Interlude except its just an Authors note:
Hey guys, wanted to start off by apologizing about the awful authors note last night, I was least to say exhausted by the time I finished the chapter and didn't put in the effort to really add an authors note, so Im sorry about that.
Now I wanted to answer a few questions or at least give my input of some of the things going on in the story and kind of explain it better so you readers aren't too confused, as well I'll answer some comments/review down below.
Alright to start off, the idea nagging at me the most would be Subaru's whole vision of the world, so as you could probably conclude, Subaru sees the world similarly to Wrathbaru, but the difference here is that in this story Subaru is on a journey of gaining color, while as in the Wrath if Subaru looses color.
To add onto the whole color concept, there are people with "spots", who have potential to either gain or loose color, we'll see this a bit sooner in the story.
I also wanted to address the week break I took. At first I was just lazy and didn't want to write but then I realized I could spend this time thinking about concepts and how I want the first few arcs to be written, so once again goanna apologize about that, ill make sure to update the story frequently.
Review Responses: ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
"Capella of all people recruited him? Subaru's fucked"
You thought Subaru could get away with suffering now that he has an op authority, you were truly mistaken!
"I always liked Subaru being a cultist and having... Friendly... relationships with Archbishops. But is he a Sin Archbishop of Sloth, Representing Melancholy, or is he Sin Archbishop of Melancholy? Cause in Christianity, Melancholy is a part of Sloth, and In Re Zero Gluttonies share the same sin, but different aspects."
Nah, Subaru's his own entirely separate figure, sure he can act pretty Slothful some times but that's just one of the "perks" of Melancholy, Subarus his own Archbishop, just like Hectors his own warlock. Can't say a representation of Sloth hasn't intrigued me however.
"I'd appreciate it if you were more consistent with your grammar. The story's good, but the lack of proofreading dulls my enjoyment of this."
Yeah sorry about that bud. I wasn't into writing until recently so I still have a long way to go as a writer. I'll make sure to be on the looked out more often for consistency, but im glad you're enjoying the story!
"Well, this is pretty damn good. I like this a lot and can see some pretty good potential as well. Keep up the good work Mr. Author"
Thanks!
As for all the other support I greatly appreciate it, seeing it really boosts my motivation and gets me all fired up!
Part 2 of chapter 3's coming real soon!
