Chapter 1 here come the Hero (rewritten)

I have decided to rewrite the entire story not just this one but most because it doesn't make sense. As well as not having enough good concepts it was raw, amateurs, and sloppy both in writing and in concept wise. I've change season 3 to current seasons of Rwby, so enjoy the show.

In the single swing of his red blade, Adam Taurus the leader of his fraction of the White Fangs slices the 17-year-old Yang Xiao Long's right arm as he slices through the aura of the young girl her partner and friend Blake Belladonna shouted out in horror of her Friend's dismembered of her right arm.

The blood of her best friend's wounds is pouring out. As Yang right arm have been cut off. As Adam Taurus was marching in the burning cafeteria of Beacon academy. Blake was begging Yang to wake up and Adam shook his head in disappointment how could she defend the human after what they did to them, to their kind the Faunus, and to him. As he draws his blade then a flash blinded him and Blake. Then it fades leaving only a boy around Ruby's age he rubs his head as it was hurting him. He saw the two ladies In Distress.

oh my God, is she ok? he ran to the young ladies and Blake was shock to see a boy who came out of nowhere and coming to their aid "Who- who are you, and where did you come?" said Blake but them she realized the situation "look, you need to get out of here before" then Blake look at Adam who was closely behind him, in a split second Blake saw what Adam was about to do shout "LOOK OUT" and push the boy away as Adam stabbed the red bladed katana wilt deeply into the cat Faunus underneath her left arm straight the ribs.

Billy panic turn and saw in horrors as Blake double down in pain while Adam just shake his head in disgust "really Blake, you gave up your life for a human, oh why do you do this to me hurting me. Now I have hurt you too." Adam said callously as he kicks Blake on the stomach, and she groaned in pain. Billy's fear turns to anger as he got himself standing up with determination. "Hey, leave them alone." Adam simply turned face him unimpressed.

"I'm not going to let you hurt them." (Marvelous by Death Battle) with him shouting "SHAZAM" and a blue and white lightning bolt hit the boy knocking the killer away and Blake were covering eyes.

Seconds later their a man is red with a blue and white lightning bolt on his chest (his appearance base on thumbnail at your left, Shazam) and a white cape with a hood with blue and white electricity around him. The three combatants were shocked. "What are you." The man smile, "just some guy who going to teach you some manners,." he then using hyper light-speed and punch Adam so hard he pukes blood and mucus as the punch send him flying to the wall creating a Crater in that wall it raptured the Faunus aura so much it dissipated. The boy turns adult superhero move with the same unthinkable speed. He then grabbed the back of his neck holding him.

Then Adam tries to slash Billy at the neck, only to be stopped by him as in Nano-second with the speed of Mercury. Manage to grab the right wrist of his sword arm and with the strength of Hercules he painfully twisted and broke his entire arm as Adam screamed so much he dropped the sword then hero grabbed the sword by the blades without cutting himself with his right hand and again with his inhuman strength he Squeeze the blade instead of it cutting himself he break the blade in two pieces. He head-butts the leader of the white fangs. That render him unconscious.

The superhero went the two ladies he uses his magical nature as lightning surges from his right hand and heal Yang's right arm numb though it didn't regenerate her entries arms. "how did you do turn to this? And how did heal her arm" "well for your second question 'magic' in this form and how to turn into him I say Shazam, speaking of 'SHAZAM'." then the bolt of lightning struck Him again and he turn back to Billy Batson "it's my superhero name, it's how I turn into that guy also named is Billy Batson." (End of music)

As the three sees Ruby and Weiss with the other students "Ruby," said Blake. Both girls and the two students Nora and Ren look in horrors see Yang, missing arm with medical wraps on it. Then the four came to the trio. "Yang, what happen". "She attacks by Adam he cut her arm while she was trying to defend me" said Blake, the boy Billy said, "I stopped him and injury him," Weiss was questioning this. "Wait, who are you", Billy tried minimized the confusion at least now.

"My name is Billy Batson I here to help." "But you've not a huntsmen and you don't have a weapon." Then the Scroll Weiss's scroll ring it was Jaune arc "Jaune what wrong", "Pyrrha is in trouble she is going on top to Ozpin's office. To confront the woman who started this whole attack" "Whoa, whoa, what do you mean by that." Jaune however said, "JUST SAVED HER." Then he hangs up Weiss, was worried.

"Jaune said that Pyrrha is in trouble she on top in Ozpin office." "Then let get there and help her out." Said Ruby "I'll use my glyphs to get you there." But Billy, objected. "Waited I should be the one to get you there's I turn to this guy to fly you up there's" "and how are you going to get there," said Weiss. With a smile he said, "with a word" "what word" said Weiss, he shouts "SHAZAM". With that a cloud and blue and white lightning bolt. It's struck him everyone cover their eyes, then a man with a lightning bolt on his chest and a white cape with his hood up and has blue and white lightning surges around him. Everyone stopped cover their eyes Weiss was shocked to see what in from of her "what just happen" but Billy knew there to explains time for this and ran toward Ruby, "I need you to trust me, I'm going to get you up there." He gave Ruby his hand, she was unsure what to say but time is short. "Um, ok" she gave her hand and he put her closed to this chest and he wrap his arm around her waist, and he fly fast.

Meanwhile on top of the tower

In the ruins of Ozpin office Cinder Falls had won. She successfully stole the power of the Fall Maiden, killed Ozpin and about to kill this student, the invincible girl herself Pyrrha Nikos. She did fight a decent battle, but she lost in the end, and both the objectives are complete. Cinder lecture about power Pyrrha then said as Cinder is about to shoot her arrow into the girl's heart up closed "do you believe in destiny" Cinder reply "yes" then before the arrow was fired a red and yellow blur speed pass her and in seconds she was gone, and the arrow didn't hit her only the carpet floor. She was shocked and was looking for her target only to find a lightning bolt hit her on the face and at her left eye. She cried out in pain, after a couple of minutes she open her right one and saw Ruby Rose, Pyrrha Nikos, and a man with a red suit a white cape and a blue and white lightning bolt insignia on his chest as well as blue and white lightning coursing around him.

He will pay for that, then Shazam look at her and with a smug on his face "hey lady nice look." This struck a nerve. The man looks back at the girls go I'll deal with this bitch" he turns to the woman who was pissed. "You've not going to harm them, Lady." He then speeds forward and upper cut her she lay flat on her back and Billy was smiling she took advantage of this shoot arrow stone of dust at him only for him caught it and said "nice try however she use the maiden powers and knock him back with wind

He said this "Nice breeze lady are you going to try a little hard then this" in a mocking tone. Cinder then shoots a bolt of lightning. Only for the hero to reach his hand and absorbed the bolt, but that that was the calculated error as Cinder went behind him with a created dust knife and tried to stab him but the knifed broke in half when it tries to penetrate the hero skin. She was shocked of this that when Shazam turn and pushed her with his right hand away with enough force to slam her against a remnant of a wall Cinder's aura dissipated when she hitted the wall she was more furious as possibly she needs to think of something.

Then It's hit her, as she saw the Grimm Dragon that was appearing behind the two huntresses in training Ruby Rose and Pyrrha Nikos and was attracted to Cinder's negative emotions. The Dragon roared and Ruby Rose turn and tackle the Pyrrha as the dragon chump down the floor where they were. This was due to the fact that Pyrrha was still badly wounded with fighting Cinder.

As Pyrrha double down to the fetus position because of her stomach being impaled by the arrows fired by Cinder earlier she was holding the blood in her stomach. Ruby looks at her with concern. Then the dragon attack again only for Shazam to zoom up with super speed and then uppercut the beast with the strength of Hercules this was a typically error as Cinder used this to fire another sets of arrow at the hero, but the arrows didn't pierce the skins she then look at the large gears that was destroyed during her battle Nikos gave the devious woman a idea using her maiden power of wind as she uses the winds to cause the item to fly at great speed along with different element attack, she mixes in to get him will she move him in line to get blasted back to the Grimm dragon outside waiting for it new meal to come.

Or that what she thinks she is doing but, she going to get the Grim dragon clobbered by Shazam then made choking noise. Then 'BOOM' the dragon was Electrocuted, and the superhero smash his way out of its teeth. "Ew oh, God that stinks" said Shazam cover in saliva then spin in a tornado and to get the saliva off.

After that the dragon roar out of anger for some hurting it like that and fly state at him to catch him but Billy flew up over the dragon and punch on it back force it down while it was grounded he grabs it's wings and pull them off with a big ripped sound Grimm real let out a very loud roar after that that shatter all the window in vale that Billy flew to the front to give it another punch the Grimm putting it out of its misery after that he flow to the shell shock Cinder while powering -up a big punch with about 100,000,000 volt of electricity in it while coming straight at her mind was so out of order after seeing the Dragon get defeated like that she did not know what to do until the punch hit in the face shocking her with all that lightning one punch she let out one big blood chilling scream as she falls down and landed on a tree

The superhero was able to sigh a relief "whoa, that, how we do it" he said the girls were shocked to see what they witnessed.

Well, that was only me redoing my entire chapter I'm going to redo the entire story chapters by chapters at once. Hopefully to see some improvement.