Finding the light! (Currently being rewritten, come back later Thanks

by Pikachu the critic

Melascula, after being brutally attacked by estarossa, now struggles to find the true way but with help from surprising new friends, she may find the light. A basic “what if?” story

4. Rewriting update

Hi guys. Been a little while. You probably noticed I rewrote some chapters so far.

My reasons:

1) I wanted to give Melascula more of a reason to quit the commandments and to actually make it a what if with estarossa actually trying to kill her.

2) I wanted Melascula breaking down and crying to be a bigger deal as you wouldn't see her emotional in the anime.

3) I had an idea to do with the commandments that will be touched upon in later chapters.

4) The writing could've been better.

5) Wanted Melascula leaving to show how angry she was to listen and Zeldris losing his temper a bit and lashing at her a bit harsher.

I will continue to rewrite some of the chapters ( or just make smaller changes) to make it better for you fans. Thank you and Merry Christmas!