Phantom Hotel - Older version

by CaptianKate

Mavis Dracula wants to go out of the hotel to see the humans. Her dad finally lets her leave and it doesn't turn out how she thought it would. A boy with white hair and no memory of his life? A tall skeleton in a suit with a rag doll woman? Not exactly how she thought her birthday week would go. Complete! Note: This story does have a rewritten version currently in the process!

20. Hello! I'm back!

Hey everyone! Guess what? I'm alive!

So real talk, I was rereading this the other day and I made a decision.

I really don't like the flow of this story. The Mavis lying to Danny part doesn't make sense. I hate the master crap since it really doesn't make sense as to why it's even mentioned when it's literally just mentioned and then skipped over.

So Imma fix it.

I wrote this story 5 years ago during class in my sophomore year and it was more of something to distract me from learning but I'm older, hopefully better at writing and I'm ready to change it. In the past, I really didn't know how I was gonna change it but I toyed with the idea of rewriting it for a long time. Worry not for those who really like this story, it'll still be kept up. This story is not at risk for deletion because while I really don't like the original, I could never delete it. Plus, I think having something to compare to the new rewritten version would be good.

So the new rewritten version will be posted and each new chapter will be posted every Friday. There will be large chunks taken out and hopefully it'll be a lot better than it was before.