ALRIGHT PEOPLE...I'VE BEEN THINKING THAT I WOULD REWRITE THIS STORY. A COUPLE OF PEOPLE HAD ACTUALLY MADE SOME GOOD POINTS AND I'M PRETTY SURE IT STILL SUCKS AS A STORY AS A WHOLE. WELL, THAT LAST ONE WAS MY OPINION, BUT STILL, THE STORY IS LACKING IN SOME WAYS.
SO, THE STORY WOULD BE REWRITTEN AND I'LL HEED TO THE ADVICES THAT PEOPLE ACTUALLY TOLD ME THAT COULD BE USEFUL IN THIS; I'LL STILL BE BORROWING SOME ELEMENTS FROM THE ORIGINAL, BUT I WOULD BE CHANGING A LARGE AND RATHER SUBSTANTIAL AMOUNT OF THINGS.
AND..THAT'S ABOUT IT. SO THANKS FOR READING MY STORY AND SEE YOU IN MY REWRITTEN STORY!
