This new story is a Redo of the two stories Mahou Sensei Negima!: The Freelance Mage and Mahou Sensei Negima!: Our Eternal Wings. This version of both stories is going to be different from the original version, but I hope that it'll be better than the original. So, let's get this story started!

Prologue

Inside of an unknown village located within the magical world, also known as Mundus Magicus, the homes of the villagers were being turned down to the ground by an unknown threat. Walking through the burned streets unscathed was a young male dragonfolk with two large horns on the side of his face, with a dragon tail along with tribal markings on his body and wearing dark tribal clothing.

From the rubble of one of the houses was an injured male Mage with one of his arms broken, but he gathered enough strength to point a wand towards him.

"You damned monster!"

The man fired off a large fire attack toward the dragon man, but he made a calmed expression and held his hand out and blocked his attack.

"…."

"Y-You bast…!"

Before the man could finish, he was struck with a large amount of lighting, which came from the sky above him. Appearing next to him with his hand directed towards him was a male slightly younger than him, with long pale hair, dark blue eyes and wearing white clothing.

"You really shouldn't play with people like that, it's better to end their lives quickly."

"…."

While the dragon man didn't respond he only nodded in agreement, while sighed slightly as he started to feel the ground starting to break apart. The pale-haired young man started to shake his head out of annoyance and sighed.

"Has he really forgot about our mission?"

"…."

"You're right, he's just enjoying himself at this point."

Far away from their location, was a man with long black hair, dark brown eyes and wearing odd lightweight clothing. Around him, the ground started to break opened and several earth pillars started to open up from the ground.

"Hahahaha! What?! Is there no one who can stand against me!"

From the rubble of one of the houses, a single black haired girl around the age of twelve was able to free herself from under the destroyed bits of the former house. She freed herself, only to see the horrible destruction that was done by the three men. The girl looked around in absolute terror, along with tears coming down from her eyes.

"Wh-Why did this happen?"

After coming from the rubble, she started to walk around the street, which was now completely apart with a look of sadness. She places her hand on her shoulder with a pained look on her face and realized that her arms were injured from the collapse.

"O-Ouch…."

"Hohoho, look what we got here."

Her eyes widened out of shock by who she had just heard, she turned around and saw Cole standing behind her with a deranged look on her face. As the girl was looking into his deranged eyes, she started to sweat more nervously and a cold feeling went down her spines. She started to try and move her body, but she couldn't move a single muscle.

"I-I c-can't move, even though I'm trying to move my body to move, I can't…."

"Oh, I see. Looks like we got a little straggler."

At that moment, both the male dragonfolk and the pale-haired man had appeared behind Cole with their attention directed towards the girl. The pale haired man then stepped in front of the little with a question floating on his mind and he asked.

"…Well, a little girl can you answer a question for us?"

"…Wh-What?"

"You can respond, that's good. A client of ours had asked us to locate a man, and we heard that he had passed by here a couple of days ago. He wouldn't happen to know where he is?"

"N-No, I don't kn…."

At her unfinished response, the pale-haired man sighed slightly and started to scratch the back of his head out of annoyance.

"Well, this was a waste of time. Though the leader of this place did confirm that he was in fact here, well let's get out of here."

"…."

"No, we've done enough here. Let's continue trying to track him down."

The pale haired man answered the dragonfolk's unasked question as both of them started to walk away from the location, but Cole stopped both of them and asked.

"Hey hey hey, what about this little girl?"

"Do whatever you want, after everything just did. Do you really think that we care less about a little girl."

"Hahaha, damn that's cold."

"She may already be under shock, but make it quick. Those Magic Detectives are already on their way."

At what the pale-haired man has stated, the black-haired man walked in front of the girl with his hand directed towards her face and he declared joyfully.

"Don't worry little girl, I'll make this as painless as possible, but I make no promise."

The little girl made a terrified look on her face at what had just said, she turned around and started to run away from him. Leaving the black-haired man in a state of confusion and shock, but he started to laugh loudly.

"Hahahaha, she's a runner! Well, let's see how good my aim is."

The man held up his index finger with a pale light appearing at the tip of his finger, he readied his aim and called out.

"Eternal Petrification!"

He fired off a beam of light from his finger and it started speeding towards the little girl, the beam of light was close to hitting the little girl. Though before the beam of light could reach her, she seemingly vanished almost instantly. The beam of light made contact with one of the building, and the building was turned into stone. All three of them made a slightly shocked look on their face.

"…."

"I don't know, but I think that I just saw her being taken away by someone with black hair."

Both of the men were impressed by what had just happened, but the black-haired man started to clench both his teeth and fist with an angered look on his face.

"Th-That bastard stole my prey!"

He started to release his magical power out of anger, which also started to crack the ground that was under him. Inside of the forest, the black haired girl was placed against a tree with an obscured person around her height standing next to her. She looked towards him with a confused look on her face, but she was able to say.

"Th-Thank you."

"N-No problem, but I'm sorry that we couldn't get here a bit sooner."

"We?"

"Right, I'm currently working as a Magic Detective, but at the moment I'm just a beginner. We had got word that there were three odd people roaming the area, but we didn't…."

He stopped after seeing the scared look that was on the girls face, and he had berated himself for not considering her feelings on the matter. He then held his hand towards the little girl with a reassuring smile on his face.

"I'm sorry for that, by the way, my names Takeo Narukami."

"I-It's okay, my names…Beatrix Monroe."

"Okay, Beatrix-san. Let's try and…."

"You damned brat!"

Both of them jumped as they both heard a voice that was laced with nothing but malice, which shook them to their cores. At that moment, the ground under them started to shake slightly and out of instinct, he picked up Beatrix and moved out of the way with a high movement technique. From where the spot where they were standing, several earth spikes came from the ground under them. After he gained his balance, Takeo looked back and saw what happened.

"How'd he catch up with us?!"

"Got you brat!"

Takeo heard a loud voice coming from behind him, he turned around only to be kicked towards a tree and he used his body to shield Beatrix from both impacts. The deranged man started walking towards him as he started cracking both his knuckles and neck.

"That was an excellent Instant Movement, I was barely able to tell where you went."

"Thanks for the compliment, but if you don't mind. I think I'll take her and…."

"Sorry, but when I put my mind to something I rarely change it."

As the man started to walk towards them with a sadistic smirk on his face, Takeo started to mumble something under his breath.

"Kaze Naru Shippū Jinrai. 30 Spirits of Wind make shackles capture my enemy…."

"What're you doing?"

"…Magic Arrows, Capturing Wind!"

Takeo fired off several magical arrows of wind, which then started to wrap around him and entrapped his entire body. He made a shocked expression on his face and tried to break through the trap, he clenched his teeth and glared towards him.

"Do you really think that you can stop me like this?!"

"No, but it's great for a cover!"

Takeo held his fist back as a large amount of light started to surround his entire fist, which surprised Beatrix.

"Kaze Naru Shippū Jinrai. 60 Spirits of Light come together and strike mine enemy. Magic Arrows, Series of Light."

Takeo fired off a large barrage of light arrows towards the entrapped man and each of them had made contact with his body. After seeing what happened Beatrix made an amazed look on her face, but before she could say anything Takeo grabbed her hand and started running away using Instant Movement.

"What're you…?"

"There's no way a guy like that is going to fall from an attack like that. We need to get away before…."

As they were running away from him, his eye shot open wide and he spat out blood from his mouth, which was caused by a lightning spear being pierced through his side. Once he fell onto the ground, she looked towards him with a shocked look on her face.

"T-Takeo!"

Takeo fell onto the ground with a pained look on his face, as large amounts of blood started to flow from his wound. He placed his head on the ground and started to grit his teeth out of pain, Beatrix went towards him to check up on his injuries.

"I-I don't know what to...?"

"Y-You have to try and get out of here."

She looked at him with a shocked look on her face but was stopped as the three responsible for the destruction of her village. As they were coming down towards them, Takeo started to try and stand back up, but his injury kept him from doing so.

The three men started to prepare to attack them, but all of them were taken down by a single person. It was revealed to be a man wearing white clothing, along with wrapping that covered his face and wearing black tented goggles. The three men looked towards the mysterious man with a look of confusion but were shocked by the presence that he was releasing.

"I heard that you guys have been looking for me."

"You, your..."

"I'm sorry for the problem that I've caused, I'll lead them away from here...just survive this."

The man vanished from sight within a literal second, with the three men chasing after him and trying to order him to stop. As they were wondering what just happened, Takeo fell onto the ground and became unconscious. Seeing him lying there motionless, she went to him and tried to wake him up.

"Hey, come on please answer me! Takeo!"

–Three Years Later

Inside of a small apartment building, lying inside of a room was a black-haired fifteen-year-old boy with the bang of his hair colored electric blue and wearing only a pair of pants. The teen sat up in his bed and started to clench his side, which had a fully healed x-shaped scar on his side. The teen winced slightly and smirked.

"Geez, this scar is really starting to ache."

As he was lying down in his bed he continued to clench the scar on his side with his eyes slightly narrowed, he then got out of his bed and started to yawn loudly. The teen jumped out of his bed and took out a black shirt from his drawer.

BEEP BEEP BEEP

After he was finishing putting on his shirt, he looked on the side and noticed that his cell phone started to ring. He picked up his phone and answered it.

"Hello?"

[Is this Takeo Narukami-kun, the Junior Magic Detective.]

"Yea, and you would be?"

[My name is Konoemon Konoe, I'm the headmaster of a boarding school called Mahora Academy. There's something that I require your assistance with.]

"Konoe? I'm pretty sure I've heard that name before, but I'm game."

[I've heard that you're excelling as both Magic Detective and as a Magic Swordsman, I require you to assist another aspiring young Mage, but he only recently graduated. He's talented though there are some things that he can't handle on his own and he's also caused some small incidents. There's also the issue with my granddaughter, who possess immense magical potential, but isn't aware of it.]

"Yea, I can relate to him. I remember when I graduated, I accidentally turned a grouchy old man into a…never mind. I'll be there in I don't know tomorrow morning."

[I appreciate it, just in case I've already prepared for your transfer to the school.]

"I'll be happy to…wait, what do you mean a transfer?!"

Before he could get an answer Konoemon hung up the phone, which caused Takeo to sigh slightly and he started to dial another phone number. When he was finished, he placed the cellphone to his ear, and a woman's voice suddenly came from the other end of the line.

[Aw~ how's my adorable little detective?]

"Geez, I'm not five years anymore Kaa-san! I just wanted to call and saw that I probably won't be returning for a while."

[Ah! Why not Ta-chan?! We haven't seen you in weeks, because of your other assignment. You're going to make Nari-chan sad again.]

"I just got another request at some place called Mahora Academy, though I'm pretty sure you took me to a place called Mahora City a long time ago."

[Hmmm, yea I took you to Mahora City one time…Mahora Academy. I remember the headmaster being…oh, never mind. Have a good time, but just don't have too much fun~]

Takeo was slightly confused by what his mother had just said before hanging up the phone, but he shook it off and he started to get his belonging's packed.

Tomorrow Morning, Mahora Academy

The next morning in the large academy with the escalator system, there was an absurdly large number of students heading towards their separate class divisions. Some of the students were running on their feet, some on their bikes, skates, skateboards or their motorbikes. In one group of fifteen-year-old middle school girls was a girl with light blue hair, a black haired girl, and a tall black haired girl with her tried. The tall black haired girl looked towards the other two and asked with a wondering look on her face.

"So, what do you think Negi-kun is going to teach for class today?"

"Hmm, I don't know Akira-chan, but it's probably going to be boring."

"I know Yuna-chan, Negi-kun is a great teacher, but his lessons can sometimes drag on."

As they were running towards their class, within the large crowd of students there was a familiar teen with black hair rushing passed the students.

"Excuse me, pardon me!"

The three of them heard a familiar teenage male's voice coming from behind them, they then turned around and saw a slight black blur. The was revealed to be Takeo who was now wearing a black jacket, dark blue shirt, jeans and sneakers along with a duffel bag strapped around his shoulder. He then turned his heels toward them and smirked towards them, while winking towards them.

"Excuse me, ladies."

The three of them blushed slightly at him, he then turned back around and started maneuvering through the large crowd of students with quick footwork. The girl now named as Akira made a slightly confused look on her face by what had just said and asked.

"Who was that I don't remember seeing him?"

"Maybe, he's a new transfer student."

"H-He was kinda handsome."

After the light blue-haired girl had said that, all three of them started to wonder about Takeo and why he was going towards their division.

Inside of the Dean Office

Meanwhile, inside of the Dean's office old man, Konoemon was sitting behind his desk stroking his beard. In his hands, he was looking through several papers dealing with the students of Mahora Academy.

KNOCK KNOCK

"Who is it?"

"It's me Takeo Narukami."

"Oh, Narukami-kun you can come on in."

Takeo opened the door to the Dean's office and started walking towards the Dean's desk with one of his hands inside of his pocket. Dean Konoemon looked towards him with a slightly interested expression on his face and said.

"I'm glad that you could come Narukami-kun."

"Takeo's just fine, so what's this problem you wanted me to look into?"

"I need you to assist Negi-kun, the new sensei of one of our all girl's sections classroom 2-A."

"Wait, I thought you said he was a new Mage who just graduated?"

"He did just graduate, he's ten years old."

He then made a shocked expression on his face by what the Dean had just said, with the Dean making an amused expression on his face at his sudden reaction. Takeo then looked towards him and asked, with a deadpanned look.

"Let me get this straight, you have a ten-year boy teaching a classroom full of junior high girls…oh, god please tell me there's not a Shotacon among them."

"Well, there's the…never mind. Negi-kun is actually doing a good job as their teacher, the only thing I'm worried about is his low confidence in himself."

"Wait, Negi. I'm pretty sure I've heard a name like that somewhere before, but…."

As Takeo was trying to think about the connection between Negi's name, along with another name that was currently on his mind. But before he could finish, Konoemon had answered him instead.

"He's the son of the Thousand Master, Nagi Springfield."

"Y-Y-You mean the legendary Magister Magi, the Master of a Thousand Spells. He actually had a kid, but there's no way that…. Though he only vanishing like ten years ago, so it wouldn't be so farfetched that he had a kid. So, I just have to transfer to the boy's sections and just keep an eye on…."

"Actually you're transferring to the same classroom, and you'll also by staying in the girl's dormitory."

Takeo spit take at what he had just suggested to him about him living inside of a dormitory with several girls and the thought of it sent an embarrassing image in his mind. But he shook off those thoughts and looked towards him with an irritated look on his face as he slammed his hand on the Dean's desk.

"Are you serious?! What kind of Dean allows a fifteen-year-old boy to room with another girl?!"

"Wow, you're really temperamental I thought that any teen would be ecstatic to be rooming with a beautiful girl. So do you agree?"

"W-What the…tsk, fine. I'll agree, but who'll I be rooming with?"

"I don't know, it's up to whoever you ask. Also, you'll be receiving your actual school uniform sometime tomorrow."

"Alright, so where exactly is this classroom?"

KNOCK KNOCK

Both of them were stopped after hearing another knock at the door, the dean later heard someone ask 'May I come in?' from a voice that belonged to women.

"Yes, you can come in Shizuna-sensei. She'll be taking you to Classroom 2-A."

"Ah, so you're the new transfer student."

"Hello, my name is Takeo Naru…."

Before he could finish introducing himself, Takeo ran face first into a beautiful blonde haired woman's soft and large bust. Takeo's face started turning bright red out of embarrassed as he was nestled between her breasts, he immediately stepped away from him and shouted out of embarrassment.

"Ah! I'm sorry! I'm sorry! I'm sorry!"

"Ara, it's alright Takeo-kun. Hello, my names Shizuna Minamoto I'm also the school's counselor and nurse."

Takeo looked away with a look of embarrassment still remaining on his face after remembering what just happened, as she continued looking at him with a smile on her face. Konoemon looked towards him with a slightly amused expression on her face at his reaction, which caused Takeo to narrow his eyes towards him.

"Well, why don't you just go to classroom 2-A and introduce yourself?"

"Yea yea."

"Come on, Takeo-kun."

Takeo again blushed as he noticed Shizuna looking towards him with a smile on her face, he then started following her outside of the Dean's room. After both of them left the room, Konoemon made a slight smile on his face and stated silently.

"Well, I can already tell this will be interesting."

Inside of Mahora Academy's female middle school division, both Takeo and Shizuna were walking down the halls with several of the girls looking towards him and blushing slightly.

"Wh-Who's that?"

"Is he a new student in the guy's section?"

"I don't know, but he's really hot."

"His hair looks odd, I guess it makes him look like a bad boy."

Takeo started laughing slightly nervously at the attention that he was getting from them, Shizuna then looked at him with a questioning look and asked.

"Oh, is this your first time in a school?"

"No, I actually went to a slightly different kind of school. This is actually the first normal school I've ever gone to."

"Hahaha, trust me this school isn't actually that normal, but I can say that you won't be bored."

As they were continuing down the halls, Shizuna looked towards his hair with a slightly wondering look on her face.

"So did you really dye your hair like that to make yourself look like a bad boy?"

"I didn't dye it, my hair was like this when I was born."

"R-Really?"

"Everyone has that reaction, it was the same thing with my dad. So what're the people in Class 2-A like?"

"Hmmm, well they're interesting, to say the least."

Once Shizuna had said that while laughing, Takeo looked towards her with a slightly confused look on his face. After they were standing in front of Classroom 2-A, Shizuna looked towards him with an endearing smile and stated.

"If there's anything that you need just come by my office."

"S-Sure thing."

Takeo opened the door and started walking into the classroom, but as he was walking into the room his foot ran into a tripwire. And a bucket of water was close to falling down on his hand, but Takeo only stepped aside and grabbed it from the handle. Takeo later held his hand out and caught three trick arrows with his hand as they were coming passed him, which caused a pink haired girl to make a shocked expression and a girl next to her who greatly resembled her stared to lecture her.

He turned towards the class of girls and immediately noticed that some of them were immensely cute and a lot of them were maturely beautiful. And he was immediately caught in thought.

"Hmmm, these girls are really cute, but do those immensely beautiful and mature ones even count as middle school…is that a robot?"

As he was thinking about the more mature looking amongst the middle schoolgirls, his attention was caught towards a robotic green haired girl sitting near the back of the classroom.

Takeo made a slightly confused and surprised look as he saw a green haired girl with robotic parts coming from her body. He looked next to her and noticed a blonde haired girl sitting in the seat next to her, he started to feel slight magical presence coming from her body.

"And that girl has some mana coming from her body…a loli. And why is she looking at me like that?"

He looked and noticed the small blonde haired girl staring at him with a suspicious look on her face, and narrowed her eyes slightly. Both of them continued getting into a staring match with each other, until a ten-year-old with red spiky haired that had a small ponytail, with small glasses and wearing a green business suit. The child looked towards him with a confused look on his face and asked.

"Hello, may I ask who are you?"

"Oh, you must be the English Teacher's child."

Despite Takeo's joking manner, he looked and noticed that the ten-year-old started to make a depressed look on his face while he started to become teary-eyed. Before he could say anything else, he turned his head as a girl with long blonde hair stood up and pointed an accusing finger towards him.

"Who're you to say Negi-sensei is just a mere child?!"

"Uh, probably because of the fact that he's…I don't know ten years old."

"Simple age doesn't matter when…."

"I'm going to go out on a line and say that you're the Shotacon of the class."

Everyone in the class started to giggle to themselves, while the blonde haired hair looked at him with a slightly reddened look on her face. She then turned her head and glared towards an orange haired girl with bells in her hair and heterochromatic eyes (left eye: blue and right eye: green).

"Hahaha."

"What're you at laughing Asuna-san?!"

"Nothing Shotacon."

"Argh, who're you anyway?!"

At Ayaka's question, Shizuna started to gather everyone's attention towards her and she explained further with a smile on her face.

"He's a new student transferring here, would you mind introducing yourself?"

"Very well, everyone my names Takeo Narukami and I'll be transferring to your class as of today."

Everyone in the classroom looked towards him with a shocked expression on their face along with Negi, and most of them shouted out of shock.

[Ehhhhhhhhhhh!]

At mostly everyone in the classroom shouting out of shock, Takeo only smirked slightly while scratching the back of his head.

A/N: And there goes the first chapter of the new updated version of the two stories, The Detective Mage, after going through a life-and-death situation after three years ago. Takeo later gets a call by Konoemon to join the students of Class 2-A as a new transfer student. Well, let's see how this story goes...also in this story, Takeo is just a normal Human Mage along with his father.