Here's a heads up. These reviews have been killing me so I don't know if I'll finish the sequel. That's why I have been taking a Harry Potter break lately other than the other two. I'll think about it though. Some of these make me think of 5th grade and High School which were absolute shit to me. And here's a heads up, I'm mentally and physically disabled so cut me some damn slack people that hate this story! There may be a lot of followers and favors still. I'll think about it. Sorry.
Guest
Well this chapter was dogshit and no point in reading the rest of this is how Harry will be lol pathetic
Guest
Fucking retarded
Guest
Fucking retarded
man
One of the worst stories I've ever read
Z.K.A
im sorry to say this but u must agree with the others... one of the worst writtrn fics there are... you had a great plot you know but it was done hastily and grammatically bad... plus it seems no consistency with what team is playing against Bulgaria... it could have been a world cup match or euro cup match for puddlemore but it would never be a national team vs a club team...
4Tenjo
"Only Sirius, Remus, James, Lily, Harry and John know about the disowning deal. Not even his friends or Professors know."
Ya know.. considering the deal was offered via howler in the middle of the Great Hall, I'm pretty bloody sure literally everyone knows the deal.
Vegdeg
So first its puddlemere vs bulgaria... a league team vs a national team, last time I check man u isn't playing against France. Then it switches to Ireland, then to England, then we are back to puddlemere celebrating...bruh.
Mac55
poor plot, cliche as hell, plus league teams do not go to national tournaments. Countries have national teams, with players picked from league teams. Which is why the Book had Ireland vs Bulgaria, not puddle vs the Cannons.
Magnusss
This is unbelievably poorly written, I'm dying inside as I read this.
Silver
wtf is this shit ? sooo he gets famous and his father and mother start to feel sorry? bullshit