So I looked over my prologue after i posted it(what an idiot) pacing issues, everything is happening too fast, and the last paragraph is a bitch to read. I was planning to make each chapter after this shorter so I don't have to deal with issues like pacing. I hope that you at least found some part of the prologue interesting, I swear everything after is just supposed to be short stories of Luffy and his crew, a list of future chapters: Zoro, Nami, Usopp, Sanji, Chopper, Vivi, Robin Franky, Brook. These are some of the chapters I was planning on making, and if these turn out well or people have ideas for other characters, I might add more. But anyway the prologue was a rough and messy, a few spelling errors and punctuation problems, I hope to fix these in the future. Thanks for reading if you ever had the time to glance over it.
