hands move from ass and cup my face kissing me with fiery passion. I slip my hand between us and begin to rub his impressive bulge. I hear his sharp intake of breath as he pulls away and grabs my hand. he pulls me through the crowd and out to the reception.
When the elevator arrives we step Inside and as soon as the doors close he pushes me up against the wall and lifts me onto the bar. His hands are everywhere.
"Christian..." I moan as he moves aside my panties and sinks two fingers deep inside of me.
"Fuck baby your so tight" he grunts. When The doors open he pulls away leaving me breathless and grabs my hand. Walking down the hall I rub my legs together as the pressure becomes unbearable.
When he opens the room door he pulls me inside and pushes me up against the wall. Lifting me up I wrap my legs around him. In one swift move he rips my panties off and sinks his fingers into me. when he pulls them out he places his fingers in his mouth and sucks on them. Wow that's hot!.
Dropping me to my feet, he lifts the dress over my head leaving me naked
"God your so fucking flawless" he lifts his shirt over his head and I undo his pants and push them along with his bowxers down his legs .HO-LY Shit! how is it even possible to be this well-endowed and it's still growing.
"See something you like?" he smirks and without answering I drop to my knees and kiss his tip. I look at him from under my lashes and nod innocently. Oh this is going to be fun.
I kiss his full length then take him in "fuuuck!" he grunts and his hands are in my hair. I change between sucking and licking then take him in until I feel him hit the back of my throat. I feel warm salty liquid slide down my throat and I swallow it all.
When I look up at Christian his eyes are closed and he's panting. He looks down at me "fuck ana! Have you no gag reflex? " I shake my head and he pulls me up attaching his mouth to mine, his tongue invades my mouth as he turns us around and throws me on the bed.
"My turn" he smirks as he pulls me to the edge of the bed then gets on his knees
"oh fuuuuuck" his mouth is on me before I even have a chance to to think. When i feel the warm swipe of his tongue, I can feel myself building
"fuck your pussy tastes delicious" he says against my most private area sending a vibration through my body.
"Christian…" I cry out as he pulls my clit between his teeth then pushes his tongue inside of me. I won't last long. Fuck I'm coming. Suddenly he pulls away and rises to his feet grabbing my hips he flips me over and lifts my butt into the air landing a slap on my ass he slams into me from behind.
"Ahhhhh" I cry out as he pounds into me at a relentless speed. I clutch the sheets for support. I'm so close
"Come for me baby" he commands and I come hard screaming his name then collapse onto the bed. He comes seconds later with a roar and falls beside me.
As we try to catch our breath We're face to face and stare at each other for the longest time. There is definitely something about him that feels familiar and I just can't put my finger on it.
"what are you doing to me ana?" he whispers as he runs his fingers down my spine. "I could ask you the same thing" I yawn and close my eyes.
When I wake its still dark so I blink a few time and look to my left to see Christian passed out, he has one of his arms wrapped around me and the other under the covers. I smile and grab my phone to see a bunch of text and missed calls from kate. Shit! Kate
I check the time and its 5:30. My flight leaves at 8. Fuck I need to get home. I climb out of bed careful not to wake Christian and look for my panties then Remember he ripped them. Great guess I got to go commando until I get home. I smile at the memory of the night before and blush. What that man can do with his hands.
I pull on my dress and grab my shoes. Looking back to the bed I see Christian reach his hand out and scrunch his face up when he doesn't find anything there.
I contemplate for a second before grabbing a sheet of paper and writing a note
Thanks for the ride
Ana Xx
I smile placing the note by the bed and he looks so good I can't help myself, I lean down and lightly press a kiss to his lips
"goodbye Christian" I whisper then I'm gone.
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