Luffy

Hiya Author Here, so basically this is my first rodeo in the writing world. I'm new and I accept criticism, I'll try my hardest to make this story as entertaining as possible. So this first one is basically a starting point that will possible foreshadow possible interactions with his upcoming crew. I understand some people don't like GENDERBEND or anything like that, I won't make relationships like lovers, but I will have nudity and possible swears(not that anyof you actually care wether there's nudity or swears) I'm not trying to make people slutty, or be absolute dicks. One Piece is owned by Echiro Oda and all characters featured are his creations. Anyway I'll shut up, enjoy the prologue.

PS. I've made a few changes to other characters... dont shit on my for them, I'll accept criticism, but on the way I write and the story not on the characters... please...

Luffy, Ace, Sabo

So quick recap, Luffy got the scar under her eye to try to get on Shanks crew, he sacrificed his arm for her, he gave her his Straw Hat, he got the Gomu Gomu no mi. And This takes place a few weeks after Garp dropped Luffy off. (This all takes place in a single day, and basically gets you accustomed to my Cute Luffy). Just a quick run of the characters:

Sabo(the oldest) she's modest, tall, blond, and teases Ace because he's always blushing around her.

Ace(the only BOY of the trio) is typical Ace, a little boy(brat) and hates it when Sabo teases him (but he can't help it), and tries to avoid touching Luffy(girl).

Luffy(the youngest) is a tomboy, she doesn't understand boundaries, no shame, hates dresses, very outspoken and honest(to a fault). She cares deeply about her older brother and sister and tries to improve for their sake.

Now that introductions are out of the way, let the day begin:

"Ace why are you so mean to her?" Sabo asks Ace as they walk around the forest enjoying the lovely day. "Your suppose to be nice to girls Ace..." She says in a stern voice to emphasize his attitude toward Luffy. "She's weird, she's always hugging me, chasing me, and it just becomes too much... she's ANNOYING!" Ace yells turning back to Sabo walking closely behind him.

"She probably just wants to get close to you Ace, it's not like she has any other friends but us..." She stated, Ace turns back around and keeps walking starting upward to the sky. "Maybe if she wasn't so clingy..." he said, Sabo put her hand on his shoulder and pulled him toward her, he turned his head to look at her questioningly to find their faces only an inch apart as she smirks with lidded eyes. He gulps nervously, "Like this?" She questions "You said you don't like how clingy she is yet I can be clingy with you?" She states, he blushes from the closeness and pushes her back a little. "Shut up! Your different! You do that all the time to tease me!" He shouted toward her while blushing.

She giggles, tilting her head to the side and putting her arms behind her in a cute stance. "Awwww come on Ace..." she says in a childish tone, "Don't you like it when big sis coddles you and makes you feel like a big boy..." she says teasing Ace further about his issues with girls. His face turns redder about to shout when suddenly... "FOUND YOU TWO!!!" She shouts landing on the two below.

"LUFFY!!!" Ace shouts at the little girl laying on top of them. "Oooh~" Sabo looks how closer her and Ace are and smirks up at him. "Come on Ace, she's just having fun~" Ace grunts and pushes Luffy and Sabo off him. "Luffy what the hell!? We could've been hurt!" He shouts at Luffy. "But it's all good, maybe a bit dirty but nothing a bit of water can't fix. Shishishishi!" Luffy grins widely standing up and dusting off her butt. "Yea Ace, I don't know why your so pissed. We would have fun this all the time~" Sabo says looking at Ace with another smirk. "AH! LUFFY!!!!" Ace yells blushing as he looks away. "Huh what is it?!" She shouts enthusiastically... Sabo looks over to find her shirt missing, looking up it got caught on the branch she jumped off of. She sighs, "Luffy your shit is missing..." she states pointing upward. Luffy looks up, then too her chest. "Oops." She giggles and climbs up to grab it.

"Bath Time!!" Dadan yells, having filled up the tin bucket just outside the shack on the left side near the forest. "Bath time!!!" Luffy yells and makes a run for the shack. "Last one there has to wash Luffy." Sabo joking looks over to Ace and starts running following behind Luffy. "Wha-, hey wait a second! You got an early start!" He shouts chasing them down.

Ace lost, he now has to wash Luffy. "Luffy! Please hold still!" He shouts as Luffy splashes around. "But this is the only time I get to play in water!!" She pouts up toward him, he sighs "If you let me wash you we can go for a walk tomorrow..." he says reluctantly, blushing. Luffy turns to him with starry eyes and jumps in joy. Ace try's to calm her down blushing profusely as he had seen too much. Shortly after the bath, Sabo pulls Luffy and Ace inside to their small room. "Okay I got something to say, if you don't mind indulging me.." she says worriedly, as she gazes at them both with a sad expression. Ace notices her expression and becomes worried himself, "You can tell us anything..." he says calmly giving her a soft smile, "What's wrong Sabo? Did something bad happen..." Luffy says worriedly, as she solemnly looks at Sabos sad expression. "I'm... I'm going to be... going to be leaving... soon...".

"I'm... I'm going to be... going to be leaving... soon..." she says the last words quieter, as she nervously gazes at their expressions for their responses. "SABO!!" Luffy begins to bawl hugging Sabo tightly "Don't go!! Please don't go!!!" She yells crying onto her clothes, Sabo hearing Luffy's cry's starts to tear up and hugs Luffy tighter. Ace stares blankly, trying to process everything. 'She's leaving... she's going away...' he thinks to himself. "NO!" He shouts running out of the room into the forest, Sabo looks up, she tears up more, her heart aches, she feels like her heart got stabbed with a knife, she looks back toward to the door, then too Luffy bawling. "Luffy..." she says softly, "Do you... 'like' Ace..." she says nervously trying to calm her down. "Ace... he's like a big brother I never had..." she says teary eyed with a stuffy nose as snot and tears gush down her face. Sabo softly smiles down at Luffy, petting her head. "I got to get Ace... I'll bring him back..." she says softly to Luffy, "I promise, I'll come back and see you two again.. but first I... got to tell Ace..."

He's running deep into the forest, his heart hurts, his head hurts. He's angry... but he's also sad. He starts crying while running, he reaches a clearing far away from the shack. He pants, clenching his shirt just above his heart as he falls to the ground trying to hold back tears. He screams into the sky as he starts to bawl, alone, in the middle of the forest. "Ace..." he darts up, hearing the soft voice, he turns to face behind him. Sabo... "why..." he says quietly, "Why are you leaving! Please don't leave! I... I... I-I don't wanna be alone again!!!" He shouts at her crying his eyes out. She kneels next to him, embracing him softly, "You won't be alone..." she starts, he holds back his tears and glances up at her. "You'll have Luffy... won't you?"

Next Day

Sabo has left, Ace and Luffy go for a walk, they reach a cliff watching as his ship fades into the distance. Luffy sobbing quietly to herself, Ace tears up a bit and looks down at Luffy next to him. ' I've been so mean to her.. yet..' he sees her reddish face as tears run down her cheeks as she's bunched up like a ball with her legs to her chest and arms wrapped around them 'She's just a little girl, why did I ever think any different...' "Luffy..." Ace says looking back out at the sea, sniffling, she looks up at him. He breathes trying to calm himself, "Do you... wanna go fishing..." he asks nervously, blushing as Luffy's sobbing expression turns to one of joy. "I would love to!!!" She shouts as she stands up hugging Ace, first reluctant, but hugs her back, embracing her warmly. 'She's not so bad, and she's pretty cute... I guess she was right...' "Sabo will come back to see us one day right?" Luffy says softly looking to Ace for a answer, he looks down, inhales deeply, "I'm sure she will, we are family after all." He says somberly smiling at Luffy, she lights up and hugs him tighter. "Cmon, let's get food first before we start catching some." He says enthusiastically trying to bring up the mood. "FOOD!!!" Luffy shouts starting to drool, going from 0 to 100. He smiles at her childishness, 'So this is how she saw me huh?...' he looks up inhales the outdoor air. 'Luffy, you are my lil sis, and I wouldn't give you up for the world... let's fulfill our dreams...' "Cmon Ace!" Luffy shouts, "I'm hungry!!" Ace looks up to see her dart toward the forest, "Wait!! Don't eat it all I have to eat too!!! LUFFY!!" He shouts chasing her down.

Sabo Died...

Damn, that was though. Paragraphs are a bitch but, I think I made it work. Criticism is appreciated and will be added to future installments if people like it, or maybe I'll add some cause I'm bored. Anyway, this was the prologue, of course everything after this is gonna be a 17 year old Luffy, don't hate me for making Sabo older, I just wanted it that way. If I made Ace too emotional then sorry, and even though this is about Luffy I had to set up this relationship, not like they'll be coming together but as a family bond. I kinda wanted to set up how close Sabo and Ace were and how Luffy kinda intruded on that, but with Sabo gone Ace accepts Luffy just as Sabo did. Tried to make an emotional rollercoaster but probably didn't do all that well. But that's what criticism is for. Thanks for reading and lil preview of the next one: Zoro...