A/N: Hello, sadly this isnt a new chapter, just a response to a few reviews. (At the end of this page I will address my absence too).
Geo soul: The things that made them guilty for what they did is seeing how he has cut himself out from their lives and from society which makes them feel guilty for causing it to happen.
Phillip Craig: Thank you, I try my best.
Boygenius2020: I, don't know how to respond to that. It's part of the plot which is why it happened I guess?
AnthroDragonGuy: Ok, I see now that a lot of people find the start unrealistic and, now going back over it properly, is quite true and I can only apologise. Hope you are still enjoying the story regardless.
Delquea: Oh, Ok. I guess that's true and I'll just give her my own name or what ever name I decide if I write a second story for her.
viruet820: Yeah, I changed it because that's what the story kind of is. The whole story is to focus on how he forgives the people around him and how he moves on from the trauma so forgiving the biggest culprit in the second chapter would make for a really short story.
simm36: Thank you for the review, I am currently taking a Spanish GCSE so I kind of understood what you said I think? In response I would like to say Gracias!
SuperSonicBros123: Good to see you enjoy the plot of the story so far.
Guest: I think that she is like Ms DiMartino in that regard yes.
Ok, now onto the remaining guest reviews. All of these I will address together as they all hold the same point. So, all of the reviews seemed to be aimed at the first chapter and I see why. The lack of police intervention/the schools intervention is unrealistic, the 'sisters bad' cliche is annoying and the parents intervention is also lacklustre.
In response, I would like to say that the cliche of the sisters is just my preference for this story and if you dislike it, Wait in the future until I write one without that cliche. The police intervention and school intervention is just the lack of thought put into the story. My story right now is a make it up as you go story, so are my other 2 on my profile. This is because I had originally written a plan for an un posted story but changed it every time I reread it for like 2 hours straight so I thought I could just make it up as I go along and include all my thoughts get a good story, clearly not. To be honest, I forgot to write about police intervention and the sorts so sorry about that. I will finish this story but may make a remake in the future or edit some bits later on. Finally on the reviews, the parents intervention. I forgot to write this too. Sorry.
In short, I should probably plan my future stories so it doesn't get bad and unrealistic. I will definitely keep this in mind for the future.
And to end this authors note, my absence. I haven't written in a while because I am taking a break. Writing is stressful. Damn! Also, I am writing a few plans for any future stories I have planned. I will not be posting any stories for the next few days. But until next time, bye!
unkownwriter21
