Author's note: so this is a redux I'm doing for one of my previous fanfics from wattpad.
Hope you enjoy!
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The year is 2020, the world has been at war with two strange alien races: the Sirens, and the Abyssals. The Sirens first appeared in 2012 and almost immediately humanity was pushed out of the oceans. Modern technology appeared futile against highly technically advanced Sirens. Though a breakthrough for a weapon to fight against them appeared in 2016: the ship girls. It isn't fully clear how ship girls were created, though there is a rumor that the Sakura Empire made the first ship girl, though it isn't clear if this is true or not, as such it is still a rumor and not fact. Ship girls were found to be the embodiment of warships dating as far back as the 1870s and as far forward as the 1950s.
Experiments have shown that when their ships are refitted with modern technology that they can no longer control their ships like they normally would, and that they can't summon their riggings. As such it is now forbidden for them to be equipped with modern technology that is beyond the 1950s, as this appears to be the barrier for them.
Though almost as a reaction to the creation of ship girls, a new foe showed themselves. The Abyssals first showed themselves in 2017 by attacking vital ports all along the Eagle Union and the Sakura Empire.. their origin, like the Sirens, is unknown to humanity, though there are many theories. One of the biggest, is that the Abyssals are sunken ship girls that turned evil and now actively seek the destruction of humanity.
This is where we join the story
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450 kilometers Southeast of the Mariana Islands
A field of debris could be seen and clouds of dirty smoke rose up into the air. A battle had once raged there, but now it was long over. Ship girls that couldn't be saved were left to sink into the abyss, and could be seen. Several ships appeared to be fighting the un-winnable battle of sinking. Though now they were sunk faster by Abyssals who were there to recover their wrecks for their own purposes.
A carrier princess was sitting atop her riggings, surveying the wreckage as destroyers launched torpedoes into the wrecks that still had ship girls on them. Though now she was approached from behind by a Ri-class.
The Ri-class then spoke "Sunken, orders from Hime, we're supposed to pull out immediately and only return with the ship girls we have currently"
The princess turned around to look at the Ri-class, and squinted a bit at her "and why do we have to? There are still ship girls we haven't salvaged from their ships or the abyss" Sunken said. She was an Abyssal with long white hair, red eyes, and the classic white as snow skin that all Abyssals have. She wore a black sundress, along with black metal boots that reached up to her thighs.
"She knows that, but currently above The Trench, and movement has been detected of something coming out of it. Hime wants us to be out of here before whatever it is arrives" the Ri-class responded.
"Dang it… fine we'll have to leave those wreckages to those traitors" she said begrudgingly. Now she spoke over radio to the rest of the fleet {attention all ships, movement from the trench below had been detected. All ships are to pull back to the base immediately, only bring what ship girls you already have}
The other abyssals started to comply and started off back towards their base. The Sunken hung around a bit longer as she watched one particular ship sinking.
She muttered to herself "why did I feel like I knew you deeply? Even though I don't remember you?"
She continued to watch as the ship sank until one part of it slipped beneath the waves. That part she knew well, she had seen it on many other ship girls. The last thing she saw was the Imperial Seal of Japan.
She sighed and turned back as well to her base. Then she muttered to herself again "Well… I guess we may meet again. Whether it's by those traitors or by the humans.
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Location 9 and a half kilometers above Challenger Deep
A ship girl could be seen sinking deeper and deeper, the girl was the IJN Kaga. Her white tails and ears dirtied from battle. She was barely conscious as she sank farther. She reached a hand out towards the faint light from of the surface and thought to herself *please don't let it end like this. Please… Sister Akagi, anyone… please help me*
Though now her body was wrapped around by black looking tentacles, she was so close to unconsciousness that she couldn't react to them. But now she could feel as they dragged her down into the depths with no way to stop it.
She thought to herself once more *please anyone… help me" then she faded into unconsciousness.
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Author's note
Considering how I write now, this is a really short chapter.
I hope that you all like the changes that I've implemented in this redux.
Well see you in the next chapter.