For those who read 177013 knows what the character Saki Yoshida lived through a hell. I had decided to write a revenge fic for her. I already finished but it was my first fic so I decided to do a mini-remake.
This fic also took a lot of inspiration from some Korean films (not romance, for God's sake. But Korean Thrillers) films like:
The Vengeance Trilogy of Park Chan-wook (Sympathy for Mr. Vengeance (2002), Oldboy (2003) and Lady Vengeance(2005).)
The Chaser (2008) from Na Hong jin (One of my favorites.)
Yellow Sea (2010) from Na Hong-jin.
A Bittersweet Life (2005) from Kim Jee-woo.
I Saw The Devil (2010) from Kim Jee-woo
Bedevilled (2010) from Jang Cheol-soo
It was these films that inspired me to create this remake, a little bit more violent and maybe with a bittersweet ending, maybe.
And of course, there may be something strange or wrong written, translating sucks because you have ways of speaking in one language, but you don't know in the other.
"… Alright, let's meet another day here, bye ! " Yui smiled, and nodded when she said goodbye to her friend.
It had been a long time since she had met Hana, who had even married. Of course, Hana invited her to her wedding, but Yui was having family problems and was unable to attend. Two days ago, Hana contacted Yui. She needed to talk because she suspected that her husband was cheating on her with another. Yui met with Hana at a diner, the first time that both have seen each other in two years.
Sometimes it was good to meet old friends.
Yui left the small building and felt the light drops of rain fall on her skin, the weather was gray and it was a little cold. Yui had dressed for the cold, in a white cotton coat, and a simple knee-length skirt. Yui opened her umbrella and walked down the street.
The cars passed with minimum speed because of the puddles accumulated in the streets and there were few people in the rain with they umbrella without being inside a vehicle.
Yui shivered a little because of the cold weather. And she walks quickened towards a path under a bridge. Not noticing a female figure following her with an umbrella in her right hand and her left hand in her coat pocket.
Yui went down the stairs and noticed that the rain was thickening. The drops fell with a little more force, Yui quickly ran until she reached under the Bridge.
"Hey ... You have fire ?" Yui heard a female voice that startled her, when he turned to face her, a crowbar hit her in the face.
Yui, felt the strong pain where the crowbar hit her, her body fell on the cold and slightly wet ground.
"You didn't think you were going to make it after that, did you?" The female voice asked, approaching Yui slowly.
Yui had her hand where it was hit, confused she looked at her attacker ..
She was a woman who looked to be in her early twenties, with short black hair, blue eyes, the bottom of her face was covered with a white surgical mask.
She wore a black hooded sweatshirt, jeans, black sneakers and in her right hand was the crowbar that hit Yui's face.
"You lived well until now, but I haven't forgotten" Her attacker hit Yui's face with a kick that made her fall headfirst to the floor and her nose bleeding. The attacker hit Yui in the back with the crowbar that made her cry out in pain. Yui tried to crawl but took another hit on the back.
"Please stop, I'm beg you!" Yui cried out in despair as she tried to drag herself away from her attacker, who was just walking towards her.
"Mercy is something you will not receive from me, be sure of it." the woman said as she stomped on one of Yui's fingers hard, making the girl moan in pain.
"But remember, it was your actions that brought you to me and this moment" Yui heard a "crack" when her attacker stepped harder on her little finger. She tried to take her foot off her hand but was interrupted by a pointed kick in the mouth.
"Like I said, you dug your own grave at that time three years ago. Do you remember, or forgot why you thought that I, an insignificant, would have no more relevance in your miserable life? I think the second option is the right one. Correct? "The aggressor spoke with complete calm while Yui held her mouth, while blood seeped from her. Yui saw no other choice but to try to crawl across the floor towards the stairs that were going to go up to the street.
"Three years ago, you, a girl, and three other guys took a beggar on a subway." Yui tried to get up, but was kicked in the back by the woman.
"You beat her up, even when she was pregnant. She begged for her child, but you just laughed like it was the funniest thing on the planet. And then you stole her money and let her die. " Yui had made it to the bottom of the stairs, and when he had held on the second step, her attacker hit the crowbar on her wrist, Yui let out a cry of pain while her wrist was broken.
"And guess what…." Her attacker grabbed the back of Yui's light hair and crouched down with her knee behind her while looking into Yui's eyes.
"That shit wasn't funny at all" The attacker hit Yui's head on the stair curb and threw her back on the floor.
"Now, if you may. I would like to live my moment," the woman said as she held the crowbar in both hands and squeezed until her fingers were white from lack of blood.
The first blow, hit the top of Yui's head, the force was so strong that her head and in response, her left eye almost jumped out and her skull was deformed with the force of the attack. Yui tried to breathe, but with great difficulty. Her head was spinning and her memories were very confused.
"Try not to speak" The attacker's voice was calmer than before, almost as if she were talking to a child.
"Try not to speak" The attacker's voice was calmer than before, almost as if she were talking to a child. Yui lifted her head and looked at her attacker, who looked back and started laughing.
"Look at you, it doesn't even seem more confident. Where is that girl who was extrovert and arrogant ? " The aggressor grabbed the crowbar again with both her hands and hit Yui's jaw horizontally.
The girl fell to the floor, with a broken jaw, blood flying on the aggressor's clothes. But it didn't end there, the aggressor started to hit Yui's head. The crowbar teeth stuck to the skull bone in one of the hits, the aggressor had to step on Yui's back to remove the crowbar from her skull.
The aggressor again began to hit Yui more than once, the ground was soaked with blood and Yui's head was been deformed as the blows received. Until the attacker realized that she was just hitting the wet floor with some parts of what was the girl's head.
It was as if someone had beaten a watermelon with a piece of wood, or an axe in the middle of the floor. A half of Yui's head was still intact, with a half of the brain that didn't get beaten by the crowbar, there was an eye intact on the floor, while the scalp was mixed with blood and some pieces stuck to the crowbar.
Our protagonist Saki Yoshida, looked at Yui's eye on the floor and simply stepped on it, as if she was stepping on a cockroach. She looked around and threw the crowbar into the river beside the bottom of the bridge, stuck her hands inside her coat and climbed the stairs that Yui tried to climb towards the street.
The rain wetted her body. She went up the staircase, just stopped and looked up and for a moment after close her eyes, before continuing to walk towards her destination.
As I already have some chapters written, I will post them on every Saturday, but they will be somewhat short with excesses in some passages. And the fic goes to chapter 8 more or less, I already have chapter 5 written.