6-24-10

hey, i was looking for that Naruto High School doujinshi and found this interesting thing instead. It's a naruto web comic that looks fairly interesting. It's about a year old, it looks like, with irregular updates, but again, it looks interesting so here's the link if you want to check it out:http:///?comic_id=30

Enjoy the summer everyone!

8-25-10

well, i was again surfing around the internet and found this one, which actually seems to be updating on a regular basis! (as opposed to the above link) on deviant art. I, at least, think it's a good read, and some parts are just FUNNY to me, heheh. So hey, feel free to check it out! Here you go: http:///gallery/?23164#Naruto-Tensei--6 . Keep in mind, this is a link to the last page of the gallery; as you all probably know, Deviant art posts most recent first, so the last page is the beginning of the story. Enjoy!

last note on this one, my favorite part so far is chapter 6!

So, let's play a little game called, what am I?

Here's the hints.

1-I'm starving

2-I'm dirt poor

3-I work late into the night on things that aren't related to my job but may impact it

4-Did i mention starving?

so, what am I? That's right, I'm a college student. As such, what ever I do have time to write will be part of projects that are pretty long term. So, if you decide you don't like my writing, well then, that's all the better for you, isn't it? You don't have to suffer through my style for much before realizing I'm a complete waste of your time. On the other hand, if you do like my style, I gotta say, your pain tolerance must be pretty high. Have you considered running XC or track?

All that aside, I do like to right, but it's not my major, and especially since I'm back in college, I don't have much free time more. I'm likely to write about anything. I've got a lot of interests, but what do I have on my computer right now? Well, I've got one forCalvin and Hobbes that's finished, and one for Dragons Rider's of Pern thats finished, but needs a couple names that I've forgotten. Those will be your first samples of my writing for you.

Other than that, I've got a Harry Potter fic I'm working on, a pokemon I'm working on (and will likely need help with since I stoped watching the show shortly after Ash enter's the Hoen region), and my prize right now is a Naruto fic that a friend and co-worker of mine and I came up with as we were working. it's not done yet, either, and needs alot of work, and we haven't had time to colaborate lately.

So, there's that. I'm welcome to reviews, just try not to be hateful if you don't like it. While i like reviews, I only like contructive reviews. Those are the ones you learn from, not hateful ones. Why? B/c then everyone just gets into a round of "i hate"s and "i can't stand"s etc until nothing can get done and everything in life seems stupid. This applies on every level of life from personal to family to friends to enemies, even through polotics and, especially, religion (that said, I am very religious and I believe that there is God. I've seen too much to NOT believe at this point, and I know for a !fact! that God answer's prayers if you can't tell yet, what I believe in is Heveanly Father and his son Jesus Christ).

So, let's try to just love one another and do what we can to help each other improve instead of tearing each other down, eh?

Finally, I'd like to say to whoever reads this that I wish you a great day, week, or whatever it is you need, and God bless!

CaptainFlye

So, I just started doing a new set of Naruto stories based on the idea that someone presents an alternative to Naruto being the Jinchuuriki. So far I've only got ideas for how to do it for Hinata ans Sasuke, and the first chapters of both are up. Please, read and review these ideas, send me any ideas you have, and write your stories based on this idea! on that last one, make sure you let me know what you're doing it, because I want to see how YOU do it

5-26-10

Just found a nice HP fic while i was perusing someones favorites. Came across their profile b/c they were reading one of my fics. Anyways, the fic's called "Erasing the Future", by Moxterminator, and Mox had a quote in one of their chapters that i really liked, which is as follows:

"I'm of the firm belief that the future is not set in stone and our actions can change said future," Harry replied "Otherwise, well, one could say that there no such thing as free will, as things are going to happen that way and there's nothing anyone could do."

Nice huh? I like it b/c so many people try to say that b/c God is all knowing that somehow means that we don't, in reality, have any free will. We covered that topic extensively in my philosophy class a couple semesters back. However, I believe that just b/c God knows everything doesn't take away our free will. After all, what would be the point of life if we didn't?

If you want to read this story yourself, here's the links to the profile and the story of Moxterminator's "Erasing the Future"

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2833136/1/Erasing_The_Future (note, this first chapter is just an intro; most chapters will take you around 10 mins to read through)

http://www.fanfiction.net/u/947886/Moxterminator

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Found this on 'beast keep 9's profile and liked it. Note that I do not demand reviews be given in this manner, but I think that it is a good guide for general reviews.

The Ten Commandments of Reviewing - created by FictionReader98 and Zoneshifter D
1) Thou shalt point out the parts you enjoy
2) Thou shalt point out the parts you disliked, if any.
3) Thou shalt point out the parts you utterly hated and explain why
4) Thou shalt write with good grammar!!
5) Thou shalt not give annonymous reviews, for the authors might want to reply to thine criticism!
6) Thou shalt not flame
7) Thou shalt write a four sentence paragraph minimum!
8) Thou shalt use constructive criticism!
9) Thou shalt review as much as possible, not merely once!
10) Thou shalt voice thine expectations.