A guy who simply enjoys telling stories. I love writing about movies, shows and videogames. I take as many requests as I can, and always allow suggestions for what to do next. I like to do one shots, but I prefer to write a completed story with multiple chapters.

If you have a request for a story you would like to see, or a retelling of a certain movie, leave a pm, or a request in any reviews you leave on a story.

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Current stories being published:

Dragon Ball Z: Alternate Love, (chapters will take longer in-between)

Ben 10: Alternate Alien, (chapters will take longer in-between)

Mother Nature's Affair

The Clone and the Jedi, (on hiatus.)

TMNT: Remutated

Lead the Way: A Star Wars/She-Ra Story

Currently co-writing:

Dragon Ball Z: Retold

TMNT: Remutated

She-Ra: Protector of Etheria

Lead the Way: A Star Wars/She-Ra Story

4Ben 10 The Next Generation: Bryan Jay's Charmed Life II

We're Wizards, Not Warriors

Stories in development:

Little Nightmares II: Alternate Path. If you've played Little Nightmares 2, or have seen someone who had played it, you know how sad the ending is. And so, this story follows a, "what if", path. If Mono and Six had been able to move onto a more happy adventure afterwards.

The Chronicles of Freya: set after LOTR Retold, we follow the adventures of Freya as she travels through Middle Earrh, and may find love along her way.

Avatar: Ultimate Alien: a retelling of Avatar, but with Ben 10 characters replacing the Avatar ones. Ben is the Avatar, and can transform into four aliens. Terraspin, HeatBlast, WaterHazard and Armadrillo. Kai and Rook replace Katara and Sokka. Kevin replaces Zuko. Max will be Iroh. Servantis would be the Fire Lord. Swift, Attea and Ester take on the roles of Azula, Mai and Ty Lee. Looma and Hope would be Toph and Suki. Lulli would be the daughter of the previous Avatar, Azmuth.

Fallout 3: The Wandering Trio. A retelling of the events of Fallout 3, but with a twist. Butch Deloria and Amata Almodovar accompany our main hero, Jack, as he searches for his father across the Wasteland. The whole thing would be told in the movie format, including a cast list at the very beginning.

RWBY: The Last Airbender. A retelling of Avatar, but with the characters of RWBY. Ruby as Aang. Jaune and Weiss as Sokka and Katara. Yang as Toph. Cinder as Azula. Pyhra as Suki. Ren as Zuko. Nora as Ty-Lee, who would end up with Ren. Blake as either a human version of Momo or Mai, with Zwei as a giant dog version of Appa. Crow as Iroh. Salem as a female Fire Lord Ozai.

FFVII: A New Generation. Around fifteen years after the events of the game, we follow the children of our favorite heroes on a new adventure to save the planet. This includes, Neil, the son of Cloud and Tifa. Cida, daughter of Cid and Sheera. Damien, the son of Yuffie and Vincent. Xia, the daughter of Tseng and Elena. They are joined by Cait Sith, Red XIII, and an older Barret and Marlene.

Legend of Zelda: Destiny. Ganondorf, the peaceful king of the Gerudo, finds a baby girl in the desert. He names her Zelda, and raises her as his daughter. Meanwhile, King Daphnes is given a son, Link, to be the next ruler of Hyrule. In an alliance with the Twilight Realm, Link becomes engaged to Princess Midna. One day, Ganondorf, Zelda and Link must band together with their allies to defeat the demon king Ganon, when he separates himself from Ganondorf.

Dragon Ball: Alternate Love. With DBZ: Alternate Love being one of my most popular stories, we would go back to where Goku and Bulma's adventure and eventual love began.

Metroid Mother: Samus Aran, the greatest bounty hunter in the galaxy, finds herself becoming a mother, when the Baby Metroid used her DNA to turn into a baby girl. Can Samus handle her new daughter, Cindy?

Bioshock :Convergence. An AU where Jack, Booker and Delta must work together to end the war between Rapture and Columbia, and save Eleanor and Elizabeth!

Titans: Elemental. A retelling of the show, but set in the Bruce Timm DCAU, aka; Batman The Animated Series, Justice League Unlimited, Superman The Animated Series, Batman Beyond, etc. The characters are all eighteen, Dick Grayson is NightWing instead of Robin, Bruce and Diana are a couple, and I've added two OC's. Jack Benzo, aka; Zivel, who can control the elements, and forms a relationship with Raven, (he's one of the main leads of the story). And Jack's brother Bryan, who goes through a whole Winter Soldier situation, being controlled by Slade, is broken out of his control, and joins the Titans after the season 1 finale. Blackfire joins the team on her first appearance, Slade's daughter Rose would join them after the episode with Thunder and Lightning, and Jinx becomes a double agent for the Titans after her first appearance.

Lisa The Loving: set after the events of Lisa The Joyful. One question many had was, "who did Buddy have a son with?" And in this story, we answer that. As Buddy travelled Oleth, finally beginning to mature and accept her destiny to help humanity survive, she comes across a surprise. A boy, the same age as her! As Buzzo said, there may have been more women who had survived the Flash, and one of them had had a son! Max. Max Williams. As Max and Buddy work together to survive, meeting many familiar faces from Painful, Joyful, Pointless and Hopeful, the two slowly begin to fall in love.

Ben 10: Alien Rebirth. Set in a separate AU from canon and my own story, this is a slightly darker retelling of Ben 10, (darker meaning some blood and mild cursing), with certain things being drastically different from canon. Such as; Ben x CharmCaster is the main pairing, CharmCaster would join the Tennyson's after her first appearance, with most of her episodes being drastically different or skipped all together. Ben 10 Alien Force would be the same, but again, Ben x CharmCaster, so she wouldn't be a villain, or go crazy, and I would change the origin of her powers and what Ledgerdomain is. And I would once again add Lumi into the show, where she would stay with Ben, with Ben staying mature and raising the baby Nechrofriggian with Hope. Ben 10 Ultimate Alien would be mostly the same, except, again, Ben x CharmCaster, raising Lumi, and Ben would keep the Ultimatrix. Omniverse would change drastically. The tone and designs would be in tune with the first three shows, CharmCaster wouldn't go nuts, the Rooters plotline would be drastically changed, the game show thing wouldn't happen, the Secret Saturday's would look like their OG appearances, etc. Certain episodes would be skipped altogether, especially ones from Omniverse that don't fit the tone.

Shrek: Retold. A retelling of the films, but with certain changes. Namely, most of Shrek the Third will be changed to be funnier, or I'll ignore it all together, just mentioning Fiona being pregnant at the end of Shrek 2. And of course, an OC. Shrek adopts a baby boy a few years before the events of the first film; named Nate, who would accompany Shrek, Donkey and the others throughout their adventures. Suggestions for a love interest for them is most appreciated.

EndGame: Retold. It would mostly be the same as the original, but with slight changes. Change #1: I'd actually go somewhere with the Bruce x Natasha romance in Age of Ultron, where they find a way for her to have kids, and Bruce can control his powers, they would have a son, Ross 'Skaar' Banner. And it would set up a story set in an AU, where Peter Parker begins training a younger team of Avengers. This would include Ross, Cassie Lang, Morgan Stark, and Kate Bishop.

Young Avengers: as I said, this story follows Peter Parker training a new team of young Avengers. Cass, aka; Stature. Ross, aka; Skaar. Morgan, aka; Ambush. And Kate, aka; Lady Hawkeye.

Scooby Doo: Re-doo'd! A retelling of the live action films, (the CN ones and the Hollywood ones), but with MAJOR changes. 1, Scrappy wouldn't be a villain, and would be written as an actually useful side character, being introduced in Curse of the Lake Monster. 2, no possessing demons in the first movie, instead it would be hypnotism. 3, the reasons for the gang splitting up are different, (Velma goes to college, Daphne begins designing clothes for a company, Fred becomes a writer for a mystery magazine, while Shaggy, Scooby and Scrappy continue to travel across the country, taking various jobs and such.) 4, Velma would get a girlfriend throughout the movies, (Marcie from Mystery Inc, who I would cast with Aubrey Plaza.) 5, it starts with Mystery Begins, and ends with either Scooby Doo 2: Monsters Unleashed, or the cancelled 3rd live action film where Scooby and the gang befriend the monsters they discover are real when they are investigating a mystery in Scottland, Shaggy's girlfriend would be renamed to Gina, and would be his girlfriend when the gang reunite, and sticks around for the next film.

Transformers: Re-Energized. A retelling of the Transformer movies, but with a complete overhaul on dialouge, only following the basic story of the films. The main characters would be the girl from BumbleBee, who would be the older cousin of Spike, (not Sam, Spike.) All of the racist looking transformers would be made to look less offensive, and talk less offensive.
X-Men: Retold. Retelling the X-Men movies, but would be set in the MCU, and be closer to the comics. Jubilee would take Rouges place in the films, while she and Gambit would be actual members of the team. I would actually try to do the Pheonix saga justice.
Battle Angel Alita: Retold. It would mostly stick to the film, but I would add another main character. A boy that Alita would spark a friendship with.
Matrix: Retold. Retelling the films, but with more emotion from the characters, Trinity wouldn't die, and there would be a more satisfying ending.

FNAF: The Twisted Silver Closet. A retelling of the FNAF book trilogy, but with changes to make everything that happens make a little more sense. 1, Charlie wouldn't be a robot, she would be a cyborg, so it would make sense how she could eat, sleep, feel pain and what not. 2, Charlie and John will be alive at the very end, living happily ever after, with Charlie being a cyborg, so she can have kids with John. 3, Aunt Jen doesn't die, she just gets put into a coma at the end of Twisted Ones, and eventually wakes up in The Fourth Closet. 4, a lot of the advanced sci fi and ghostly stuff would be scaled back to a more realistic approach.

SpiderMan YJ: after the events of the PS4 game, Peter Parker is contacted by Batman to join a team of younger heroes known as Young Justice. He soon sparks a romance with Zatana, while Dr. Octopus and the other Spidey villains are hired by Vandal Savage.

Ventress: A Star Wars Story. Set after the Clone Wars, we follow Asajj Ventress as she works her way up in the world of bounty hunting. She gets her own ship, a droid, and slowly builds a crew together. But everything gets interesting when she meets a young man who wants to join her crew, and the two end up falling in love. Ventress will not die, like she does in canon and legends.

Star Wars: Prequels Retold. Star Wars: Sequels Retold is one of my most followed and favorited stories I've done. So I thought of doing the Prequel trilogy, with slight changes to the movies. Such as; various dialogue changes to make it less cringy and/or boring. Personality changes such as Obi Wan being more cocky and reckless in 1, Anakin and Padme having a better told romance, cutting out some of the vile acts Anakin does in 3, etc. Owen Lars would be introduced in 2 as Anakins step brother, but would arrive near the beginning as Padme's new pilot. And of course, mentions of Obi Wan and Satine having a daughter who is hidden during the Clone Wars, (Rey's mom), and Sidious having a son who runs away in 3. And of course, I would try to make Jar Jar WAY less annoying and stupid, ie- changing him into more of an outcast with noble intentions, who has bad luck when it comes to being on his leaders good side. If people like the idea, I would also try to fit in the Clone Wars film, with Owen going on the adventure with Anakin, Ahsoka and R2 as they save Jabba's son.

A Pirates Life: all five Pirates of the Caribbean movies, retold! Again, with slight changes. Such as? Anamaria would be in the sequels, and be paired up with an OC. This OC is Owen, who would be cast with Chris Pratt, and would have a hook hand he replaced with various tools, such as a wooden hand, a sword, a fork, etc. Pintel and Regetti would appear in the fifth film with the returning crew, and even the dog. I would keep Norrington alive and have him join the crew.

Tatooine: following the events of Sequels Retold, we watch as Owen, Rey and Padme begin a new Jedi order on Tatooine with Luke, Mara, the other living Jedi and the Jedi spirits offering guidance. And as they build their new temple, many things are in store for them, including marriage, parenthood, and many other things.

TC-0066: A Star Wars Story. During the temple attack in Revenge of the Sith, a Clone named Ford has his chip damaged, and helps a youngling and a few other Jedi escape. As this happens, Ford discovers he can somehow use the force! This sets him and his new allies he makes on a quest. Where Ford will become a Jedi, finds love, and care for the youngling like their own child.

Meat Bicycle: We follow Kreig and Maya as they start a life together, working through their issues along the way.

Return of the Avatar: many years in the future, the stories of benders and the Avatar have become almost legend, with benders being extremely rare nowadays. But one day, a young man named Jek finds out he is supposed to be the Avatar! So he sets out on a journey to find anyone who can teach him all four elements. On his journey, he meets new allies. Including a turtle-bear as his animal guide, Kanan Sato; (the decsendant of Korra and Asami), who is able to waterbend, a Kyoshi warrior named Jasmine, and an old firebender named Mako, who all help him on his quest to become the Avatar and bring together whatever benders are left in the world.

Avatar- The Last Airbender: Retold. A retelling of the show, with an OC added. Coal. A firebender who ran away from home when his brother was killed in battle. He joins team Avatar a little before the North Pole. He is paired up with Toph. Zuko would end up with Jinn. Mai would end up with Ty Lee.

Legend of Korra: Retold. Another retelling, changing various elements of the show. Such as; certain plot threads and choices characters make. As well as what happens to some of team Avatar of the OG show. This would include: Sokka and Suki have a son named Hakota and a daughter named Yue, and a grandson named Sukka, who would be Korra's best friend. Aang was a better father. Mai and Ty Lee became a couple. Jinn would appear along with Zuko. Korra and Asami would be a couple from the beginning, while Mako would end up with Zuko and Jinn's grandaughter, Ursa. Toph would have a better relationship with her daughters, and married Coal, who would be the father of BOTH Lin and Suyin. Bolin wouldn't get into as many dumb situations. Opal would get a much better Sky Bison instead of Juicy. The spirits would be treated more seriously, having cooler and less goofy designs. Korra wouldn't lose the connection to her past lives.

Guardians of the Galaxy: Season 2. The story picks up right at the end of the game, but with a few changes. First off: Nebula survives her injuries from Hala. Two; Peter can bring back two people instead of one. So he brings back Lylla and Drax's daughter, Kamira. After this, we follow Peter as he, Gamora, Drax, Rocket, Groot, Lylla, Kamira and Nebula go on a new grand adventure, getting help from others, (Yondu, Howard the Duck, etc.) Peter and Gamora slowly build a relationship, and soon, a new OC would join the team and start a relationship with Nebula. I would end up bringing Thanos back into the story, with Hala having used the forge to resurrect him as a last minute revenge. This would be the emergency that occurred at the end of the game, and so the Guardians would once again be facing the Mad Titan, with Nebula becoming conflicted over fighting her father just after making amends with Gamora.

Dan and Hortence Vs: taking place after the series, Dan and Hortence make amends after she and her husband split up, and Dan gives her a place to stay. Soon the two begin forming a romance that Dan hopes he won't screw up.

Ben 10: Multiverse. A retelling of Omniverse much like how I plan to do it in Ben 10: Alien Rebirth. But with a specific change. Ben and Julie don't break up at the beginning of Omniverse, so Julie will be Kenny's mother. Most of the changes I made to Omniverse in Alien Rebirth will be repeated for this story. CharmCaster will become an actual good guy in this story.

Re-Generated Rex: a complete retelling of Generator Rex, but only with the basic premise and characters. The story would be different from the show. Rex x Breach would be the main pairing, the origins for characters like Bobo would be different, etc.

Men In Black II: Retold. Simply retelling the movie, but keeping Agent L in the story, and fixing certain issues with the movie.

DisneyLand. Or as I like to call it; Descendants, done Right. Taking the premise of the Disney Channel movie, but changing things up to make it work. The set up: The Disney princesses and princes work together in running their kingdom, as Belle and Beasts son starts up the project to bring in the children of the villains. With a 5th one added. This OC is Jack, (Jack of all trades), son of the King and Queen of Hearts. He's the only one who wants to be good at first, and slowly forms a romance with Lani, daughter of Mulan, who is the exact opposite of her mother. Mal, meanwhile, forms a friendship with Jane, granddaughter of the Fairy Godmother, Jay is revealed to be the son of Aladdin rather than Jafar, which explains his skills better. The events of all three films would be completely reworked to flow better, such as the villain of movie 3 being someone else, Gaston has 3 son's who work as Umi, (renamed from Uma)'s henchman, Harry Hook is actually the son of Smee, who encouraged him to be more like his captain than him.

Fantastic 4: I know we're getting a reboot in the MCU soon, but I still wanna tell my own version of the Fantastic Four, done right. It begins with Reed Richards being bullied in college by Victor Vandern, (his old family name being Von Doom), but Reed soon begins a friendship with Ben Grimm and Reed develops a crush on Sue Storm. As Victor goes off to Latveria, Reed and his group continue operating in the world of science, with Johnny joining in as their test subject most of the time. Then comes the mission that transforms them into the Fantastic Four, as Dr. Doom has just taken control of his country and plans to take over America; starting with New York! And thus it's up to our heroes to save the day!

He-Man: Returns. Since so many people were disappointed by the need that was the New He-Man cartoon, I decided to do my own revival of the original. No He-Man getting killed, (at least not at the beginning, and he'll be brought back very quickly), no Orko dying, no Teela being a butch bitch. It simply follows the characters of He-Man as a new and very dangerous threat comes to Eternia, and thus, heroes and villains must unite to save their land from Certain doom.

God of War: Hirdman. A year after the events of God of War 3, Kratos finds a baby girl, who he learns is the daughter of Artemis, Goddess of the Hunt. Rather than kill the child, since he's trying to change, Kratos adopts the infant and names her Iris. The story picks up when Iris is now physically 21, and is accompanying her father and little brother on the journey to the highest peak. He uses a spear and can transform into a wild animal. The story would have a cast list that would include Iris and Artemis in it.

Van Helsing: The Series. A sort of sequel to the movie, where Anna survived at the end. We follow Helsing, Friar Carl, Anna and the Frankenstein Monster, given the name Adam, as they travel the land fighting evil monsters. Along the way they befriend a werewolf who can control themselves and their transformation.

Ghostbusters 2016, Done Right! A whole overwork of the plot, where many years after Ghostbusters 2, Venkman calls together Ray, Winston, Janine and Louis, telling them that something big is happening. When asked how he does, Peter tells them that Egon's ghost told him. So, the Ghostbusters recruit a younger team to help save New York from whatever Ego warned Peter about.

Requested stories:

Human Factor: a retelling of Sym Bionic Titan with an OC named Kale, who helps Lance, Illana and Octus become adjusted to human culture. Eventually, Kale will learn that he is a descendant of his new friends people, and ends up with Illana. (If anyone can find a good transcript of the episodes, that isn't just the dialogue, let me know!)

Attack of the Titans: a crossover between the Legendary Monsters and Attack on Titan. Main character Jason is a close friend to Armin, Eren and Mikasa, who joins the military with them. Jason would end up with Historia Reiss. Jason finds that he has the ability to turn into a member of Kong's species. He and Eren in his Titan form protect the others, and Jason goes to his uncle for answers. He explains that a long time ago, his mother had studied the different Kaiju out there. But in order to keep her son safe, she had to disappear, and so she injected the Kong DNA into Jason in order to give him a way to defend himself.

Wizards: Fellowship. A retelling of Wizards, while adding several OC's to the story. Oisín - A Human who is Avatar's apprentice. Niamh - A beautiful Elf warrior princess and Oisín's beloved. Naoise - An Elf warrior prince who is Niamh's twin brother and Oisín's best friend. Abcán and Fergus - Two Dwarf brothers who accompany Avatar and the others. Abcán is a bard and poet whilst Fergus is a warrior with a mowhawk. Golden Mane - Niamh's beloved Unicorn steed who is tragically killed. Balor - A vicious and highly intelligent Orc who is Blackwolf's favorite general. Blix, Pox and Tic - A trio of Goblins who serve Blackwolf as his spies. Blix is the leader and most intelligent of the trio, Pox is the most vicious and Tic is the dumbest. Benandonner - A brutal and bad tempered Giant who serves Blackwolf. Fionn - Oisín's widowed father who is a respected Alchemist and an old friend to Avatar, he is sometimes strict but truly loves his son and would do anything for him. King Cormac - The Elf High King and grandfather of Niamh and Naoise who raised them since their parents were killed by Blackwolf. (Elves still have eternal youth, so he will be physically in his early fifties.) The Great Dragon - An ancient and powerful Dragon who is the oldest Dragon on Earth, having being born in the Age of Myth, a time where humans, magical beings and magic coexisted. Most of the oc's are named after characters from Irish Mythology, whilst the Goblins are from the fantasy film Legend by Ridley Scott. Nimah and Naoise will resemble the Tolkien Elves. Oisin will be a young man in his early twenties. Abcan will resemble Sindri from God of War whilst Fergus will resemble the younger Dwalin from the Hobbit films. Balor will resemble the Orc general from Sucker Punch. Golden Mane wull resemble the traditional Unicorn appearance with a golden mane of hair and a silver horn and not like the two legged horses at all. Abcan and Fergus would accompany Avatar, Elinore, Weehawk, Peace, Oisin, Niamh and Naiose for a while until they reach the Dwarf Kingdom of Moria (same name as the Lord of the Rings) where they find Plix and the goblins harassing the dwarves, Abcan and Fergus then stay behind to help defend it. They both meet Oisin, Niamh, Naiose and Weehawk on their way back to Montagar. Here's a voice cast for the OC's. Amos Crawley as Oisin. Lindsey Connell as Niamh. Ali Mukaddam as Naiose. Robert Craighead as Fergus. Adam John Harrington as Abcan. Tim Curry as Balor.

The Strength in Our Bonds: an AU story. This story follows Gabriel Skywalker, twin to Anakin, who went with him to train under Count Dooku. After Dooku left when he was 15, he left the order himself in order to study more of the force. From both the dark and the light, becoming a warrior in the middle of both sides. After his mother's death, Gabe returns to help fight in the Clone Wars. As time goes on, he starts a relationship with several women who agree to share him. The list: Ahsoka Tano, Asajj Ventress, Luminara Unduli, Aayla Secura, Riyo ChuChi, and Shaak Ti. Gabe ends up leading his own clones known as the 402nd, who he secretly makes sure to remove the chips, having suspicious about Palpatine.

Invitations:

There are a grew stories I wanna try writing, but I need help.

And so, if any of you have an interest in helping me write these stories below, let me know via PM.

First off...

RWBY: Rewritten. A retelling of the show, RWBY, but with certain changes later on in order to make a more satisfying experience. Most of the earlier seasons would stay the same, but it's the later seasons that would be heavily rewritten in certain areas. Such changes include: Ironwood doesn't turn evil, Penny doesn't become a human and die, team RWBY actually communicates with others in order to grow as a team, they don't turn on people who think they're doing wrong, RWBY wouldn't be responsible for Beacon and Atlas going to shit, Jaune keeps his old haircut, Emerald would join the heroes sooner, Oscar is treated like a normal person, not an all important maguffin, etc. If anyone who's very familiar with the show wants to help me write this story, PM me.

I will usually have a poll up that relates to one of my current stories, or a story I will do in the future.

Completed:

Star Wars: Sequels Retold

LOTR: Retold

E x J

The Hobbit: An Unexpected Retelling