I don't own anything. Only the new ideas that I have added here.
All the characters and the Original Story are not mine and I write only the purpose of fun.
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This is the first time I am posting a Narnian story. I hope I succeeded writing this. Please bear with me as this is not beta checked. English is my second language.
This is alternative timeline, so story line is different. I hope I was able to capture the characters properly as I had a little trouble there.
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She was the eldest daughter of the family with two brothers and a sister. Susan Pevensie; was known for her beauty. But, only those who close to her knew the true Susan who had a gold heart with full of love. She had a habit of analysing every situation in her life, which she learnt before they had the chance to rule a magical land. It was like a dream now, only can imagine what it felt like. She missed it and her almost family like friends. However, the pain never goes away. The pain, if you can call it pain. She knew her siblings didn't feel any better, especially her two brothers; they got angry at everything and everyone. It was the way they were dealing with the miss of their family and home; Peter and Edmund. They loved to talk about their once home which is now in the past. Yet, the youngest, Lucy still held the candle, believing that they will go back to their home.
Narnia, a place you gain everything; magic, love, dreams, family and most important thing is a home. Her heart started to break, thinking about the former family and life they had lost. From the day they were pushed back through the wardrobe, all four siblings have searched every inch and every corner to find a path to get back to their home, but unfortunately they were unsuccessful. While eldest three started to lose hope, the youngest of them did not lose hope, she still believed for all of them that one day they will find directions to get back. They will have the happy ending, or rather happy starting.
Then like a second dream they were back in Narnia only to be thrown back to England. When they went back to Narnia, Susan knew in her heart that the visit was only temporary, she had a gut feeling that they would be leaving again, hence she told her younger sister she would enjoy while she can. To prove her right, they were asked to leave, after Peter defeating the Telmarine King Miraz. Their nightmare became true; Peter and Susan were never to return. She felt like her heart breaking when she heard Aslan. But, like a true queen, she had to hold herself. Finally, she lost it when she saw him, the prince who stole her heart. Susan gave one look at him, the King of Narnia, she wanted nothing more than to run to him and tell him not let them go, but she knew better; Aslan's word is final, nothing or no one above him.
She felt a lump on her throat and blinked her tears. Susan never gave her heart to any one during their 15 years of ruling, but a Telmarine boy broke her walls. Even she didn't know when she gave her heart, but she had. That also didn't matter anymore as she has lost the chance to find her happy ending with a man who she could have possibly have a family? She questioned her mind.
To make bad to worse, she started to fight with her siblings. Fighting was a normal routing for siblings and family members, but the difference was she was alone now. Other three were sticking together and she felt like she was moving away from them, creating a space between the family members who once was the greatest strength she had, but now. She didn't know what to do or how to feel.
Susan Pevensie, closed her book, while sitting on the bench at the park. She wanted to believe her sister and have faith like. But, her logical mind opposed the idea. She looked around the park; small children are playing, couples are taking walks, some are just staying lazily and some are enjoying the sunny weather which was rare in London in this season. She collected her belonging and grabbed her bag, ready to head home. Finchley felt strange to her, even though this was where she was born and has spent entire life, she felt like a stranger who was looking for directions to go home.
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She finally got home and straight away went to her room as she didn't feel like having dinner. On her way she took a peek her siblings and found her brothers in their room, so she took courage and went to them.
"Sue!" the eldest greeted her. She gave a shrug and stood stiff. "Come on." He invited her. She took small steps toward her brother. A brother; who always protected them no matter what. He always made sure his siblings were safe and protected from all the evil in which ever world they were.
She threw her herself at him and he pulled her close to him. Finally, Susan Pevensie broke herself, she started to let go her stubbornness and started to cry on her brothers arms.
"Oh Sue" she heard another voice and felt small pair of arms hugging her then another pair of arms holding them. She couldn't stop herself and started to sob. She felt bad for shouting at them, but her siblings knew better. They all were hurting, yet had each other. After crying all over him, she gained strength to speak.
"I'm so sorry. I know you are also hurt. But, I'm so angry that we again have to live here. I…I.." She sobbed again.
"Shhhhh, it's ok. It's going to be alright. Sue, we know you didn't mean anything." Her elder brother explained while patting her head.
"Yeah, Peter is right Sue, you know we love you no matter what right?" Edmund said.
"I mean we have to love you, even you are stubborn as a donkey" he said teasing his elder sister, trying to lighten the mood.
Susan smiled.
"Donkey, you say?" Lucy asked. "Ed, that's rude. Say sorry." She scolded him.
"Ok ok, sorry Sue, you are not a donkey, but you are stubborn, and no I'm not taking that back Lucy." He said looking at Lucy.
Sue smiled at her younger siblings. She felt bit better after talking to them. Peter still holding her, so she kept her head on his shoulder and called her younger siblings for a hug.
"I'm sorry. I will never fight again with you. I know that we have to move on with our lives. It still hurts." She said, explaining how she really felt.
"Sue, we are not angry with you anymore. We know why you act like that these days, but please don't lose hope Sue. I know we will go there again. Please believe me." Lucy said, while pleading her sister to not to lose hope. But Susan, still had doubts, yet decided to let go her stubborn thoughts and for once listen to her sister; Lucy. She nodded.
"I promise, I will try not to let my fear take the best of me. But, Lucy how can you still has faith? After all this, how can you know that we will go back there you know?" Susan asked.
"I know it is hard to believe, but I feel it and I still have faith. I know you all have fear. But, I will have faith for all of us. Don't worry Sue, I will help you to find faith again." Lucy promised.
Susan knew it won't be easy for her to let go of her fear and anger, but she was the Gentle Queen and she had trust on her siblings, so she decided to have faith on her family and their love. Tomorrow is going be a better day she hoped. All four siblings had a sleepover on the floor of the boys' room.
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The birds were singing the sun started to rise. It was another new day in Finchley. The Pevensie house hold was silence, only the ticking of the old grandfather's clock can be heard. In upstairs, four siblings are snuggling, fast sleep even after the clock strikes seven thirty. The girls are fast asleep, usually elder one wakes up earlier than the boys, but today was different. Eldest girl was fast asleep when the eldest of the four slowly started to wake up. He saw that all three young ones were fast sleep, literally on top of him. He felt his younger brother mumble something and went back to snuggle his pillow and Peter could hold his smirk, the greatest swordsman in the Narnia was drooling all over the pillow.
Then he saw his sisters, Lucy was sleeping on Susan's small body. He can see that she was holding her elder sister in a tight lock as if she would disappear. Then finally he looked at the most important sibling of all three. Susan; she was the most precious one for Peter. Don't get him wrong, he loved his all siblings, but Susan and he had a separate childhood for couple of years before Edmund came into the family. Therefore, Susan and Peter's bond was pretty special for him. To be fair she was the first sibling he had and he first became an elder brother because of her, also the one he had to play with, while he gave up his treasure (toys) just to see her smile. Peter knew Susan was hurting the most since she lost the chance to find her happy story with certain boy king. He promised himself that he will make it up to her, but during past few weeks he failed her, he also lost his temper as Susan was acting like someone else, but now he will make sure that his baby sister will not crying again. He gave a small kiss on her forehead and she started to wake up which lead all other siblings to wake too. They decided to go out for cycling.
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"Come on Peter faster! We are losing!" Lucy screamed as he was deliberately cycling slower than his sister.
"Woo hooo, I WON!" The eldest girl shouted happily. Susan forgot all about her worries and started to enjoy her day with her siblings. She knew they had a long way to go before they find their way back to certain home, but for now she had something she lost during the past weeks; Faith, Susan Pevensie now had faith. She knew as long as she had her family and faith everything would be better.
"Come on we will go for ice-cream, the loser has to buy!" Edmund suggested.
"Race you there!" Susan said and started to peddle faster than her siblings. She saw a small path. Strange she thought. How come I've never seen this path before?
She decided to take the new short cut she found, while looking back to see her younger brother was also taking a turn to the new route she just found.
"Come on Ed! You are gonna lose to a girl? But, you will if you peddle like that!" She said and picked up her speed.
"You wish Sue" he answered and started to pick up the speed to lose his sister and he noticed that other siblings are not far behind.
"ED!" someone screamed. He hit the break to see his elder sister's cycle collided with a huge rock and went flying.
"SUE" he screamed and ran to his sister fearing when she hit her head on the rock ground. He was too busy to notice that the park ground usually was covered in grass not rocks.
"SUE" other two came running to them.
"Sue, Sue wake up" Peter called his sister's name, but not response. Susan has hit her head, he saw a cut on her forehead and she was bleeding. He started to panic.
"Lucy get some water! We need to take her to the hospital, Ed find a vehicle now!" Peter commanded other two while holding his sister and trying to stop the bleeding.
"Uhh…Peter…" Lucy shuddered.
"What?" he asked irritatingly.
"Pete" he heard his younger brother. "I don't think I can find a cab now Pete" Edmund said while searching his surroundings.
"ED" Peter said in a warning tone.
"Seriously Pete, just look!" Edmund said.
Peter unwillingly took his eyes off from his bleeding sister. He froze. Edmund was telling the truth, they won't find any cab as they are no longer in London or not on earth even.
"Ed are we?" he asked while his younger sister started to laugh. But, then all remembered their unconscious and bleeding sister.
"Ed, I will stay here with Sue, please go get some help." He said and the younger siblings nodded.
He tore a small piece of cloth to wrap around his sister's forehead. He waited there , when he felt a cool wind and flower petals.
"Son of Adam. " He heard a soothing voice, but didn't see the person.
"Don't fear, all will be fine my dear son. Aid will come. Live without fear I will come when all hearts meet. Let go of your doubts once was your home is your home now" Then silence.
"Aslan" he said.
"Yes my dear son. I will visit you. When the love once lost is found, and when the faith is restored I will come. Stay strong. Your friends are on their way and your sister is safe. Remember my son, nothing happens the same way twice my dear. Love cannot be found, if it is not lost. Please remind it to your siblings. Rest now my son, they are here. I will be back" with that he heard footsteps.
"This way!" He heard Edmund's voice.
"Oh Aslan! High King Peter it is good to see you again." Trumpkin said while Glenstorm stood tall bowing.
"Thank you my friends, indeed it is good to see you again. Please can you help us? Susan had a nasty fall and hit her head pretty bad." Peter said.
"My King, if you don't mind I can carry Her Majesty faster if you allow me." Glenstorm said seeking permission to take the bleeding gentle queen.
"Please my friend." Peter said and the companion took the queen and started to run to the healers.
"My Kings and Queen, this way. We will get you to your sister fast." Trumpkin said.
"Thank you my friend." Edmund bowed a little appreciating the help.
"Your Majesties how long has it been in Eng-Land" Edmund was too busy worrying for his sister to laugh the way Trumpkin said England.
"Its been thirty months, three weeks and four days" the youngest answered for him. Others didn't miss the sadness in her voice.
"And how long has passed in Narnia? I mean we expected another thousands of years must have gone by now." Peter continues while riding the mare.
"No your majesties. I am happy to say it has only been four years. King Caspian still rules Narnia. I am sure we will have time to discuss these when we get to the palace. You will be trilled. I know the circumstances are not happy, yet your Majesties I promise you will see what I mean." The dwarf said making others puzzled.
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Today was different, he felt like the nature; trees, flowers and even the wind are different than other days. Present King of Narnia stood as he was taking a walk in the wood with his most trusted companion mare. Caspian has gained everything; peace, wealth and developments for his kingdom, but he still miss his family. He had his Professor, Trumpkin and Trufflehunter, yet he missed the most import four people; Pevensie family. He wished if he could have them here.
Aslan knew better, so he was too week to question Aslan's decisions. Then he felt a cool breeze.
"Son of Adam, the palace awaits you my dear." The voice said.
"Aslan" Caspian said.
"Yes my son. You are needed at the palace. Go now. I will come. When the love once lost is found, and when the faith is restored I will come. " He said the same thing he said High King Peter.
Caspian was too busy to think of the riddle as he quickly rode back to the palace.
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The guards bowed him as he entered the palace.
"Your Majesty!" the one guard bowed. "You are needed in the healers' quarters. Professor asked me to bring you there." He bowed again.
"Thank you. Is everyone ok? Is Professor hurt?" The questioned him while picking up his speed.
"No your Majesty, its not the Professor. The Qu…." The guard could not finish.
"King Caspian!" He heard Professor calling his name. He quickly ran.
"Professor. What is happening?" He asked. "Aslan said I was needed here." Current High King said while Professor took him to aside.
"My boy, your prayers are answered there are some people you should see. I know you have a lot of questions. But for now keep them to yourself." He said while the kind nodded ok.
He stopped dead on his tracks. What on Narnia! Heaves! Is that!
"Caspian!" as usual it was the youngest saw him first and came running while giving bone crushing hug for him.
"Your Majesties!" Caspian said in awed voice. "Lucy" he returns the hug.
"Caspian" it was the third Pevensie gave him a manly hug while the eldest King was too busy looking after the sick sister.
"High King Peter…" Then only he saw her, she was back, that's what Aslan must have told him.
"Susan. What happened?" He questioned from the eldest Pevensie.
Peter told them the whole story and of course Aslan's riddle from both Peter and Caspian's point of views.
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It has been 24 hours since Old Kings and Queens have returned. Three siblings refused to go out until their sister wakes up. Caspian was over the moon to see her again. He was so happy that his brothers and sister were back. But, mostly to see her again. He frighten if it was a dream, so every hour or so he would visit healer's quarters to make sure it was not a dream. Later, all four Kings and Queens were moved to their own rooms. The Queens were in one room until Queen Susan wakes up.
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Lucy was sleeping with her sister. They hope that she will wake up soon. As they knew Susan will be the happiest of all. She couldn't wait to see her sister's reaction when she sees that they are back. They have returned home.
The healers said Susan was fine, she was unconscious as she has hit her head pretty bad, but nothing to worry about. She noticed her sister blinks and slowly waking up.
"Sue" She slowly called her name.
"Aww, why do I feel like I have hit my head on a wall like a hundred times." She asked while waking up.
"SUE" Lucy launched herself on to her sister.
"Oww that hurts. Lucy! Oh " she stopped. "Lucy where are…."
"We are back. We are home Sue" Lucy replied before Susan even finish her question.
Susan looked her surrounding and tears pooled on her eyes. She looked at her sister; she too started to cry now. Both hugged each other. Then the door opened.
"Sue" Peter came running with his younger brother only a two feet behind him.
All siblings were crying and hugging now.
"Are we back really? Are we really home Peter?" Susan asked.
"Yes Sue we are here. Aslan told me we are here to stay. He will return, but I didn't get half of his riddle as usual, but Lucy here will tell you everything." Peter said.
They spend the entire day inside the room chatting, while Trumpkin, Professor and Trufflehunter visited them. Yet, Susan wanted to see someone else. But, he wasn't here. She was scared, if he has moved on. Peter, squeezed her hand and shook his head and whispered to her that Caspian is at a meeting with the council today, so he will be here as soon as he finishes the meeting and Peter asked the guards to tell him only when the meeting finishes.
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Caspian was angry, angry that the guard for telling that Queen Susan was awake for hours. He thought of all possible ways to kill the guard for bringing the news so late. But, part of him understood as to why he did it. Telmarine Lords will be furious if he misses another council meeting, while Narnians always supported him. He finally reached his destination; he fixed his appearance and knocked.
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He entered the room to see all Pevensies are in the room and she was awake. His heart was beating faster and he feared if others can hear it too.
"Queen Susan" he said in a such gentle voice and he also never knew that he had a voice like that. She smiled at him and she bowed a little.
"King Caspian. Its good to see you again." She said.
"You too my queen. When I saw your siblings I couldn't believe at first. But, I am so happy to see you all here." He answered.
Peter noticed young couple and decided to give them some space. "Edmund why don't we see the training grounds. I was dying to see the new area. Caspian, would you mind keeping company for Sue, please?" Peter asked the other king knowing full well that he didn't mind at all. He smirked and took his younger siblings away.
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"Susan, I can't believe that you are really here. There is so much to tell you." He said while taking a seat on the bed.
Finally she hugged him and started to cry, all past years' worrying and grieving are washing away.
"Caspian" She said while crying.
"Shhhh all are ok now. We are here. You are here. Aslan will fix it. He told me that." Caspian said while still hugging his love.
Finally they parted away. "Are you sure you are ok?" He asked Susan while checking her forehead. She nodded yes.
He pressed a small peck on her head. She smiled and his heart picked up beating again.
"Susan would you like to go for a ride when you feel better?" He asked.
Susan smiled. "King Caspian, are you asking me on a date, like courting?" She teased.
"I think you should get Peter's permission first, don't you think?" Susan asked. Caspian's eyes grew larger.
She smiled and gave a small kiss on his fearful face. "Don't worry, make sure that Lucy is there when you ask him." She smiled and said. "To answer your question, yes I would love to."
He smiled and both spend the rest of the evening talking and stealing small pecks.
They are finally together and he found his family.
THE END.
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