Redo
This is the second story that will refresh my mind and for your enjoyment.
Warning: Naruto is owned by Kishimoto and there might be cussing.
Chapter One
Two figures are fighting to show which Ideology was the best, but unknown to the two a certain pink and redhead were watching the fight.
In the fight the two were throwing purposeful punch and kicks at each other for many hours without rest, that was until the one with black hair noticed the redhead.
Smirking he dodged a strike from his blonde opponent and charged at the redhead with an activated Jutsu known as Chidorie, seeing the black-haired opponents target his eyes became wide.
"KARIN RUN!!!" shouted the blonde. Seeing the black-haired man coming at her the blonde made a quick hand sign.
When the Onyx haired man was about to peirce Karin's chest she was replaced with the blonde.
Coughing out blood he grabbed the man tightly with his arm still through his chest and looked at the redhead with a sad smile, "I'm sorry Karin but it seems I won't be able to help raise our kid".
Said girl had streams of tears coming out of her eyes and shouted "NARUTO!!!", "I love you" he said for one last time.
Turning to the person who peirced his chest he frowned, "it looks like we will still be fighting in our next lives Sasuke, but I won't let you" he finished with a smirk that confused him.
knowing Indra would only reincarnate in Uchiha's he would have to kill the last one, 'it seems I won't be able to say good bye to Kurama' he thought remembering that he was sealed into a meteor.
He was surprised that he somehow was still alive but didn't question it, making a one handed seal that he made off the exploding shadow clone jutsu his life flashed right before his eye's.
He remembered getting kicked out of the orphanage, meeting the third Hokage, him becoming a ninja, the death of the third Hokage and meeting the toad sage Jiraiya, the desertion of Sasuke, the death of the toad sage then becoming a sage, meeting Karin then falling in love with her, finding out he was going to be a father, and finally die to the man he thought as a brother.
Finishing remembering his life he finished his hand sign, with a burst of chakra the two exploded.
With Karin who was watching was now crying because of the death of her lover and the death of her unborn childs father.
*Redo*
Darkness was what all he could see, he also could not feel or sense anyone. He did not know how long he was there until he could finally feel something, it was hard like a tree.
Feeling like he could move he opened his eyes, the brightness caused him to close his eyes again in pain but then slowly opened his eyes.
Looking around he saw that he was in the forest of death, he then quickly got up and jumped on his feet but to only fall flat on his face.
Sighing he got up, looking around he saw that he was next to Sasuke. He backed up in shock after seeing that it was him when he was younger, slapping himself he looked at the puddle next to him to see he was his younger self but with no whisker marks.
He was about to scream in panic until he felt a familiar chakra signature nearby, backing up slowly he quietly left.
Running as fast as he could to the signature he started sensing it was running from something, in worry he chased after it.
After sometime of running and getting used to his body quickly took his jacket off because of the heat, finding the person he was following he was shocked.
In front of him he saw a younger Karin getting chased by a two story apartment/flat bear.
Seeing the love of his life getting corner by the bear he became pissed, creating a ball of chakra with some trouble in his right hand he jumped into the sky.
Crashing down he aimed the Jutsu at the bears head while shouting on the top of his lungs "RASENGAN!!!".
The redhead who heard the shout saw it all happen and could only have gasped at how strong he was.
Getting off the bear he turned to her and smiled, "Hi I'm Naruto Uzumaki!!! are you okay?" he finished with the most gentle smile he could give.
Seeing the smile she blushed a little, "y-yes I'm f-fine an-and my n-name is K-Karin U-Uzumaki" she said with a stutter.
Knowing this he smiled brightly thinking I will get you to fall in love with me again, "you have pretty red hair Karin" he said with his smile which made her steam.
He shook his head trying to get back at attention, "do you know where your team is?" he asked nicely.
She shook her head, "they're dead so don't bother but since you saved me and I'm out of the exams you can have my scroll" she said as she handed him the scroll. (I forgot what scroll they had and needed so please go with it)
Seeing the scroll he needed he nodded but then thought quickly of a way for her to stay in the village, "hey question? if your an Uzumaki why hasn't your family gone to the hidden leaf for protection?" he asked with fake curiosity knowing the answer.
"my family didn't really know where to go so they ended up in the village hidden in the grass" she said with a hint of sadness that he caught.
He started scheming a plan since Jiraiya forced him to get smart when he was training him, "are you registered as a shinobi of the village?" he asked coming up with a plan.
She just shook her head,"no they say outsiders shouldn't be ninjas in their village" she finished with a raised eyebrow.
He thought for a second until he decided to do as planned, "alright since that is how it is I'm going to ask a favor to let you in the village" he said confidently.
She blinked, "how are you going to do that?" she asked a little hesitant. He just smirked, "trust me it will work" he said with the gentle smile.
Karin just blushed but nodded, seeing her comply he grabbed her hand and took off. After many minutes of running the two stumbled upon Sasuke breaking someones arms, wincing he got closer with her hiding behind him.
Being cautious he took out a Kunai, "Sasuke? are you alright?" he asked with the greatest caution.
Said boy looked at Naruto with narrowed eyes, "Who are you?" he asked trying to keep his mind straight.
Naruto played dumb, "what are you talking about Sasuke? it's me Naruto your teammate and if your going to ask about the password I'm going to have to tell you I forgot it" he said annoyed.
Nodding he looked closer and saw something red behind him, "whose that Dobe?" he asked curiously.
The blonde blinked but gave a goofy smile, "oh the cute girl is Karin-chan, I saved her from a bear so she gave me her scroll which we needed after she told me her teammates were killed by the same bear" he said while bringing the blushing girl in front of him.
Everyone who knew Naruto blinked, 'he actually does find other girls besides Sakura attractive' they all thought shocked. (I didn't mention them but it is the same as the anime).
Sasuke shook his head and looked at Naruto, "okay but why is she here?" he asked getting annoyed for holding the sound ninja hostage as they spoke.
He shrugged, "Jiji owes me a favour so I'm going to use it when we see him later" he said cryptically.
Later After The Primaries.
Walking away from Kakashi's side Naruto went towards the Hokage with Karin, seeing the blonde come his way he smiled but then saw the redhead and could only think 'like father like son' but became wide eyed when he saw that he didn't have any whiskers.
The Hokage calmed down and smiled grandmotherly, "oh who is this Naruto?" he asked curiously.
In the inside the girl was freaking out since Naruto didn't tell her about the Hokage.
Bringing her forward he smiled, "this is Karin Uzumaki" he said with the same smile. The Hokage sweated slightly knowing he kept his Uzumaki heritage from him, "oh? and why have you come here?" he asked hoping it wasn't what he thought.
"I was hoping you could do me a favour" said the blonde which made the older man raise an eyebrow.
"what is it?" he asked very curiously with some worry that no one noticed. seeing he caught the bait he smirked in his mind, "I was hoping to could allow Karin live and work in the village for the secret of getting rid of paper work" he said with a little serious look.
The Hokage became wide eyed, "y-you k-know t-the s-secret to g-get r-rid of p-paper w-work? no there must be a catch" he said uncertain.
Naruto nodded confirming that there was more, "yes you see she is a ninja of the village hidden in the grass and wants out" he said a serious.
The old man furrowed his eyebrows, "I'm sorry but that would cause problems for our village since they are a trade partner to us" he said a little disappointed since he couldn't get the secret.
Naruto smirked, "what about if she wasn't a registered one since they don't like outsiders?" he asked indecently.
The Hokage eyes got big and gave the biggest smile ever, "yes that will work because we can prove she doesn't for that village" he said with stars in his eyes.
'Hook and sinker' thought the blonde, "good now do we have a deal?" asked the Uzumaki to the instantly nodding Hokage.
Quickly shaking his hand in agreement the old man looked at him, "now how can I defeat it?" he asked seriously which made the boy smirk in the inside.
Taking a breath he looked him into the eyes, "two words; shadow clones" he said with a mischievous smile at the end.
The third Hokage blinked and thought for a second, after sometime he smacked himself in the face.
"alright you have my promise that she will be able to live and work in the village but she will have Anbu watching her until other wise" said the Hokage seriously which made Karin nod.
He then turned to the blonde, "Naruto when did you learn to plan like this?" asked the curious and serious Hokage.
Naruto just have him a goofy smile, "a ninja never gives away his secrets Jiji" he said with the same goofy smile.
Before he could ask more the two left to the blondes home, the Hokage who was watching only thought 'has he hid his intelligence the whole time? I'm going to have an Anbu watch him'.
At Naruto's house.
Karin and Naruto were right about to open the door when it opened, when it opened it showed ten clones in front of them.
One of the clones stepped forward, "we finished cleaning and set up the guest bedroom for Karin Boss!" he said with excitement.
The original nodded which signaled the clones to dispel, "you can stay with me until you can get a house or you can just stay and be my roommate pretty much" he said with a smile which made her blush since he gave her permission to stay with him for as long as she wanted.
Quickly nodding she went towards her new room to sleep, walking to his room Naruto layed down. 'okay this is kind of weird... man I'm back in the past... well I guess I'll have to redo my life and change a few things' he finished with a smile and went to sleep.
End of Chapter One
My hands are cramped again... :(
The reason he doesn't have whiskers was because he died in the future and past, since his body in the past died the Kyubbi got out when he got into it so you already know in three years trouble is going to brew.How was this story? was it good? please let me know if I should continue it.
