My second fanfic review if you want because if your reviews are good i might change the story to your liking.
This story is adopted from "PerfectPercyStory's"
First 3 chapters are his with a few modifications to suit me.
Will be a PercyXArtemis pairing.
I do not own Percy Jackson and the Olympians or the Heroes of Olympus. That honor goes to Rick
Chapter one: Betrayed
Flashback
"Percy you are being accused of giving information to Gaea. What do you plead?" Zeus said
"Innocent!" Percy yelled "We have hard evidence that says otherwise" Zeus said
"What proof?!" Percy asked "Bring it in." Zeus said, A Cyclopes walked into the room, and then i realize the cyclopes was TYSON!
"Tell them what you saw cyclopes!" Zeus yelled "I went to camp to give my brother a hug, but i saw Percy talking to Gaea though an IM" Tyson said
"Do you sear on the river Styx?" Zeus said "I swear on the river Styx that what i said is the truth." thunder rumbled and we waited but nothing happen.
"GUILTY!" Zeus hissed "IT'S A LIE" Percy yelled "WE HEARD ENOUGH, BOY!" Artemis yelled with a face of disgust.
"And I thought you were A TRUE MALE, I guess even I can be wrong." Out of today what she said to me was the worst
"All in favor of banishing him from Camp Half-blood raise your hand!" Zeus said Every camper raised their hand even Thalia, Nico, Piper, Hazel, Frank, the Stoll's, Jason and the worst of all Annabeth. But with the gods only Hestia, Hermes, Apollo and Hades kept their hands down, I gave them a smile. But then I released that my own father did not even trust me. I ask him "Dad you can't believe them I am telling the truth I never did any of that."
He sneered at me and said "You aren't my son. My son would never betray me like that. I Poseidon Lord of the Seas hereby take away Percy Jackson's powers and hereby sever any relationship with him. My favorite son is James Belod"
I stare at him etched on my face and felt the first pair of tears coming down my face.
"Perseus Jackson you here by are banished from Camp Half-blood forever!" Zeus said. I gave them my coldest look and said "When you need a hero I'll say no, when there's a war and you ask for my help ill just laugh and watch BUT WHEN YOU ARE ALL ABOUT TO GET KILLED BY ANYONE ILL JUST WATCH AND ENJOY THE SHOW!" I screamed
That somehow got the gods scared "Husband maybe we shouldn't do thi-" Hera got cut off by Zeus and said "No this is justice!" Percy smiled and took out riptide and said this "I bind this blade of justice on this rockuntil the next hero comes and pulls it out!" Percy then stabbed the sword into the rock with such force that it would have made Kronos flinch from Tartarus "ENOUGH BEGONE INSOLENT FOOL" Zeus yelled, and then he teleported me out of the throne room and into a random sidewalk.
I walked around the streets to my mom's house only to find the house burned down. I ran to the house but the firemen just pulled me back. I yelled at them asking what happened and one of them said "The water somehow got stuck in the pipes and exploded causing the whole house to get filled with water. After that a lightning bolt hit the house causing the whole house to explode and the gas pipes caused the fire. Who are you?" "I am their son I said trying to hold back my sobs." "Oh I am sorry lad" and then he walked away. I immediately ran to the park and sat down with my back to a tree. I placed my face in my hands and started to cry. I swore then that I would get revenge on the gods that did this. I cried for 3 weeks and was filled with my sorrows while killing and monster that dared come in my way.
During the fourth week when I was in an alley way a cloaked figure came to me and said "Percy, Percy, Percy such a Great man" "How do you know me?!" I said "Who doesn't know about you? The whole universe knows about you and your deeds." He said "I didn't do much it was mostly my Friends" I blushed slightly "Always so modest young one, which is why I want to recruit you even more! Join My army of Saviors, Perseus you don't even needs to work up the ranks you are the commander once you join and not to mention you get my blessing." He said "Wait you never even told me who you were?" I ask. "Well young one I am the creator of the universe the one and only CHAOS." To say I was shocked was an understatement. "Ok I will join you if you can tell me one thing and do one thing for me." "And what is that Perseus?" "I would like to know if my mother and Paul made it to Elysium since knowing the gods they would have put them somewhere else and if not can you move them there. Second can you give me a new name for this is the start of a new life, Chaos" "Well to answer your first question they are in Elysium. The second they entered the Underworld and Hades found out he sent them to Elysium by even skipping the judging table." I was shocked that Hades would do something like that but I am eternally grateful that he did. Chaos continued, "And for your new name why don't I call you Zane" "Ok Zane is a good name and thank you for helping me." "You don't have to thank me it is what you deserve after what you have done." He then touched my forehead and a wave of power came into me knocking me out.
When I woke up I was in a bedroom when I tried to sit up but something felt wrong so I looked behind me and saw a pair of Black angel wings ON ME!
"I see you have seen my gift to you for joining, do you like?" he said "Yes they are amazing" I said while giving them a small flap.
Then I realized I was talking to Chaos and dropped to one knee. "No need for that Zane I feel awkward whenever people bow to me" I stood up slightly blushing "So what now? i asked. "Now we begin you training" Chaos said.
Flash back over-
So that is how I became Zane the commander of Chaos' Army.
1,000 Years later
Zane AKA Percy's POV
"What is the status of Alpha group?" Zane asked "Alpha group's target has been taken care of, sir" someone responded back "Good, Reporting to chaos target is dead, I repeat target is dead." I said
"Report back to HQ Zane and job well done." "Thank you, sir" I responded I gathered my personal group and teleported them to HQ. "Zane, wanna play some B-ball?" Jack asked "no not today maybe later is that all?" "no, lord chaos needs to speak to you." He said "on my way." I said. "yes sir?" I asked " planet earth in need of help and I'm sending you by yourself since you're the seconded most powerful being in the universe, understand?" Chaos asked I knew no matter what I said it would be useless if I argue and I would get punished but I didn't care I hated those gods. "You can't do this to me Chaos. I hate them and you are sending me to help them. Let Alpha and Beta team take care of it I will take care of their jobs." "I am sorry Zane but you are the one that has to go." "Please Chaos just let me of on this." I pleaded. It seems that Chaos was getting mad because he used my real name, "Now look here Perseus you are going and there is nothing you can do about it." Not wanting to get him mad because he will explode (trust me I know it has happened once and it destroyed a whole planet) I just nodded "when do i go?" I asked hoping it was not nearby. "As soon as you put this hood I got for you it will hide your face until you wish to reveal yourself." Chaos said, brining my hopes down. "yes sir" I replied.
-At the throne room.
"Hades has informed me that Kronos is rising again and is stronger than before." Zeus said. "Who cares l bet my son James can defeat him" Poseidon said smugly. "I'm sure he can" Hermes said "but I bet Percy could defeat Kronos with a Q-tip an-"DONT SAY THAT NAME!" Poseidon yelled "speaking of him let's see how he is doing right now in the underworld, hades show him to us." Artemis asked for she loved Percy but dared not to tell anyone. "Very well Hades show us what he is doing. Zeus said hades tried to bring his image up but couldn't "That's odd I can't seem to find him because he isn't dead yet."
"WHAT, we did not give him immortality, did we?" Poseidon said. "No we did not brother so calm down, Hestia can you find him?" Zeus's said. "I will not because I like the boy." She said. "Fine, Hermes go look for him and bring him here!" Zeus demanded "no" Hermes said" I too like him and he is like a brother to me," he said. "Fine Apollo go on your chariot in the sky too look for him!" "No he is like my brother to me too." Apollo said. "Fine, Artemis hunt him down so I can kill him" "yes father" she said but with a tone of sadness and every god flashed out.
So how was it. Tell me if I need to change anything
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AmithK