- Hey guys! This is my first crack at a Naruto fic. I will warn you, I tend to stall my updates, so don't be surprised if I don't update very often. Please read and review, no flames please but helpful criticism is welcome.
Summary: Neglected for their jinchūriki sisters, Mito and Naruki, not-so-much twins Naruto and Tsuneo must go against all odds and rise to the top, and they will become legends through time. OP!Naruto OP!Tsuneo, Bloodline!Tsuneo, Doujutsu!Tsuneo, Mokuton!Naruto, Mokuton!Tsuneo, Cold/Grey!Naruto, Cold/Grey!Tsuneo, Rinnegan!Naruto, Bloodline!Naruto(When I said OP, I wasn't kidding).
Disclaimer: I don't own Naruto. If I did, Naruto would have been with Hinata from the start. I only own Tsuneo, my OC.
Key:
"Brat.": Normal Speech
'Dang it!': Normal Thoughts
"Puny Human.": Demon/Summon/Celestial Body Speech
'I believe you will bring peace to the world.': Demon/Summon/Celestial Body Thoughts
"Rasengan!": Jutsu Name
Now then, on with the story!
Double Nightmare: Chapter 1: Not Worth It
Two nine year old boys looked on at the scene before them. A man with long blonde hair framing his face and blue eyes. This was Minato Namikaze, The Yondaime Hokage and Konoha's Yellow Flash. He was with a woman with red hair and eyes. She was the Red Death, Kushina Uzumaki-Namikaze. They were seen with two girls. One had long,blond hair with red streaks that reached her mid-back tied in a ponytail and purple eyes, she was about six years old. Her name was Mito Uzumaki-Namikaze. The other had pure red hair that reached her butt and was flowing freely. She was also six years old. It was Naruko Uzumaki-Namikaze(I will simply use the Namikaze last name as it's annoying to write it all every time), the twin sister of Mito. Minato and Kushina were teaching them Chakra Control and how to use youkai, which is demon chakra. The two sisters had the Yin and Yang of the Kyuubi Chakra respectively.
The two boys looked with longing and jealousy. These were the older siblings of Mito and Naruki, Naruto and Tsuneo. Naruto had tanned skin, short, spiky, golden blonde hair and ocean blue eyes. Tsuneo had pale skin, long orange hair and emerald green eyes, he was also quite tall for his age. They had the soul of the Kyuubi split and sealed into them when they were three. Because it is not the chakra, the chakra coils do not need to expand to hold the soul. If the soul regains its power, it will slowly force the coils to stretch. Mito and Naruki were seen as heroes, while the two brothers were hated and feared to be the Kyuubi reincarnated. They're expression turned sad as they recalled why they were not training with them.
-Flashback-
A 6 year old Naruto and Tsuneo walked through the streets, ignoring the glares that were directed at them. When they finally got home after what felt like hours,but was only a few minutes, they were home. "Kaa-chan, we're home!" Naruto called. No response. After the twin sisters were born, their parents seemed to neglect them. At first they understood, seeing as the twin sisters were babies but as time went on, it only grew worse. They were a lot smarter than they let on, and understood most kids don't. They were brought out of their musings when they heard a clang from the kitchen. Curious, they walked into the kitchen and saw their mother cooking dinner. "Oh, hello Naruto, Tsuneo." She said without turning around, knowing it was them. "How was the park?" "It was fun." Tsuneo answered in a voice lower than his age would suggest. Kushina simply hummed in response. Today was October 10th, their birthday. Coincidentally, The brothers and sisters were born on the same day, despite being three years apart. "You almost missed Mito's and Naruko's birthday dinner." Now they were really upset. How could their own mother forget their birthday. Brushing it off as simply not mentioning it was their birthday since they already knew, Naruto questioned, "Where's Tou-san?" "He should be here soon, just finishing up his work." Kushina responded. Nodding, the boys left for their room. They preferred to share a room even though there was plenty of space in the Namikaze compound.
A little while later, They heard their father call, "Naruto, Tsuneo, Dinner time!" Getting up they left to the dinner table and saw the family already assembled. Sitting down, they quietly ate, listening to the conversations between the family members. Mostly it was just Minato and Kushina talking about their day. But what really struck the duo was when Kushina brought out the cake labeled in frosting, "Mito and Naruko, happy birthday!"
They weren't just upset now, they were angry, but kept a smile on their face as not to ruin the girls' day. They also joined in on the song, but only faintly. They kept up a smile until they went up to their room. The smiles dropped, scowls replacing them. One thought ran through their minds, 'How could they forget our birthday?!'
-Flashback end-
But this was not the worst part of their life. Not by a long shot.
-Flashback-
As many people from different clans gathered for the sixth birthday of Mito and Naruko, Minato stood up once everyone was seated. "I have an announcement to make." He stated. Many looked confused, but he continued nonetheless. "I am officially naming Mito the Namikaze clan heir, and Naruko the Uzumaki clan heir!" Many were shocked, but understood, since they showed promise as ninja. But the boys were furious. That was their birthright! And now that was taken from them too. As not to disturb the party, they quietly exited the grounds and went to a secluded area of the park. There, they cried, yelled and punched their pain away. If one looked close enough, for a brief second, Naruto's eyes turned grey with purple rings in them, while Tsuneo's had a black sclera with a red iris and no pupil.
-Flashback end-
The next day, they had overheard that Jiraiya, Minato's sensei, found a prophecy, saying that two siblings with a great burden will gain power and become the next legendary sages. They immediately thought that it was talking about Mito and Naruko, not even considering them. They were infuriated, even though the twins had the Kyuubi's chakra, they had the soul, and the soul will eventually regain its power. They learned this from the Kyuubi after the sisters' sixth birthday. They even found out that the Kyuubi has a name, though it wouldn't tell them until it trusted them enough. They also learned that you can't use the chakra without the soul. It is just a big mass of hatred and malice. So, they strived to become stronger than their sisters and trained everyday since then. They pushed themselves past their limits, training harder each day. They also discovered their bloodlines, Naruto having the Rinnegan, and Tsuneo having a new doujutsu called the Kaosu Shinime(Chaos Death Eye(translation probably wrong)), and found out they had the Mokuton, a bloodline used only by Hashirama Senju. They trained in them as well, becoming experts with them. They hid their true potential, though. They didn't want acknowledgement from anybody but their parents. So they just barely passed through the first few years of the Academy. This brings us to where we are now, the boys staring at the happy family. They did not hate the twins, as they didn't do anything, but they figured Mito and Naruto would no doubt become spoiled in the future. They didn't hate their parents either, but we're disappointed because they showed favoritism, not something that should be in a family. Their eyes hardened. They would surpass even their parents. Not to get acknowledgement from them, but to prove to them that they didn't need their help to become strong, and to show them what they missed out on. This silent declaration would drive them for the next year's of the academy and for many years to come.