LORDY it's been a while, and I haven't completely abandoned this story, I just got burnt out on it UGH. I'm trying to see where I want this to go next, as I've got the ending figured and some key points I want to happen, but the build-ups to those parts are what I'm at a loss on. I have started the next chapter, but it's going extremely slowly and I hate that my mind has pretty much yeeted for motivation and ideas on this ;-; Bit by bit I am adding, but this will probably take me years to finish, as I'm incredibly picky with stories and how I want them to go. In the meantime, I have gotten reviews and I want to address them ^^
Fudge, Yes Sarge has become one of them o.o I almost hate the idea myself, but because I hate it is why I decided to implement it. Sarge stands for the exact opposite of what Mystery is up to, given he's a war veteran, but not all fanfictions are walks in parks, I gotta remember XD
Ranger, Thank you for your rambling review, I like such critique ^^ The times my OCs seemed a bit much were fill-in moments, otherwise the meat of the story is going to be highlighting the canon characters on down the line. It's been about 2 years, so I can say I have gotten to know our new vehicle by now and he is wonderful! As for the irony of Finn being a nutjob suddenly and going against his cause, that's because I love seeing characters doing things you never expect them to, i.e. Finn becoming a villain. The reason for his insanity...well, I'd rather you read and find out one of these years when I finish it XD
Bean, I am so glad you like my story so much! I'm trying hard not to abandon it but my mind has gone onto other things to write and make fanfiction about FFFFFF. In time I promise the next chapter will come!
Lewie, A lot of people ship those two, but I don't XD Their age difference is too much to me personally, but ship whoever you please ^^
lucienkagegmail, You sound like the boring pathetic loser here if you're really getting your panties in a wad over a fanfiction, aka a story written by someone for fun, lmao. Fascinating, the story is nowhere near half finished and Finn has barely been evil so I haven't gotten to write his full evil persona but whatever, hate away. Don't like, don't read. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
Anyway, I hope you all aren't mad at me for taking forever on this hhhhhh. But I'm serious when I say my mind just completely dropped all motivation and ideas for these blank parts and wants to skip ahead to the end! I'm gonna push myself to complete it, but for now just sit tight on this and don't hold your breath for a soon update ifjdbekeksksne.
~Midnite