Hi everyone, sorry for posting something that's not a new chapter, I'll remove this as soon as the next chapter is ready. So, this will only be a short authors note because I want to mention something important.
I apologize for any inconvenience this might invoke, but for my own sake I had to do it.
As you probably know I've been incredibly busy lately, and chapter 10, part one and two, was written in a haste. Now that I read it afterwards, it feels so wrong, it doesn't feel like me, or something that I've written. It was too rushed and without much feeling. At least that's how it feels to me…
So, I went back, corrected/added/rewrote/removed text and sorted the chapters out. Especially part two in which most changes has occurred. Almost the whole "chapter" is rewritten, and I'm much more pleased now. I hope this change won't irk anyone; I hope that you'll appreciate the change actually.
This have also resulted in a much heftier chapter. Part two was about 2000 words, now it's a whopping 3600, so, A LOT has changed…
Hope you will take a look and tell me your thoughts.
Lots of hugs, Alpha…