"This is based off of the Classic Disney movie we all know and love, but it's a little more mature than the film, sort of like a coming-of-age type of story. The characters are anthropomorphic (meaning there are no humans, no Jenny, Winston, Fagin or Sykes) just all our favorite furry characters and a few new ones; there will also be some likely appearances of other furry Disney characters(I.e. Lady and the Tramp, Aristocats, etc.) and some non-Disney (I.e. All dogs go to heaven, Banjo the Woodpile Cat, etc.). Oliver deals with abuse, abandonment, AIDS & other harsh ways of growing up in the 80's; sometimes good and sometimes bad."
The police dog drove through the harsh Brooklyn streets looking at the disarray of the neighborhood. He looked in the back seat of his car to see the little orange kitten still crying and sniffling since he picked him up. The officer sighed and finally spoke to the poor kid "look Oliver" he said "this is the fifth time I picked you up, hell I don't blame you for running away from all of...this" the officer removed his glasses "but your mother really wants you home" he said.
"Yeah right" thought Oliver "the only reason she'd want me home is for her welfare checks to keep coming in." Oliver came from an abusive household, his mother was an abusive alcoholic and his father was absent for most his life. "Maybe this time she does want me back" the little kitten thought "hopefully she'll be in a better mood" he prayed.
The Dalmatian cop pulled up to the Public Housing and held the kids hand on the way inside. He knocked on the door of the apartment where Oliver and his mom lived and just like that the door opened with Oliver's mom on the other side of it. "Evening Mrs. Twist" the officer courteously said "I found Oliver again" and just like that she put on the water works "oh my baby Ollie" she said as she hugged him tight and kissed him "thank you again for bringing him home officer" she continued. The Dalmatian tipped his hat and bid farewell and then everything went cold.
"Why...the fuck...do you do this" Oliver's mom yelled, Oliver just whimpered and muttered while his mom mocked him. "You're such a wuss you little shit" she yelled as she reached for her hard liquor. She walked back and forth while Oliver stood up against the wall, then he noticed that his moms iron was plugged in. With that realization he ran for his bedroom door, but it was locked; "I locked it" she said "cause I knew that's where you'd run first" she continued "I just can't understand you Oliver, you have a home, a working mom, food" she stared at him mercilessly "and yet you continue to piss me off" she said venomously.
Oliver watched as his mom unplugged the hot iron and looked at him coldly "you know what comes next" she said. Oliver was about to pee himself "no mama" he begged "mama please don't" he mewled. "Shut your fucking mouth" she said as she grabbed his arm "sometimes life is a pain in the ass kid, now take it like a man" she growled stuffing a sock in his mouth to muffle his wailing. Suddenly she began tearing up, "you took everything from me; my money, my food, my husband" she said with her lip quivering "now you're gonna pay for it" she said gritting her teeth.
The iron hit Oliver's back causing him to wail uncontrollably; he tried struggling free but that just made the stinging worse. When she was done, Oliver laid on the floor crying and his mom sat in her chair clutching her liquor and narrowed her brow "so you don't like living with me anymore huh?" she said "well maybe I don't like living with you anymore you little mistake" she said venomously at him. She grabbed Oliver by the arm and they both went out the door and out into the street.
His mom whistled for a cab and they got in and then they came to a bad neighborhood on the far side of town. "This is where your living now, you won't see me again" she yelled. The cab driver thought she was mad "lady what's wrong with you" and then she looked at him and said "just drive."
Oliver looked around and saw a gang of dogs staring at him, some were smiling while others growled. One dog came closer, he was a big Rottweiler, laughing at the little kitten who was terrified beyond belief. "Well, well, look at what we've got here" the big dog said "fresh piece of meat" said a vicious looking bulldog. Oliver was so scared to the point where he finally wet himself "aw da widdle baby go pee pee in his big boy pants" said one dog chuckling. The Rottweiler looked down and gripped his paw on the Kittens shoulder "looks like your mama screwed you over kitty, but don't worry we'll take good care of you" he said as he started to unzip his pants.
Oliver new that this guy was gonna rape him for sure, so he did the only thing that could save himself, so he clawed the dog and ran like hell. "That little fuck" the dog growled in pain from the cut "get him" he shouted to the others. Oliver ran to a dark alley way and climbed over a fence while the dogs barked and growled on the other side "you can run kitty, but you can't hide from us" the Rottweiler shouted "I can smell your piss" he said.
Oliver stopped running when he was finally out of sight from the dogs and curled up against a brick wall in an alley way. The little kitten began crying when he realized that he was on his own, had nowhere to go and nothing to eat. He couldn't go home, not after what his mom just did, he couldn't go to the police, his mom would convince the police that he was lying about all the things she did. Oliver laid his head down on the cold concrete and cried himself to sleep, cold, alone and hurt.
So what did you guys think of Chapter one? Intense huh? I'll put up Chapter 2 whenever I get the chance to. Please, please review!