DISCLAIMER:
Beyblade Characters = Aoki Takao
Jade Tomei = Jade-55
Plot = mysticwater
*Special Surprise Announcement*
To all my readers who have been waiting for this fanfic series to update over the years:
I will be giving the original Untouchable a FULL revise/rewrite in 2021!
The prologue is already updated for re-reading!
(this will be a much more intensive rewrite than the previous 2006 and 2018 revises).
I wrote this series as a child growing into an awkward teenager (I basically grew up along side the Blade Breakers).
I want to preserve the original fanfic as the best version it can be.
Especially so when comparing 'Untouchable' to this sequel. x posted at AO3 too!
Authors Note: I would love to hear your thoughts as the original changes and updates - I will still be updating this fic too, don't worry - Unbreakable isn't finished just yet! We get back to the main couple this round~ and Hilary finishes remembering the passionate night that happened in Chapter 5 ;)
ANx2: I was listening to Problem by Natalia Kills as I wrote this and the Untouchable chapter 1 rewrite.
OWTF
Heated
2 Months Ago
One minute she's getting kissed on the stairs of Lockheart Castle, the next she's swept off her feet and rushed down the platforms and stairways to the main gate- and into the back seat of a waiting cab. Hilary barely remembered the ride home; she vaguely remembers how Kai suddenly held her body up against his chest, taking the opportunity to kiss and suck at her neck. A frenzied (-and embarrassing, if she thought too hard about the cab driver probably noticing-) blur of electrifying kisses and heat. She felt like she was on fire, her entire body tingling in a strange cold fever.
Then as she stumbled back through the door of his apartment, she vaguely wondered if Dranzer had taken over his body again, the heat was intense; but the thought was quickly lost in their mouths, as Kai urgently pushed her towards the bedroom.
Kai quickly discarded his scarf, tossing it across the room with a heavy 'thud' - as he turned to make quick work of her cardigan, pulling it down over her shoulders as he attacked the newly exposed skin of her neck and shoulders with heated kisses.
They hadn't been this passionate... this intimate together - well, not since the evening Kai beat Max at the Third World Championships - when the new couple had gone a mere week without contact.
Once upon a time, the Blade Breakers were still enemies, each vying for the World Champion title against Tyson.
The thought of being without Kai and her boys for the foreseeable future... It suddenly made those once temporary weeks apart feel much more bearable in hindsight.
Another uncomfortable wave of deja vu hit Hilary again as the phoenix prince led her back and gently down onto his bed.
Though their roles may be reversed now - they would be enemies, yet again - Kai seemed to have no intentions of slowing down this time.
Hilary blinked through the fog of passion, looking up at a topless Kai and back down at herself; she blushed deeply at her choice of underwear and bra - plain white undies and a black sports bra of all things.
She had dressed for comfort this morning, not sex appeal. Somehow she blamed Mariah for jinxing her like this.
The Phoenix blader didn't giver her time to process the building embarrassment - his hands were back on her hips, fingers digging slightly into her skin with a tightened grip. She felt his lips on her skin pull into an amused grin before pressing a heated kiss into the sensitive hallowed space where her jaw met her throat.
"Hilary." The raspy bass of his voice rumbled against her throat; she swallowed hard, trying to focus on his words. "If you tell me to stop, I will." It was a promise; she believed him.
Hilary breathed in deeply, feeling the warm press of his right hand slowly trailing up her trembling body; letting his long fingers find the sensitive spot of her rib cage and slip just under the hem of her sports bra - before stilling his movements completely as he shadowed his body over hers.
He was teasing her. "Do you want me to stop?"
She didn't trust herself to speak, so Hilary shook her head fervently instead, arching her body upward into his touch before she realized what she was doing.
Her eyes fluttered as she felt the breath of his deep chuckle against her right ear. "Can you try that again?"
In her flustered state she didn't question it, she raised her hips up against his body once more, vying for more heat, more contact. The hard press of his length against her pelvis had her gasping, gripping his shoulders tightly. Kai let out a low groan against her throat before inhaling sharply through his teeth at the contact, his hands found her hips again and pushed them back down into the bed with more force than before.
"Hilary... I meant use your words." Another breathy laugh, an unfamiliar but oh so pleasing sound to her ears. "If you do that again, I really won't stop."
The brunette felt a flash of panicked embarrassment at her own confusion but quickly burned it out of her mind - Kai started this, and there was no mistaking his arousal - he was teasing her, but he wanted her.
She also knew, Kai wanted all of her this time.
What good would embarrassment do her when her whole body felt like it was on the brink of combustion?
Kai was her partner; he had been her constant support for over six years, well before they crossed the boundaries of their friendship. She trusted him with her life - she owed him her life many times over already - so trusting him with her body felt second nature.
She wanted to just be in this moment with him; here and now, because neither of them knew when they would be together again. The last World Championships nearly broke her - Hilary refused to feel that way again. She refused to let unspoken feelings get in their own way again. It had to be different this time.
So she did it again.
Pushing up against his hands, she lifted her hips once more; this time with purpose and a better angle as she shifted her legs against his knees and raised up to meet him again.
Kai hissed and stifled another throaty moan; his left hand quickly shifting from her hip to the bed to catch his weight as he nearly lost his balance with her aggressive movement.
Heat flared once more; her stomach clenched and tingles of pleasure shot through her. Hilary couldn't contain her own moan at the direct contact of her core against his hardened heat and nearly forgot her words again. "Then don't... Don't stop, Kai."
His right hand was suddenly gripping her jaw, cradling it in his large palm, his thumb and four fingers digging into either side of her cheeks. His silver eyes rapidly searching hers in one final confirmation.
"Kai, plea-" Her whine was silenced by his lips finally crashing back down on hers, his fingers still digging into her jaw, pushing her mouth open to allow him to slip his tongue into her, pressing hard against her own. Hilary gasped into his mouth as his left arm came up around the top of her head to cradle her against him. "Ah! Nnn..."
His hand tangled into her hair, pulling it back slightly as his lips finally moved their attack from her mouth back down under jaw and throat, his right hand dragging down and leading the way for his lips as he moved down her body.
Her breath hitched high her throat as she felt Kai pull her bra down aggressively, his warm mouth finding her right nipple before she had time to process the feeling. Hilary let out a high pitched moan as pleasure coursed through her, her hands tangling into his thick blue locks, tugging headily as his tongue swirled over the sensitive bud. Her heels kicked into the mattress as she bucked up against his mouth as he gave the same attention to the other breast, his left hand cupping and squeezing her right mound in unison with his swirling tongue.
The sensation was dizzying. What was her name again? She could only think of Kai; his name was on repeat on her lips as he worked his way down her body.
"Fuck," Kai hissed against her stomach, pulling her underwear down in one swift movement. "Hilary..."
Right, that was it.
Hilary was too hot; she took Kai's initiative and quickly pulled her bra up over her head and threw it across the room; in an instant her hands were finding the hem of Kai's long black boxers, tugging them down impatiently till they were around his ankles before he could stop her.
Kai was quick on the uptake, he immediately grabbed both her legs and yanked her down the bed and up over his thighs to rest her against his hips, his hard erection pushing flat against her core as he pulled her into an upright straddling position on his lap, moving back against the headboard and pulling her close.
She couldn't help but moan and wiggle against the thick heat between them, feeling it press against her clit in wonderous pleasure. Kai cursed again and crushed her into another bruising kiss before she could move too much.
"Slow down, World Champion." Kai warned against her lips with a slight smirk and a breathy chuckle.
But Hilary was done waiting. She was wound so tight she was ready to snap into flames hotter than her Emberfae's and Dranzer's combined.
"Kai." She gave him one final warning as her small right hand wrapped around his thick shaft in absolute intent; Kai stilled completely in her hold, eyes wide as she lifted her hips in the same motion and tilted him towards her entrance. "Please, keep up."
Kai's hands found her hips in an instant as he stared up at her in awe.
This woman was a miracle.
Then she was sliding down on to him and the thought lost all meaning.
She was so damn tight - she took her time to adjust but not once did she pull back or away, she kept going until he was fully sheathed - he wanted to explode right then. He had wanted to take his time with her for their first time together, he wanted her to feel good but this girl clearly had other things on her mind - and he wasn't complaining.
It took everything in him not to move and pound into her until he was spent, but she was so gorgeous as she fought to catch her breath; a few tears spilled over her flushed cheeks - he quickly kissed them away, kissing her everywhere he could.
"You are so gorgeous, Hilary... You're perfect... I love you so much." He rambled into her hair, her throat, her breasts.
Hilary hummed in the haze, rocking her hips against him. "I love you more." She gasped back breathlessly. "Please, I want you."
"I promise you, I'm yours." Kai growled back, cupping her ass and lifting her slightly to he could lean her back onto the bed, her legs wrapped around his waist, her ankles locking together as he came down on top of her, pushing in deeper.
For the first time since she left the Blade Breakers, Hilary felt within his reach again. Kai could feel all of her - the intangible distance he felt between them finally dissolved in her heated moans - they melted together as he pushed into her again and again.
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As the fog cleared the pulsing of Hilary's walls began to slow and relax around his softening length. Kai pressed a warm kiss against the center of her shoulder blades, just below the back of her neck - Hilary groaned loudly as he slipped out from her, feeling the wet slick pool between them.
They both dozed off to sleep within moments as the high crashed down on their exhausted bodies - not waking until several hours later. Nearly five am according to Kai's cellphone when he checked it upon waking.
"Mm... That was incredible, Kai." Came the sleepy mumble against his arm. The light from the LCD screen must have woken her.
"Stay longer and I'll make it worth your while." Kai promised, hoping to make her stay in his bed and never leave. "Someone rushed me to the finish."
"Give a girl a breather... you're bigger than I thought it would be." Hilary blushed, turning over and pressing her face into his chest, kissing it gently.
Kai looked down at her, suddenly worried. "Did I hurt you?" Was he too rough?
She gave him the sweetest sleepy smile, kissing him fully on his lips this time - slow, languid as her tongue pressed against his. "Only a little. It was worth it, I promise." She leaned back, fingering one of his shark-finned tattoos on his left cheek. "I do have to leave in a couple hours though... would you be mad if I opted for a raincheck this time?"
Disconnected, the feeling of distance had returned. She had to go back to them.
Kai just held her tighter and bit his tongue. He could only press a kiss to her hair in answer as he let her drift back to sleep for the extra few hours before their time together ended.
Kai didn't sleep.
Present Day
Kai caught his Dranzer as he recalled his blade back from the battle as he eyed Hilary's own suspiciously still strong-spinning beyblade as it circled at her feet, outside the beydish.
"You let me win." Kai stated as he took in a steadying breath; it wasn't a question in his mind. His girlfriend was holding back.
"Did I?" Hilary shot him a playful grin in retort, before recalling her own Emberfae back into her fingerless gloved hand.
"You could have easily landed her back in." Kai pointed back at the dish, "I know I taught you the basics before you joined the girls." Kai had pushed himself slightly during this rare training session with his girlfriend, but she didn't appear to even have broken a sweat. It was slightly unnerving.
She sauntered her way up to him, her chest pressing into his. "You would know about the basics, wouldn't you?" This girl was toying with him. It was maddening. His hands instinctively found her hips to steady her flush against him. "Anything else you notice?"
This girl was still a problem.
"You have more stamina." Kai said evenly; the double meaning wasn't lost on her. Her hardened body and excess cardio spilled into the bedroom from the beydish over the long months she had been away.
"Mmhm~" She lifted on her tiptoes to press a light kiss to his lips, "What else?"
"You're having too much fun without me." Kai growled, leaning down and nipping back on her lower lip - fighting the urge to pout. He didn't like that she was holding back things she learned without him.
Hilary laughed at him, seeing through the veil. "Trust me, Kai. Training for a World Championship is never fun, regardless of who is teaching me." She pocketed her Emberfae blade before reaching up to lazily wrap her arms around the back of his neck, kissing the side of his mouth affectionately with a soft knowing smile. "I miss you too."
"Good." Hilary's smile suddenly melted into a heavy moan as Kai gripped the back of her head with his right hand, fingers tangled in her hair as he roughly tilted her head back - something he quickly learned she always responded to with heated noises. He dragged his lips over hers once before he locked his eyes with hers again. "I'd rather teach you something fun anyway."
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AN: hope you enjoyed this shorter albeit steamy chapter~ you can find the uncut/steamier/more Explicit version of both scenes x-posted on AO3 (now up!). This chapter changed this fic to rating M - but didn't want to push too far on this site XD
Endcap Note: 2021 has not been kind to me...
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*Personal Trigger Warning / death*
My maternal grandmother passed away Feb 19th to cancer. I was closest to her of all my grandparents; she was a strong woman, and she was stubborn as hell (thats where I get it from), who gave the best cuddles - losing her was hard but we had time (a few months) to prep or it-
But then 6 days later on Feb 25th my bengal cat of 14 years, Kleo, passed away very suddenly to a heart attack and though I tried CPR on her for over 20mins (sometimes it feels longer, or not long enough), nothing could be done to save her. She was my baby, my world and I was grateful for every day I had her even when she was driving me crazy, I loved her so deeply and so infinitely. She loved to talk, yell and cuddle - and life without her became deafeningly silent. That entire week was very traumatizing for everyone in this house and the compounded grief and vivid flashbacks of the day still breaks me every day.
Then just 4 months later, and quite suddenly in the span of 3 days- on July 5th my partners father passed away due to heart complications and a horrible case of pneumonia - that whole month was a blur as I helped with the open casket funeral and being his support during his time of grief while I was still fresh on the trail of my own grief journey. This entire year has dragged us both emotionally and financially - not to mention COVID surges here in Canada making meeting with family and loved ones, when we need them most, increasingly difficult.
Finding ways to stay creative is a struggle but I owe it to myself to keep pushing forward.
Thank you to all my readers who have reviewed and left kind words of hope and care for my grandma, I appreciate all of you and your continued support and patience. Remember to tell people you care about how much you love them because you never know when that will be your last moment with them.
Sending all my readers all the love and positive manifestations in this Age of Aquarius.
* End T/W *
