Disclaimer: I don't own this, and never will…

A/n Sudden weird inspiration, but I need some constructive criticism to improve because I personally think I really suck at this, but I do want to improve. Thanks…
~FireOfTheOneRing

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Harry sat staring forlornly out his window. For once however, it was not the events of last term that weighed heavily on his mind. Instead, it was his best friends Hermione. Ever since she had kissed him on the cheek before he left with his uncle she had usually been on his mind. As he thought quietly about how much his feelings for her had changed he had a sudden wave of courage hit him.

If I care about her so much, I'll tell her how I feel, Harry thought.

So the young here sat down with many pieces of parchment and a quill to begin to draft a letter. After many unsuccessful attempts and many pieces of parchment he decided on:

Dear Hermione,

The four years that we have shared together have been some of the most memorable of my 14 years. Many times we have laughed, and some we have cried. Out friendship has survived many bumps in the road and at each of these bumps our friendship has grown stronger and stronger. You have always been there for me, and weather you know it or not I will always be there for you. As I write I thought that:

Friends are like a candle,

When two people become friends, it is as if the candle is lit.

If they break up that is the candle being extinguished.

However when a friendship remains the candle burns forever.

This is basically a stupid way of saying I wish to remain you friend, and more.

Love always

Harry

'There' Harry though, 'It's done.' Later when Hedwig returned from hunting he sent the letter to Hermione

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Hermione sat quietly reading her favorite book 'Hogwarts: A History' again. Suddenly Hedwig alighted on the windowsill in front of her.

"Hello Hedwig! What do you have for me today?"

Hermione took the letter from Hedwig and opened it carefully.

She quickly wrote a response in return.

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Harry sat anxiously awaiting a reply from Hermione. Suddenly he spotted Hedwig in the distance. Five minutes later she was at his window. He rushed to grab her reply and opened it. There he read:

You spelt 'whether' wrong…and you forgot the comma after love always…

Love,

Hermione P.S. Oh yeah… and more??

Harry quickly wrote a response….

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A/n, That's it for this chapter. The letter is actually one I got from my boyfriend before we started going out. I changed it a little bit, but the comma and the spelling mistakes were actually in there and I had Hermione make the response I would have made, had I been anywhere near him at the time. It still bothers my friend and I! That letter was the "sappiest thing any of us had seen" and hilariously enough, when he gave it to me, he had to hand it down the row and have my best friends give it to me, and has he was doing so one of the other girls who liked him was clinging onto him trying to get his attention and attempting to flirt so he'd go out with her….but, I did actually turn to my friend and say what Hermione said to her…my initial response to my first letter of the sort, seems almost Hermione-ish to me. *sigh* if any of you are still here after all this, well, WOW! Lol…I ask…

PLEASE REVIEW! I NEED SOME HELP!!! THANKS FOR READING!!!!!

~FireOfTheOneRing