Daniel hill was an ordinary man that died because of god and gets 2 wish. and he goes to the Harry Potter universe to live a good life. He has a great LUCK with RANDOM.
This is my first time writing fanfic so if I write something wrong forgive me and I always welcome advice and suggestions please leave a comment on what the next chapter be like. I'm a newbie this is just an introduction I just leave on what you think first
In the void of nothingness there seem to be a room with all white wall all around and there seem to be two entities sit in front of each other and one appears to be a middle-aged man name Daniel hill and the other is an entity with the void body.
"you are here because in the middle of my argument with my friends, cause you to die when I accidentally throw a lightning bolt at you it shock you to death." The entity
'what the hell' Daniel
"No, this is not hell. This is my room and you have died" joked The entity
Daniel just looks at it with a blank look.
"Sorry, I can't help it," the entity said
"And did you just read my mind," Daniel asked
"Yes, I did. You appear to be calm about the fact that you are dead." The entity
"well, it just that this seem like a dream and If so, it already has been done. So what now?" Daniel who had read a lot of novels and fanfic so he knows what to do.
"To you that is. now I can't put you back cause your body had turned to ash already, your soul got temped with the lightning so it was too strong to go back. I'll decide to let you go to the other world that you like to read and I know that you read lots of things. So you have 2 tickets for the wheel of fortune, go spin it behind you" The entity said and then there appear a roulette out of know where.
Daniel walks to it and he sees no name on the roulette so he asks "why is there nothing on it?"
"You just have to spin it and it will show you, what you get is what you get." The entity
"Okay, here we go then, hope that I get lucky and get something good out of this." Daniel go spin it and it goes around two times before it stops, it on Purple and Dark blue. Purple reveal it to be [Random] and Dark blue reveal it to be [Luck].
(This ability is not me that make it. I use a wheel spin and it got that so I use it)
The entity whistle and said, "Wow, you got luck but I'll have to nerf it so it will not be too broken."
Daniel was too confused about the reveal then there was a screen pop up. There are only two things there
[Random: Ability: active Rank SS
-An ability to get Random Thing every time the user uses it. It can get anything Randomly from anywhere to ability, item and evens status.
[Luck: Ability: passive Rank: EXX
-An passive ability that grants the user great luck That depends on its Rank.
-Rank SS: user has great luck with Thing
-Rank SSS: user has excellent luck that helps the user with everything.
-Rank Ex: user has Super luck that the user doesn't know if it a coincidence or thing comes when need.
-Rank EXX: too much ()
Daniel just stand there too stunned too dazed after minutes did he come back and now he understood what the entity say about nerfing it. He calms down when he knows he not gonna be like those protagonists that got trouble everywhere and he is happy that he got luck. He gets lucky every time and gets in no trouble.
"Can you tell me the nerf version of it please?" Daniel asked
"Sure, [Random] I was gonna nerf to three times per day but now that your luck I'm gonna nerf to one per day. [Luck] to Rank SSS, for now, that is……….Good with that?" The entity
"Sure I can deal with [Luck] but can you up [Random] please?" Daniel
"Nope, it already too much for you to have [Random] and [Luck] at the same time. NOW to last wish for the location that you wanna go" The entity
"Fine, I go to…….The Harry Potter Univers." Daniel chose it because it is the only one he remembers right now.
"Sure, and the timeline and status or custom one?" The entity asked in amused.
"Umm….It hard decision, I'll take the same year as Harry potter and a custom one. I take noble family name Impar(mean: Odd I think) and the entire family got destroyed cause Voldemort attacked the family cause the family was a threat to his plan for their Random Odd and Strong Attacked. I'm the only survivor because they hide me in an orphan."Daniel said
"ok, that can be done anything else?" The entity
"No, I think that all I guess" Daniel
"Okay, then this is goodbye then Daniel "
"Goodbye, Sir. And Thank you for this."
"Don't be it my fault that you die, don't worry and have a good life there." The entity swipe his hand then Daniel was gone. The entity then said, " Give me good entertainment Daniel Impar." Then it gone only the black void was left
So what do you think? it good right this is my first time writing fanfic so please help and give tips or advice on what I should do next chapter and I read a lot of novel fanfic but I only remember a few that all.
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