hi my name is lucy. this is my first pokemon fanfictioN! Plase review, i'm ten (I am in fifth grade now!) and this is my frist fanfiction. Thanks!
chapter one
My name is Lucy Sylvia Maxiums Rose, my brother's naem was Maxiumes but he died in a MYSTtERIOUS ACCIDENT and my mom named me after him, I have never met him but I miss him a lot sometimes, because he is my brother, you know. I have pink hair, it is natural, everybody says its pretty but I don't like it, i think it's really weird because no one has pink hair, my mom and dad are both brown hair. While my mom died her silky hair blue, though, I like my mom a lot. I'm sixteen years old, I like Pokemon a lot, I play a lot, you can say I'm addicted but I'm not, I just really like pokemon so I play it a lot, some of my friends make fun of me so I stopped being friends with them becaause I don't want to be f riends with mean people! I don't have a lot of friends. YOu can say I'm kind of lonely, but that's mean! Don't say that.
Anyway so today I was walking home aloone, because I came from fighting raptice (I know kung fu and taikwando, I also dance, swim, do gymnastics, I do football (weird i know) but I am bad at it). I was crying because I didn't get my blue belt, I was upset, so I didn't see anyything in front of me, I was upset, I was worried too becuase I was worried that I would get robbed, or something.
Suddenly, the wind howled, like a thousand giant wolves! I shivered in my tracks! What was happening? SA feeling of doom came over me, like a jack, like the pink jacket I was wearing now, it was pink and sparkly and had bits of fluuff at the end, it was cute and it was my brother's Maxiumes's jacket, except he is dead now in a mysterious accident and I miss him. I couldn't see anything because the wind was loud, it covered up my eyes, it blew my shiny sparkling pink hair everywhere! I felt a presence of MENACE AND DARKNESSS!
But without warning,, I could SEE AGAIN! I blinked, and opened my eyes, then I blinked again because I couldn't believe what I was seeing! I COULD SEE, A REAL LIVE, LIVING POKEMON! I gasped in surprise, and shockedly took a step back, I couldn't believe what I was seeing, I was gasping in shock!
It was a ninetails, like, level 100, it had like shiny gold fur, like a million golden coins, it had nine tails, it had dark shiny eyes that gleamed with a look of ghostly, haunting, terrifying, threading EVIL! I gasped in shock, "Oh em gee," I said, in shock, becuase I was so surprised!
I turned around and ran but suddenly, it shot a powerful EMBER ATTACK AT ME! Burning flames licked my paper cheeck and neck! It burned my beautiful, silvery-pinkish hair, it turned my silky hair into a million billion different pink ashes! I fell down and I sobbed mourningly. "Spare me, oh poewrful ninetails!" I said, I could still not believe there was a ninetails in front of me! (A/N: she's not playing pokemon go!")
The beautiful nine tails pounced elegantly on top of me, she smelled like fire and magic, like if magic had a smell, which it probably smells like old bones and dusty tomes, (A/N I don't know what tomes mean but I think it means rocks) I cried more but my silver tears could not dampen her emberois rage! It filled the air like doom, like ashes, like a million wolves howling in the wind, I could not believe what was happening, I WAS SHOCKED!
"GE TOFF ME, STUPID EVIL THING!" I shrieked in unbelievable pain because her flaming paws were burning my b**bs. She growled in fury! "HOW DARETH YOU CALLETH ME STUPID, YOU'RE STUPID, " she said evily and angrily, like she was furious. "I WILL CURSE U! I WILL MAKE YOU A...POKEMON!"
Suddenly a million bits of dust, like, ashes, swirled around me threatendly! I was so scared, I stopped crying in shock! I coudln't believe this was happening to me. I thought, LIFE ISNT FAIR. Flames wrapped around my slender body, like a giant pillow, or an extremely angry snake! But then I remembered, I iwll not die! If I die, I will see my amazing, dead brother, Maximues! I felt great happiness then, like euphoria (A/N, I learned it this year, my teacher taught me) was inflating my B**Bs! I was so happy I could see my brother, I moaned with pure, deilightful, happiness!
"OU WILL NOT SEE YOUR BROTHER," The ninetails said, because she had had the pokemon abaility 'Telepathy', she had all of them! I could not believe my silver-blue eyes. "I WILL TURN YOU INTO A POKEMON! I WILL TRANSFORM YOU INTO A POKEMON! YOU WILL BECOME A POKEMON! YOU WILL ASSIUMLIATE INTO THE POKEMON WORLDQ!"
I cried and begged for mercy, but, but! The evil, extremely angry ninetails ignored my heartfelt pleas. she started saying a spell! "turn into pokemon, you will not be my son," She said, in a soothing magical evil voice, like Hypno's call. I cried in despair, not only would I never see my sweet, dead brother, I was going to become a pokemoN! What would I become, I wonder. WHy does this happen to me? I was a good person, i could not believe this, I was screaming with pain..., as I became...
A POKEMON!
okay this is the end of this chapter. I hope all of you enjoy. I didn't know how to spell some of the words though, :3 I hope u will forgive me, sorry. Please review and tell me what u think! :)))) I worked really hard on this!